Very sad story indeed. But as Hayate said, at least they will be back together in heaven.
I liked it, but I don't see Nanoha or Fate cheating, they love each other too much to do that ^^ and by Vivid time they are happily together even if Fate is the "dad" working away (also I doubt that any of them would agree to leave their family for a whole 2 years, but that's always a plot device with lots of potential for fics).
I cried. ;_;
I guess it didn't help matters that I saw that video as well. Wasn't much of a country music lover but that song definitely got me.
Great job!
>_>;; this gives me more reason to continue that ten-page angst fic I wrote -.- maybe I should work on that now...
Snif, it's so, so sad, I just wanted to cry... (;_;)
i cried...
my heart is bleeding...
YO MADE ME CRY TT.TT
AND I DONT CRY!...much.
*sobs
My latest drabble story can be found here. It is the continuation...or rather flip side of A One Knight Stand. Done via request once again~ enjoy.
Listing Primary Directives:
1) SERVE THE PUBLIC TRUST
2) PROTECT THE INNOCENT
3) UPHOLD THE LAW...
"How are you feeling?" A woman's voice came from nowhere "You will feel very groggy for a while" it continued
A young girl lay on what appeared to be a table, her body wrapped in a white sheet.
"Can you open your eyes?" the voice asked
The girl tried but found it difficult. She put more effort into it but the results were the same.
"Its ok, take your time" the voice continued
The girl calmed herself down and let her eyes open slowly on their own instead of forcing it like she previously had done. Very soon, clear red eyes began to focus and strain to process the sudden rush of information to the brain.
"Good morning" The voice called from her left "How are you feeling?"
The girl could only shift her vision over slightly to try and put a face towards the voice
"Do you remember your name?" the woman with long brown hair asked as she adjusted her glasses
the ruby eyes left her face and stared straight back to the ceiling as if answering "no"
"I see" the woman replied, reaching her hand over and stroking the girl's blond hair "I will gave you a name then..." she smiled down at the child. "From now on...your name...is Fate."
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If it wasn't smut, I think I would strangle you for not making her stay >=I
Alicia-san~ I forgot how much I missed your NF drabbles LOL Kinda makes me want to read more again 8D
Anyways, this was great as always, next time, make the smut longer! >=D
Can't wait for your next~
Made by Laevantein~ http://raventhesilence.deviantart.com/
Hrmm....Quick drabble for Natus
"Fate" Precia's agitated tone echoed through the hallway "go to the store and buy some soy sauce and sugar for dinner tonight." Her eyes narrowed meaning that she had absolutely provided no room for arguments "And do not return until you have it."
"H-hai!" Fate ran to her shoes and stormed out of the house. The last thing she wanted was for her mother to be angry. "Haaa~" she sighed as she reached the corner "What was she so mad about this time?" she wondered
"Faaaaate-chan~" a voice called behind her
"Ah, Nanoha" she smiled when she recognized her best friend coming over
"What are you up to?" The brunette asked
"Mom wants me to buy this particular kind of sugar that can only be bought from that store by the station."
"Come on lets go then~" Nanoha said cheerily "I was on my way to Hayate's house to borrow her notes
"That will be 56000 Yen please" the cashier at the counter stated after she scanned the item.
Fate reached into her pocket to pay but noticed something was missing
"Eh?" she reached again "Eh? Eh? Eh?!" she began to pat herself down looking for her wallet.
"Umm..." the cashier pulled the girl's attention back to reality "There are many people behind you right now so..."
"Ah! I'm sorry!" Fate bowed "I'll return this and come back later!" she grabbed the bag and raced back to the isle where she got it from. "I cant believe I was that stupid" she sighed to herself as she put it back on the shelf
"What did you do this time?" another voice reached her ears
"Onee-chan" she turned around to see her mirror image standing before her
"You pissed Precia off again didn't you" the older twin smirked
"No..." Fate sighed "but I am going to though if I return without this" she pointed at the item in question
"Uwa!" Alicia gasped "thats the expensive kind thats only sold here-and whats more thats the last bag!"
