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A Dream. (NanoFate Fic. WARNING: Contains sexual references, rape, etc... in the dream sequence.)

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This is a fanfic about Nanoha having a particular dream through the eyes of someone else.
Her dream is primarily based on an obscure dream I had last night, so I'm going to do what I can to describe the events as vividly as possible.

Wish me luck.

I must warn you, though, that the dream has references to sex, rape, and mindscrew-ishness.
I must also warn you, an OC appears.

And yes, I did actually dream this last night. The second of three dreams.

Spoiler: Chapter 1. The Dream.
Chapter 1. The Dream

Nanoha's POV:

I see my own face... Myself, an adult, in uniform, walking alongside Fate. We were heading into a supermarket on Mid-Childa. As we walked to the center, there was a strange box. It was white, and just seemed to have no openings. I had this feeling something was strange about it. I looked to Fate's right leg and saw a cut there, almost fresh, and quite deep, somewhat hidden by the skirt. I smiled at her and asked her, "Are you alright? You have a cut. there." I pointed to her right leg, near the hem of the skirt on her uniform. She laughed and said to me, "Oh, it's nothing. I've played around a bit with a former lover."

From here I see myself go into shock. Images flashed into my mind, rapidly, of a face pale and creamy, with warm, playful eyes and a single ponytail to the right side, a ribon tying it together. Of Fate offering her nipple to someone. Of a metal string wrapped around her right leg, yet only cutting deeply around the outer part of her right leg. The metal drop. Flashes of lights. All repetitive in a cycle for a few moments. These images fade.

I snap back to myself and try to laugh those words away, and then I see someone there... Someone looking at me... Someone watching us. It was as though I was seeing this from that someone's eyes. And not my own. It was eerie.

Later on after further talk, she told me more about a certain moment of her past... Back in middle school...

In my mind I saw an image... a strange image... First of young Fate, struggling and crying, her body tensing up, and she was panicking! A womb-shape, of pink. It appeared to have inside an aquatic deep-blue background, with in the lower left corner of my vision I saw thirteen purple spheres that turned pink towards a central point during the lighting. They were organized with two at the top, then three below it, then four, then four, touching the bottom, and all spheres linked together, jutting out diagonally from where it was set. To the right on the supposed 'ground was a set of aquatic vegetation, resembling cartoony seaweed. In the top-left corner was some smaller aquatic vegetation hanging downwards a slight, and to the top right corner, even more miniscule green aquatic vegetation, though with two open lillies hanging upside-down, just as miniscule as the vegetation. From my right, I saw a spiral of green and purple intertwined, moving across to the left, before disappearing. Through the opening at the top, entering the womb-shape, I saw... something red... round... pushing inward, and then later releasing a white fluid. Suddenly, it went black, and I saw an image of a nude girl, looking as Alicia had when she was in stasis. Yet when her eyes opened, they were green.
I saw this as Fate explained to me the origin of the girl. She had been raped when she was younger, and hid it from me through a magic-generated illusion. She was ashamed to have hid this from me. Following us was a girl, looking much like Alicia had, dressed in a school uniform I had once seen Fate wear when I was only nine. That nostalgic uniform. In the girl's hair were green ribbons, tied in the form of bows, like that I had seen when I first met Fate. The girl's eyes were green, as I had seen in my mind. She smiled at me and said "Hello."

And a sudden figure swept in, a vague blur. A shadow, transparent and bright. A moving paradox of light and dark that confused the eyes. I saw Fate go into shock and fear. A figure from her memories.

It was then that the figure shouted, and grasped the girl. And he quickly moved into the white box from earlier. I hear metal chains clashing together, then hitting the floor. Then I hear metal cuffs clanking together, shut, and the screams of the poor girl trapped inside the box. I couldn't move. This weird feeling...

A young male voice told us, "Nanoha, break the box!" I didn't move... The voice came from the source of the eyes that looked upon us the whole time.

He looked to Fate and told her, "Fate! Raise Bardiche, and strike at it!"

We just stood there. He then called for Hayate. Then Hayate came, and blew an opening through the roof, though sensing something about the box, she did nothing. She shot another burst from the magic orange set of six circles surrounding a central circle before her, and a sound much like that of blasters from a 70's American cartoon had sounded. "Blurgroooor, blu-gloooor", it sounded like. Hayate quickly left through the exit she had made through the blast of orange light.

