Very sad story indeed. But as Hayate said, at least they will be back together in heaven.
I liked it, but I don't see Nanoha or Fate cheating, they love each other too much to do that ^^ and by Vivid time they are happily together even if Fate is the "dad" working away (also I doubt that any of them would agree to leave their family for a whole 2 years, but that's always a plot device with lots of potential for fics).
I cried. ;_;
I guess it didn't help matters that I saw that video as well. Wasn't much of a country music lover but that song definitely got me.
Great job!
>_>;; this gives me more reason to continue that ten-page angst fic I wrote -.- maybe I should work on that now...
Snif, it's so, so sad, I just wanted to cry... (;_;)
i cried...
my heart is bleeding...
YO MADE ME CRY TT.TT
AND I DONT CRY!...much.
*sobs
If it wasn't smut, I think I would strangle you for not making her stay >=I
Alicia-san~ I forgot how much I missed your NF drabbles LOL Kinda makes me want to read more again 8D
Anyways, this was great as always, next time, make the smut longer! >=D
Can't wait for your next~
Much love!
And much smiling! So much smiling! I can't stop, it kind of hurts!
i must go and read the rest of these~
Very funny story! I like it.
I totally knew that it was going to happen like that. All praise the leader of the wolken knights. Signum! Signum! Signum!
Soooo... SuperFate? I really like this one, it just has... something.
I knew it. Fate's a Super Saiyan.
Super Special Awesome Ultra Sexy Transformation Sequence?? Really? That's creative.. I guess.. for a crack ffic, I guess it's good tho. XD
Ok, so... Fate is.. super-bat-girl, and crazy is. . . some electromaster and has some split personality? And Yuuno is some school bully? They're all in school, Fate is the.. not-popular-get-picked-on kid, who likes Nanoha.
*GASPS* So what's Crazy like when she's not electro/villain-mode? And what're they gonna do with her?
Why does Yuuno have Nanoha's necklace?! YUUNO WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO NANOHA?!
*reading peacefully when...
Btw, Smallville, much? XD
Isn't Nishizono a guy/girl type thing? XD Ah, a nice story not to take seriously, let's see, the people from chat you haven't used yet are me, Caelion, Zweihart, you, Seikou, OmegaRockCannon, Laevetian, and I think a few others.
Perish the thought at what i'd be....
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I did not expect that. Who's next? xD
He-man reference? Alicia you crazy writer you o.O
I vote, myself? I dunno i thought it'd be interesting at least.
Ironic thing was...I was drinking while doing this fic. ha ha ha...