"I know..." came another sigh "I cant pay for it since I forgot to get the money from her so its probably still at the table"
"You are so screwed" the elder laughed
"Shut up and help me!" the younger whined
"Just take it" came the answer
"HA?!"
"Yeah just take it and get out of here"
"Do you have ANY idea what you are talking about?!" Fate was more shocked than anything else
"What's going on?" Nanoha made her way around the store "Ah, Alicia! Hey!"
"Ossu~" She greeted back "this idiot here forgot to bring the money for the item Mom wanted"
"Whoa! Thats expensive!" Nanoha was taken aback "I would say I'd pay for it, but I dont have nearly that much money on me.
"Yeah and this idiot here is telling me to just steal it" Fate pointed at her twin
"You got any better ideas?!"
"Yeah why dont we just-"
"Ok ok, calm down" Nanoha stepped in between them. "For starters lets get out of here" she looked around at the other shoppers looking at them "Let's go to hayate's house"
"So your mother wanted something from that store and said not to come home till you got it, but you left the money on the table and now you're sunk" Hayate restated the situation
"Nnn~" Fate nodded
"And furthermore its really expensive so we cant buy it for you..."
She nodded again
"Wait...its thatstore right?" Hayate looked at Alicia
"Yeah"
"Then just take it" Hayate answered Fate
"What is wrong with you two?!" Fate was astonished "How can you just ask me to steal that thing!"
"Fine...we'll come up with a plan ok?" Hayate massaged her head "Dont worry Fate-chan we'll get that for you if its the last thing we do!"
"See? Isnt it great we came here?" Nanoha smiled
"I hope so..." Fate looked over at Hayate and Alicia with questionable hope as the two seemed really busy drafting this 'plan' of theirs
"Ok!" Hayate announced after nearly an hour "Lets do this!"
"You have a plan?" Fate was surprised
"Yes" Alicia responded "its called 'Mission: Impossible'." a evil grin formed on her face
"This is bad..." Nanoha stated, a shiver going up her spine
"Ok everyone, syncronize watches" Hayate announced "On my mark. ... ... ... Mark!"
*beep* the sound of buttons being pressed at the same time echoed in the small alleyway
"I dont like this plan Hayate" Fate frowned "I could just go back home and tell my mom that-"
"Go ahead then" Alicia taunted "you know shes going to skin you alive if you go back now"
"Ugh" Fate resigned herself "Ok. But promise we'll pay them back as soon as we can!"
"You got it" Hayate grinned. "Go Nanoha!" she ordered
"All right!" Nanoha charged into the busy street, pretending not to see the traffic, causing vehicles to screech their tires to avoid the girl.
Nanoha jumped up and landed on her side, pretending to be hurt and causing a scene to happen outside of the store.
"Now!" Hayate commanded.
The three girls ran towards the back side of the store. Hayate went towards the main power source and opened the box while the twins went to the roof.
"Ok. The power can be shut down from the breaker box on the outside" Hayate's instructions played through everyone mind again Once Fate and Alicia are in place, I will cut off the power which will allow them to bypass the security cameras on the roof. Then once inside, Alicia will have 30 seconds to spray-paint all the camera lenses. Then all Fate has to do is drop down amidst the chaos, grab the bag, and walk out slowly
"Go!" Alicia whispered
Hayate reset the breaker as the twins began their infiltration. Alicia snuck in first and removed a ceiling tile near the corner of the store in order to pain the lens of the camera there. Fate lowered a rope and began to descend.
"20 secs..." Alicia whispered "we have to get rid of the rope and everything before the power turns back on or else they'll see you Fate. Good luck!" Alicia grabbed the rope once Fate hit the ground and continued to make her escape through the ceiling once again
Fate quickly made her way through the isles and ran towards her goal, bypassing all the confused customers that their attention divided between the power outage and the accident outside
"This is it...I cant back out anymore"she convinced herself as she grabbed the bag and put it under her jacket.
"Hey!" one of the young employees saw her "What are you doing?!"
"Shit!" Fate cursed and she ran towrads the door
"Stop thief!" the employee gave chase.
"Out of the way!" Fate barreled through the shoppers who were standing by the windows and door to observe the commotion outside.
"Stop!" the young boy chasing Fate called again.