The male sighed and seemed to grunt in frustration. He lifted his magic device, and at the tip, a metal spike spun forward and revealed it self to be a hollow cone, and it placed itself this way near the tip. It expanded, and the green sphere of the artificial intelligence had shown. I heard a familiar chime, and beneath him stretched out a circle of magic properties of green, with familiar greek lettering upon the outer edges. "Supreme... Buster!" exclaimed the male. Through his eyes I saw a ring of blue magic surround the tip, and then from it fired a familiar blue beam. It pierced the box, and broke it. The figure that was there seemed to dissolve, but the girl that was inside was wearing torn clothes. Her lower body was exposed to the world.

The beam seemed to resemble what I had seen before. It resembled Subaru's magic technique she used with "Mach Calibre" to fire an attack she named after my "Divine Buster." The limited control and range surprised me.

Her eyes opened, and her body seemed unscathed, despite the shredding of her clothes. I looked to the male and shouted at him, "WHO ARE YOU? WHAT WERE YOU THINKING?" He grew angrier and took a moment to sigh, and calm down. I was seeing my own face shout forward before my eyes. An intimidating sight.

He spoke. "Magic isn't as destructive to humans... I also added a thin magic barrier to shield her from the damage of the machine trying to crush her." The voice... It seemed familiar with the box, and with magic. I looked through that boy's eyes through this entire time, and I saw his reflection through my angry, sad eyes. I hugged Fate in the shock, and the boy stepped backward. I saw a tunnel of clouds, bright orange in color. And then I saw blackness.

And I wake up.

In case some may accuse me of taking the characters out of character and not having them do anything, it's a dream. It seems strange that they wouldn't do anything. As I was dreaming this, I recognized that Fate would be likely to, say, use Bardiche and unleash "Scythe Form" and try to crack open the box, or Nanoha would try to crack it open with a few shooters for accuracy. (It would be too dangerous for her to just fully blast the heck out of it. She may get frustrated, and be Cap'n Overkill, but she does work to save lives.)

Generally, this does present a character who's skilled in magic, but is pretty much unfocused in anything else...
He won't really appear much in the fanfic, and I'm sorry for bringing him in here. It doesn't seem like NanoFate just yet, but... the dream sequence was surreal to me upon my experience, and I figured if Nanoha had the same dream, it would present a chance for character development, and perhaps reveal a bit more on some of the deeper aspects of her thinking.

Again, this is just intended as a hook. The next chapter I'll work on after some time passes.

I'll give you a preview of Chapter 2.

"And then I wake up.

I quickly rise from my bed, and look down to my hands. I see through my own eyes now. I see myself wearing golden-silk pajamas. I wasn't wearing this before yesterday when I fell asleep. I thought. I pinched myself, and sure enough, I was really awake this time. I sniffed the air and it contained a certain... aroma... Maple Syrup."

EDIT: Chapter 2 is up. Skip Chapter 1 if you don't like heterosexual references, but Chapter 1 initially is the whole start of the entire plot. Later chapters would be even more confusing, if the dream isn't read.

'Tis the will of all things good... to annialate all that oppose NanoFate.(Well, liberate them into our fandom only by force).. from the power (or threat of use of) of the RMZ4 space laser, Ragnarok.

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Sorry im a slow reader, its good. ^^

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>.< confusion

I want to befriend you :D

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Now I'll begin on Chapter Two.

Hope you enjoy!

Spoiler: Chapter Two: Reality.
Chapter Two: Reality

And then I wake up.

I quickly rise from my bed, and look down to my hands. I see through my own eyes now. I see myself wearing golden-silk pajamas. I wasn't wearing this before yesterday when I fell asleep! I thought. I pinched myself, and sure enough, I was really awake this time. I sniffed the air and it contained a certain... aroma... Maple Syrup. I stretch and step out of bed, and I slip on a pair of fuzzy bunny slippers. I walk forward and through the door of the bedroom, and walk down the hall, and turn to enter the kitchen. I then look to see... Lindy Harlaown, my kind and loving mother-in-law. She's holding a frying pan, and wearing a yellow apron. She's making... pancakes?

