ok the story is moving pretty fast now ...
this afternoon it was alicia appearance and now its alicia meeting up with fate...
cool...
Ooooh interesting meeting. So I take it everyone thought she was Fate and let her though if she manged to get all the way to Yuuno's research lab "undetected". Either that or she just used some ninja-magic we dont know about to get there. Nice meeting though hehe
Hoho ! the meeting beetwen Fate and Alicia should be very interesting.
Also I'm curious as to why Real!Nanoha was nervous.
Wow, looking forward to the next chapter, so we all can see the meeting *.*
The meeting beetwen Fate and Alicia goes surprisingly well, and I don't think Alicia is a bad person, maybe... (^^)
I wonder how Alt!Nanoha will react to Alicia and vice-versa.
Hehehe...all the things I can and probably should say. But all that would take up an entire page. So I will just say "Well done" *grins*
AltNanoha and Alicia pairing... I like it!!!! Loved the chapters!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for the updates Satashi, I like how the fic is progressing, and Alicia looks like a nice character. At this moment she seems like the best person to be by Nanoha's side, I think that can work well, but personally I would prefer if this Alicia was in fact the Fate from this world, which probably is still an open possibility.
I...love...this...part! XD
I wonder if Alt!Alicia is Alt!Fate?
At this moment she seems like the best person to be by Nanoha's side, I think that can work well,
Wow! Are you really Haru?
but personally I would prefer if this Alicia was in fact the Fate from this world
Nope! You still here! XDDD
Just to say, I don't want to see Nanoha falling in love with someone else but Fate. XD
Like Nanoha said "even if there is an Alicia in this world. Fate-chan is Fate-chan, no matter what."
They looked exactly the same but Alicia is not Fate.
I was hoping for something about Fate were in fact a clone of that Fate she thinks to be... @.@ (yeah, my imagination loves me *o*)
Afer giving us some AltNanohaxFate I can't be helped but want this AltNanoha to be with this Fate. :3
Haru wrote:At this moment she seems like the best person to be by Nanoha's side, I think that can work well,
Wow! Are you really Haru?Haru wrote:but personally I would prefer if this Alicia was in fact the Fate from this world
Nope! You still here! XDDD
lol XDDD
Just to say, I don't want to see Nanoha falling in love with someone else but Fate. XD
Like Nanoha said "even if there is an Alicia in this world. Fate-chan is Fate-chan, no matter what."
They looked exactly the same but Alicia is not Fate.I was hoping for something about Fate were in fact a clone of that Fate she thinks to be... @.@ (yeah, my imagination loves me *o*)
Afer giving us some AltNanohaxFate I can't be helped but want this AltNanoha to be with this Fate. :3
You have a point there. Even though my Alt!NanohaxFate lifeboat seems to be gaining a lot of water, I'm actually considering jumping on a Alt!NanohaxAlt!Alicia ship. But the next few parts (chapters) would ultimately decide whether I drown, jump on a new Alt!NanohaxFate ship, or a Alt!NanohaxAlt!Alicia ship. Satashi now determines whether I live or not. XD
I stay with my lovely Alt!NanohaxFate lifeboat no matter what! XD
*trying to get water out of the lifeboat with a bucket* XP
Forgot to say that I also hope for a new version of my boat.^^
Satashi now determines whether I live or not. XD
Hehe like Alavon said, now Satashi you have my virtual life in your hands! XDDD
Anyways I really love your story, it's a great idea, you have a lot of way to go and we can imagine everything.
Wow, I only say one thing: the next part, pleaaaase! xD
Oohh, I sense some drama incoming, also Alt!Nanoha seems to be to Alicia's taste. :3
the next part, pleaaaase!
Seconded!
The bad thing about short, but fast updates is that you need to wait for the next part more often. Anyway, I hope that Alicia doesn't mess everything up with Vivio and that imminently she figures out the truth about Fate.
Well, Alicia really seems to be a nice person, albeit a little rude, somehow I think alt!Nanoha will have a hard time dealing with her. :3
And I support AliciaxAlt!Nanoha. :3
Alicia is pretty funny hahaha
Fate blushing all the time is so cute! *.*
love it!!! update soon!!!!
No, no Satashi!
The only lemon fic I would love to see would be between alternative Nanoha + real Fate + real Nanoha, and maybe alternative Alicia too could join them, but then we would have a foursome.
Imagine double teasing, double blushing, double pleasure, double adorable pouting...
Still I doubt Fate would live though such excitement and embarassment; such double dose would could be lethal ^^
And I wonder if such universe where two Nanohas would exist would not blow up.
Maybe near the end of this AlternativeS story real Nanoha would travel through this dimensional rift to save her Fate-chan, then she would meet her alternative self, and they would talk about the best methods of Fate-chan teasing.
Still if you planning to put real Nanoha somewhere in this story or not, then a good yuri lemon between these four aNxFxN+aA would be a dream come true.
-From humble follower and a fan who read all your NxF fics and loved all of them.
Lemon? I'm all for lemons... "when the script justifies it" XD
Lawful/Evil...Lawful/Evil indeed... *high fives Satashi*
Edit: Like the guys on AS said "Do you even have to ask?" lol
who WOULDN'T be interested ;)
Seems like Fate and Nanoha have a hard time because of Alicia.XD
Oh gosh she made me laugh a lot. X3
Chapter 6 is SO full of win, that mere words aren't sufficient to express my awe. I simply loved how Fate and Alicia's first encounter played out. Satashi-sama not only had the most intriguing setup for the situation, but she delivered "the goods" with the perfect blend of tenderness, humour, conversational exchange, and emotional undertone. My eager anticipation was well rewarded <333
The episode in Nanoha A's where Fate lived a short period in the "perfect world" the Book of Darkness created for her was hands-down my favorite episode of that season. But you know what? To me, this chapter is even more AWSOME than that! Oh I so wish I could watch an animated version of this chapter... *running back to the Infinity Library* now where's that book of darkness when you really need it XD
If I had to speculate, I would guess that Alicia-chan will ultimately side with the "good guys" in the end; however, I kinda doubt if we've seen the last of (and I borrow a term from the Aria cast interview) "kurai-cia" yet -- or "Evil-icia" in English.
Well, If you suddenly heard you had a twin sister/clone from Project F, wouldn't you immediately go looking for them? :3