"!!!" Nanoha noticed that Fate was being chased, so she quit pretending to be injured and tackled the boy "Run Fate-chan!" she yelled back
"Nanoha!" Fate turned around to look but her feet continued to increase the distance. After about a few minutes, she stopped due to exhaustion. "Nanoha..." she thought back on the sacrifice her comrade made "Thank you." she pulled the bag out of her jacket to inspect it before making her way home.
"I'm back..." Fate stumbled accross the hallway.
"Ah, welcome" Precia sat at the table and put down the paper. "Were you able to get it?"
"Yes..." Fate put the item down on the table and remained standing "Mom..."
"What is it?"
"I am so sorry!" she bowed her head "I-I-I I stole it from that store!" she confessed
"..."
"..."
"Thats impossible" Precia answered after several moments.
"Ha?" Fate looked up, confusion written all over her face "But I took it without paying for it and-"
"You didnt have to pay for it" the older woman raised her cup to her lips "I sent your sister to pay for it earlier since she was heading in that direction anyway."
"What?!" Fate almost screamed
"All you had to do was tell the person at the cashier that you were picking up a pre-paid item for me and they would have given it to you."
"Ha...ha..ha..haaa~" the strength faded from the younger girl's legs as she dropped to the ground "Then all this...everything we did was...was..."
"Was me having fun with you" a voice answered behind her
Fate turned around to see Alicia standing behind her, with Hayate and Nanoha a little further down.
"You! You knew!?" she couldnt even get up the energy to stand up
"Of course" Hayate chimed in "Didnt you know? That store is one of the ones your mother owns, shes been managing it for the past 4 months now."
"HA?!" She couldnt believe it. They got her.
"Maybe next time you'll pay attention to me when I am talking about important stuff at the table eh?" Precia smiled, stirring laughter from everyone else in the room.
Much love!
And much smiling! So much smiling! I can't stop, it kind of hurts!
i must go and read the rest of these~
Cardboard box is here!
Very funny story! I like it.
4 Nishi. Seriously its 4 Nishi but you guys can answer if you want....lol
Zafirra, Vita, Signum, Shamal. The Wolkenritter were originally designed to follow and obey their master. Serving under many masters, they have hundreds if not thousands of years of combat experience. Their latest master, Yagami Hayate, treated them as family as opposed to weapons as previous masters have. Their greatest advantage in battle is their family bonded teamwork but on their own, who would survive?
Zafirra Yagami, as the only male and...animal of the group, he excels in hand to hand combat. His wolf form allows him to move very quickly around the battlefield and his humanoid form allows him to attack his enemy's weakpoints while maximizing his agility. His attacks may be quick and precise but his speed and agility come with a flaw. He has to put in more energy into each attack to deal the same amount of damage as everyone else in the group, so it is crucial that he attains dominance in battle and ends it quickly or else he will end up weakening at a much faster rate.
Signum Yagami, the leader of the team, is smart, strategic, and has an incredible sense of honor. Her training and title as a Knight are not to be taken lightly. She is often stoic in nature and one can never really tell if she is serious or joking at first glance. Her weapon of choice is the Laevantine: A 2.5 ft long sword that has the ability to transform into a whipblade or even a bow when combined with its sheathe. Out of all the weapons, this one is the only one specifically designed to kill enemies. As leader, she's usually the one coming up with the plans, ensuring that the mission gets done with as little injury and collateral damage to herself and her allies. Her main weakness is also her main strength. Her devotion to her master is unparalleled to the others. When the situation turns against her and she has to decide between her code of honor and her master's order, her mind gets thrown into chaos, making her insanely weak and hesitant to attack.
Shamal Yagami, the brains of the group. She is in charge of healing, communication jamming, defensive barriers, and binding. She has devoted a lot of her time mastering her support abilities rather than her offensive skills. However, her device, the Klarer Wind, makes up for her pacifistic-like approach. It allows her to generate some of the most powerful shields and teleport its master virtually anywhere in the battlefield. She is also capable of bind opponents in place and quite possibly constricting them to death, combine that with the ability to create miniature wormholes that she can use to impale people with her hands or grab on to and absorb their linker core and she makes for one very talented knight, easily keeping up with everyone else in the group.