"Hi, Nanoha-chan. It's been a while, hasn't it?" she asks.
I nod. I look over to see Fate standing beside Vivio, Erio, and Caro at the table. Vivio's eyes seem to light up when she sees me look to her, and she exclaims, "Nanoha-mama! Nanoha-mama! Good morning!" She has some maple syrup hanging down from the right corner of her mouth. How cute, I thought, upon seeing Vivio's mouth a little dirty. And so I walked up to her and did as a mother does; I picked up a napkin and wiped the maple syrup from her mouth. Caro and Erio giggled when I did this.
"Mama~, That's so embarassing! Not in front of Lindy-Obaa-chan!" Vivio cried.
I could look to see Fate and Lindy laughing, and then my wife placed a hand on my shoulder. "Good morning, Nanoha. I didn't want to disturb you so much, but you were so cute when you were sleeping, so I had to dress you up a bit. I couldn't let Lindy seeing you roam around half-naked." she joked. "Heh. Oh, and surprise! I'm back from my mission!"
I nodded. "I had a strange dream..." I said.
Fate looked to me with interest, and concern. "What was it?" my wife asked to me.
"O-oh, it's nothing..." I insisted, trying to dismiss the subject. "We can talk about it later."
She nodded. "It's okay. I'll listen, when you're comfortable to talk about it."
I turn back to see Lindy smiling at me, and holding up to me a plate with a stack of four pancakes. "You hungry?" she asks to me.
"Oh, sure..." I said. I took the pancakes and sat at the table.
I took a fork and a knife, and slowly placed a small bite of pancake into my mouth. Fate looks at me and gives out a sigh. "Is something wrong, Nanoha? You seem a little quiet this morning. Normally you're more... playful... at this time."
I sighed, and looked away. I couldn't stand to look at her concerned face, yet she was too pretty to not look... and I didn't want to worry her even more. "Oh, i-it's fine!" I said to her, feigning a smile. I looked to the pancakes, and tried to rush in gulping down. Fate quickly slipped a glass of milk close beside me, and I reached for it, and gulped it down as quickly as I could.
"What's the ru-" my wife tried to ask to me, before I interrupted her. "Why's Lindy here today?" I asked.
Vivio, Erio, and Caro all beam at me. "She's going to take us aboard the Asura today, to show us where you used to stand and prepare for missions!" exclamed the three.
"That's nice!" I said.
Lindy smiles. "I thought I would cook for you. You were out like a light."
"Oh?" I asked.
"Yes, you were quite tired!" she says.
Fate leans in to kiss my cheek, and I pulled back to evade.
"No need to worry about affection in front of us, dear." Lindy teases, "It's all right, you know?"
"Y-yeah." I gulped and blushed. "R-right, okay." I quickly pressed my lips up against Fate's and then tugged her over to the couch in the next room, as I've done a few times before. Soon I opened my mouth and licked her lips, and she invited me in. We fell together atop the couch, and Lindy gives a laugh. "Well, it's time to go, you three. These two are getting a little H." she teases.
"Yes, Lindy-obaa-chan" the three say, each at a different time. They follow Lindy out the door and Vivio locks it.
When I pull up for air, Fate's face seems to shine a deep red, and she asks me, "W-why so rough, in front of everyone? This isn't like you!"
I sigh and rest my head on her chest, and then I start to shed a few tears from my eyes. I look up to her and say, "We need to talk..."

I hope this is better and easier to read than the first chapter. This should set the ball rolling on the plot. I noticed that not too many fanfics include Lindy as a part of certain events, so I thought I'd bring her in. And as for Arf, well, she's... uuuh, I didn't know where to include her just yet. Let's assume she was under the table, stealing a few pancakes from the children. XD

'Tis the will of all things good... to annialate all that oppose NanoFate.(Well, liberate them into our fandom only by force).. from the power (or threat of use of) of the RMZ4 space laser, Ragnarok.

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ok...what a weird starting.. all I could say was the dream was a messed up and and its freaks Nanoha (me too actually) and I cant say more till I read more then.. really really twisted dream urgh... but update soon, ne ^^

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That's a cute family time, and it seems Nanoha has been shaken up a bit by her dream.

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The dream initially confused me too, since it pretty much went against all my understanding of the canon. Thanks for the comments.

Sadly, I couldn't really do a preview of the next chapter, because it would basically spoil it. (I think I'm going to do more 'next chapter previews.' It serves as a memory aid to what my general plot direction may be heading for the story, and it also saves time in determining what to write for the next chapter.)

I'll write the next chapter some time soon.

'Tis the will of all things good... to annialate all that oppose NanoFate.(Well, liberate them into our fandom only by force).. from the power (or threat of use of) of the RMZ4 space laser, Ragnarok.

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Cute family moments indeed. I hope that nothing bad happened to Fate =\

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Doctor Who Crossover Omake!

Simply because I feel like teasing the readers a bit, I've decided to create a crossover omake to keep you all waiting for the next chapter, and give you something to read. You might not quite get what's going on unless you've seen Doctor Who.

Spoiler: A Dream... DW Crossover Omake

I am seated in a chair, and I look forward at a pale-skinned man with cockamamie hair and a plain brown coat, a bowtie over his buttoned shirt, and plain dark-navy-blue jeans. He has an odd smile on his face, and he lifts up a strange tubular tool with three claws and a green light at the tip. "Click. Ririririririririririririri! Click." The sound I hear as he runs the green light over my eyes. I hear another faint hum emmanating from this tool. "It appears that this kid behind me" he points with his thumb, "tried to destroyed a universe he feared he created through a dream. Though, it appears this universe is trying to escape and take refuge in... your... mind..." he says. "Oh, don't worry. You'll be all right. Just a side-effect of a time shockwave released from all of time and space closing in on itself and collapsing. I still don't get how that kid there managed to bypass the Void. It's not even supposed to be possible.... Then again, he brought me and my TARDIS here."

He then goes on on rambling about other things, I know not what. The man previously identified himself as "The Doctor" and explained that his tool was called the "Sonic Screwdriver." I didn't show much disbelief when he explained to me that his little blue box could travel through all of space and time in an instant, nor did I show much surprise at his confusion over Mid-Childean magic. I was surprised, however, that this 'traveler' had been accompanied by a brown-haired man in a tuxedo and a red-head woman in a wedding gown.

My wife stares malevolently at the man with eyes that would burn through his coat and his shirt, and through his back at well. She's a bit skeptical at the thought of this man having any clue as to what could be going on here. A teenager seems to look forward, with brown hair, blue eyes, a long-sleeved black shirt, and brown shorts. It seemed rather strange that he was wearing this sort of attire. He didn't seem to awkward about it, though. Yet when I looked to his right hand, the teenager's device, I noticed it was familiar.

"I still have no idea why he's been travelling through universes, or why he thought it would be appropriate for him to destroy an entire universe not too long after I strictly rebooted a different one!" exclaims the man with the sonic screwdriver. "What were you thinking?" he asks as he turns to face the kid behind him.

"I was simply correcting an error and getting rid of something that shouldn't exist." speaks the teen. "Again, as I've said before, Doctor, there are more dimensions to the universe than just length, width, depth, time, and space! Magic is a way of channeling into the upper dimensions and pulling their effects to deliberately effect the lower ones, which is specifically what the upper dimensions were designed to do! The lower dimensions have partial influence over the upper ones, though the upper dimensions have complete influence over the lower dimensions. The laws of physics change when you look at the upper dimensions, and those changes directly effect the dimensions we stand in."

"Shut up!" exclaims The Doctor. "How am I supposed to accept such an explanation from a human being who is often forgetful, ignorant, and oftentimes is completely clueless?" He sighs.

"Rule number one." begins the teen. "NEVER tell me to shut up. And two... uuuh... what?"

The man in the tux looks to The Doctor with a strange look. "Who are you to tell him one thing when you do that too?" he asks. I notice that the red-haired girl covers her mouth with her left hand, trying to hide the giggling.

"Rory, what are you talking about, and what's so funny that you have to try and hide your laughter, Misses Pond?" The supposed "doctor" here is quite clueless here. From what I've seen, he's quite intelligent, but... he seems a little... off... in some ways. I sigh and get up out of my chair, and look to Fate. "How about we go out for something to drink, to get away from the madness here?" I asked.

Fate seems to grin a little, and she nods to me. We take one another by the hand, and I give her a soft peck on the cheek. And then I drag her along quickly to the nearest soda shop.

And then behind us, we hear loud shouting and bickering among the four.

I did what I could to keep the characters, well, in-character, for this Omake. It doesn't really happen, and it never really serves a purpose, other than hopefully for some amusement until I write the next chapter. If you're not a fan of the 11th Doctor, or of Doctor Who in general, I suggest you steer clear of this. Overall, don't take this too seriously, since it's meant to be funny. No real plot development, but I felt maybe squeezing in a little lightheartedness would help ease the tension before I start working on the next one.