Vita Yagami, she is the smallest maybe the youngest of the Wolkenritter. She is often considered a tsundere and sometimes crude...in all honesty forget crude, shes borderline psycho! Sure to throw the first punch without warning, she is most certainly the most vicious of the team. As seen in A's she attacked Nanoha without warning and didnt even bother explaining anything, just kept attacking ferociously until she attained her objective. Her weapon is the Einzen hammer capable of turning into all kinds of mashing, drilling, and crushing weapons. It is easily the most destructive weapon there is. Her position in the group is the frontal assault, not one caring for strategy or tactics, preferring to just overpower her enemies through raw force. She is naturally hot headed and easily loses control and goes berzerk when things dont go her way. Because of such, she is constantly training herself and could easily be the strongest one of them all.
So. Now that we've done a small brief on the 4 of them...the question comes up. If the 4 of them were to combat each other in a free for all, who would win...and why?
Ok here it is...
Vita: IIIII IIII
Signum: IIIII I
Shamal: IIII
Zafira: IIIII I
Hayate: II
Vivio: IIIII
I have no idea where the last 2 came from...but people threw them in there so eh :p
Top comments!
"'Borderline Psycho'? You mean 'Totally Psycho'! Vita would win this just because of her psychoism. She'll be the new M. Bison and beat everyone with her...psycho crusher *shot*" - Katie
"Shamal would if she could sneak up on them and (Shang Sung them) steal their (souls) linker cores" - Nishi
"Man, Vita would just whoop everyone's ass. Just change the hammer into gigant form and whack everyone when they're together" - Yukito
"Zaffy would win if he just let everyone fight it out first and then used his speed and stuff to finish people off, that and I like him *huggles zaffy pillow*" - Sayori
"Signum definitely. Shes got the most versatile weapon!" - Kokoro
There is a reason Signum is the leader of the group. Not for strength, not for speed, but for strategy. She understands the strengths and weaknesses of all the other members of the group so at the start of the battle, she would immidiately engage Shamal, leaving Vita and Zafirra to engage each other. Shamal's defensive capabilities will be outdone by Signum's diverse arsenal of weapons (sword, bow, whip).
On the other side of things, Zaffira's speed would be more than a match for Vita's full powered blows, causing the midget to get frustrated and go berzerk. The downside is that her durability as a front line unit makes her incredibly powerful making her body more than a match for zafirra's endurance. It would only be a matter of time before the dog got sent to his doggy house.
So by the time the last battle started, Signum would be in totally better shape than the moderately damaged Vita. Although Vita's power still far surpasses Signum's at this point, Signum's ability to think clearly vs Vita's all overriding directive to just smash everything will end up winning the match.
The winner would be Signum.
I totally knew that it was going to happen like that. All praise the leader of the wolken knights. Signum! Signum! Signum!
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Soooo... SuperFate? I really like this one, it just has... something.
I knew it. Fate's a Super Saiyan.
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Super Special Awesome Ultra Sexy Transformation Sequence?? Really? That's creative.. I guess.. for a crack ffic, I guess it's good tho. XD
Ok, so... Fate is.. super-bat-girl, and crazy is. . . some electromaster and has some split personality? And Yuuno is some school bully? They're all in school, Fate is the.. not-popular-get-picked-on kid, who likes Nanoha.
*GASPS* So what's Crazy like when she's not electro/villain-mode? And what're they gonna do with her?
Why does Yuuno have Nanoha's necklace?! YUUNO WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO NANOHA?!
*reading peacefully when...
Btw, Smallville, much? XD
Isn't Nishizono a guy/girl type thing? XD Ah, a nice story not to take seriously, let's see, the people from chat you haven't used yet are me, Caelion, Zweihart, you, Seikou, OmegaRockCannon, Laevetian, and I think a few others.
Perish the thought at what i'd be....
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I did not expect that. Who's next? xD
He-man reference? Alicia you crazy writer you o.O
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I vote, myself? I dunno i thought it'd be interesting at least.
Ironic thing was...I was drinking while doing this fic. ha ha ha...