'Tis the will of all things good... to annialate all that oppose NanoFate.(Well, liberate them into our fandom only by force).. from the power (or threat of use of) of the RMZ4 space laser, Ragnarok.

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Unfortunately, I'm not familiar with doctor who... but I'll be looking forward to the next installment of the main series ^^

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It's okay, and Gamnit! I spoiled the season finale of the most recent season of New Doctor Who!

Well, I'll give you a hint: The teenager wearing a long-sleeved black shirt and brown shorts, plus holding a magic device, he's not from the series. He's the OC.

He's not too significant to the plot, though generally he has a role in it.

'Tis the will of all things good... to annialate all that oppose NanoFate.(Well, liberate them into our fandom only by force).. from the power (or threat of use of) of the RMZ4 space laser, Ragnarok.

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I'm totally confused.@_@

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I had crazy-n-weird-but-fun-in-it's-own-way dreams almost every night..maybe I should start writing my own fics based on those dreams too...niway, keep goin' with ur work megaman..^_^

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Okay then...

Spoiler: Chapter 3: Retelling the Nightmare.
I looked to Fate, and she frowns at me. "What are we to talk about?" she asks.

"Last night, I had a nightmare." I replied.

"A nightmare? What about?"

I gave a sigh and I looked up at her. I retold the dream at her, and the look on her face changed from sadness to surprise and shock. When I finished, she pulls me up and hugs me. "It is awful strange... Mind if we try talk about it?" she asks, "I've noticed some things..."

I nod to her and listen. "Well, first, it seems that the cut on my thigh... Remember when some American thugs started causing a bit of trouble at school? We were early teenagers, and we carefully concealed our magic on Earth as we caught them. One of them cut my leg, but I recall you sent one of your attacks at him that knocked his knife to the ground, and then we went around to catch the others." she tells me.

I nodded.

"And, you seemed jealous and worried with visions in your head? By the description, the woman in the images is you..." she explains. "Are you afraid that I'll leave you?"

I shook my head, and then she gives me a glance that seemed to mean, "Honestly?" Then I shook my head. "Okay, a little."

"See? And... you're worried I get hurt, aren't you?" she asks me.

I nodded again. "Yes..."

"Um, I never was pregnant then... Were you afraid I'd get pregnant?" my wife asks me.

"Um, maybe a little..." I reply. "Th-though, that it wouldn't be us, and magic..."

She then grins and teasingly asks me, "Then, do you want a child?" I blush and look away. "W-we already have three, plus Arf sometimes roams around appearing to be as old as we used to be when we first met..."

I could almost imagine Arf under the table, blushing in her puppy form.

"That's not thet point." she teases.

"O-okay, maybe another..."

She laughs. "Well, glad we could talk it over..."

I nodded. "I have this strange image in my head, like we need to head out somewhere... Another explanation for the dream."

"Eh?" asked Fate. "What do you mean?"

"Telepathy, maybe?"

We get up and head to the bedroom, and we shower together. We washed each-other's hair and we soaped along eahc-other's bodies, we washed each-other's backs, we dried each-other off, and we got dressed for the day. I gave her a kiss and we headed out the door, and locked it behind us.

"I have a mission to go to a few days from now, and I'll be absent for about a month. You sure you'll be okay?" Fate asks me.

I heard someone crawl up from under the table, and then I heard her speak.

"Fate, D-Don't worry. I-I'll look after her for you." The voice belongs to Arf.

My wife and I laugh a bit and turn around to look to Arf. "That would be great. Thanks, Arf. Make sure she's well, okay?"

Arf nods. A soft blush can be seen on her face. "A-Anything for you, Fate, Nanoha."

We laugh some more and then we head to the door. "Keep an eye on the house for us, okay?" I asked.

Arf nods and lets out a fox-like yip. "Yes. Nanoha!" She salutes me.

Fate and I step out the door, and lock it.

Notes: Figured that a tie-in to the Omake would be a little something. Well, seems everything is resolved, mostly, and I might throw in a coffee-date chapter, if I feel like it. Nanoha talked things over with Fate, and now perhaps has more closure. Short, yeah, but, again, I might throw in a coffee-date chapter later on.

Wow, this was short.

'Tis the will of all things good... to annialate all that oppose NanoFate.(Well, liberate them into our fandom only by force).. from the power (or threat of use of) of the RMZ4 space laser, Ragnarok.