hm... am i the only one questioning why is fate blushing and stuff ?
i mean she did say she is loyal to her "Nanoha".
I wonder if you are going to make the ending just like what i think it would be after reading chapter 6. Well just have to wait and see, as usual nice fic. :3
*hugs, glomps, squeeze, ect..*
XD
YOU'RE THE BEST!!!!!!
A new update of Alternates? Yay!!!
*non-sexual glomps
Now our poor Nanoha is going to have an even harder time with Fate... this is going to be fun xD
I like how you're portraying Fate's loyalty to her Nanoha's ^^
Oh my Gosh, you're so awesome!!
This is another excellent update, as usual :) I feel really sad for Nanoha's rejection, even though I understand Fate's reason for it. I've grown to really love this "Alt!Nanoha". While I don't know how things will unfold... but I have faith that she will find happiness in the end ^^
I think it was for the greater good Fate rejected Alt!Nanoha, Fate already has her family waiting for her in her world, and seeing Fate being unfaithful to Real!Nanoha would sadden me greatly.
And I can't help but think, that Alicia is in fact Alt!Fate.
Excellent chapter !
Great chapter as usual :)
This is one of my favourite fics here.
I can't picture so far Alt!Alicia going with Alt!Nanoha, but maybe next chapters will make me like her more or maybe not.
I wonder if there will be chapter told from real Nanoha perspective?
Somehow I would want to learn what Fate's real family and friends do in time Fate gone missing.
I'm sure Alt!Nanoha will find her special person one day.
Nice little chapter, as usual. :3
Like some people here, I think it could be a good idea to see what happen to Real!Nanoha and Real!Vivio while Fate is missing.
Great! I'm glad they kissed and made up XD
Poor Alt!Nanoha... she goes crazy with without a Fate for herself =/ Well, maybe from now things will happen with "Alicia".
As someone said earlier, it would be nice to have a chapter about what is happening with Nanoha and Vivio in the canon!dimension.
I'm glad Alicia has learned the whole story from Fate now. Maybe she'll be able to make Nanoha feel better? ^///^
Nice chapter Satashi, thanks for updating.
Now that Alicia knows Fate's story, it should be her turn to tell us her past, I feel quite intrigued about her character. Anyway, I don't know, but I think that "flashback" smells a bit like a plot device!
Nice update, thanks !
Now, I'm curious to learn more about Alicia, she's a quite mysterious character.
Thanks for the update ^^.
I´m agree with the others, I want to know more about Alicia, she is a little misterius. And these flashback... hm, really intriguing.
So that's what happened! Very intriguing scenario... and nice explanation. I like it ^^
Great update, thanks ^^. Everything starts to fit, and, as Yuuno sais, it is a good explanation :)
And the plot thickens!
Thanks for the dual update Satashi~
Thanks for the update, now we know how Fate end up in the alternate world, and how she can return home to her family.
This story certanily is AWESOME!!! your writing is beyond commendable! I just finshed reading all the way from the first chapter to your last update =) my eyes had been focusing on the screen, so I did not notice at all that 2 hours had passed already lol.
Thank you so much for this great story and I am looking forword to your next update. ^_^
this is so awesome!! i can't believe i didn't read it sooner!!! what will happen to nanoha now...when fate leaves. aahhh
Awesome awesome story so far! A very interesting plot compared to alot of other fics, and it's keeping me on the edge of my seat after each chapter.
Thanks for the update, now we know how Fate end up in the alternate world, and how she can return home to her family.
Let's just hope that whatever it was that knocked Fate out didn't also destroy the life pod she was trying to protect. We can only hope for the best for our beloved Fate-chan!!
Thanks for the update, Satashi.
"Get Backers" was the first thing I thought when we knew about Alicia's job.
(6-6)
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“I can’t wait to take a nice hot bath,” Alicia spoke while walking next to her sister. “After a long day of running around with you, I could sue some, rest and relaxation.”
“The bath here is really large,” Fate told her contently. “There are shower stalls, but also a Japanese style bath. Hayate grew up in Japan and she had a say in how her base was built.”
“Japanese style?” Alicia blinked. “What do you mean?”
Fate smiled at her. “You’ll see. Here’s the showers.”
“What are we going to change into?” Alicia pondered while looking around at the stalls and then the huge soaking area. “Oh wow.”
“I forgot clothes,” the older sister realized. “Here, go ahead and get clean and soak, I’ll run get us something to change into.”
“Okay,” Alicia watched Fate jog off a moment before going into the bathhouse section. Clothes were stripped down and placed in a small cubical section for them, then she walked to the bath area first, grinning as she saw a wheelchair not far from a soaking Nanoha. “Well hello there.”
Nanoha jumped lightly, turning to look at Alicia. “Fate-chan, you startled me.”
“… I’m sorry,” Alicia smirked, walking the rest of the way to the girl. “Enjoying your bath?”
“Yes, it was a stressful day.” Nanoha sighed out and sank down lower into the water, bringing the towel over her breasts up a little more.
“Don’t hide,” Alicia teased her, sitting down on the side of the large tub so only her feet were in the water. “I want to enjoy your lovely body.”
“Fa-Fate-chan!?” Nanoha blushed hard. “Don’t say things like that.”
“It’s okay; there isn’t anyone else here right now…” Alicia scooted closer to Nanoha and leaned forward a bit. “Know what I would really like to help me relax after today?”
“Wha…what?” Nanoha looked at her skeptically.
“Just you,” Alicia told her softly, one hand going to touch Nanoha’s cheek. “Tonight… let’s be intimate, okay? Nothing better to melt away the stress of the day than being with the one you love, ne?”
“Ah...I…” Nanoha was spared having to answer when Alicia stood up. “Fate-chan?”
“I’m going to clean up, Alicia-oneechan will be here soon as well.” With that, she walked from the bath area and to the shower stalls just as Fate came into the room. “Hey, get some clothes?”
“I did,” Fate answered simply. “Decided to wait on me?”
“Mm, I’ll do your hair.” Alicia grinned, pushing Fate to the stalls.
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“Nanoha,” Fate’s word made the girl look over at her from her spot on the bed. “You seem a little distant.” The blonde walked over to her. “Is it because Alicia is staying at the base? Hayate has my room under surveillance, and Vivio is staying with her tonight with all of her guardians playing bodyguard. There’s no way she’ll be in danger.”
“No, it’s not that… well not entirely.” Nanoha sighed softly. “Today was just… really weird.”
“Yeah,” Fate sat down next to her friend. “Really stressful on some parts, huh?”
Nanoha stiffened. ‘Is she trying to talk about what she said earlier?’ Shyly she looked over at Fate, who seemed content just sitting with her. “Uhm, yes… really stressful…”
Stretching out, Fate let out a pleased moan as her back popped. “I really need to unwind a bit. So much going on, it’s hard to keep thinking straight.”
‘She’s hinting at it!’ Nanoha fidgeted, recalling the words spoken to her. ‘She wants to, but is too shy to do anything because she’s not sure how I feel? Is that why she ran away after saying it earlier?’ Carefully she moved her hand over to Fate’s, placing it on top of hers and finding their fingers instantly interlaced. “Fate…-chan?”
“Hm?” Fate looked over at her happily. “What is it?”
“I…was just thinking…” blushing, she scooted closer. “How happy I am that you’re here.”
“Oh?” Red eyes looked at Nanoha curiously.
“Yes… I just… don’t feel as alone anymore…You know?”
“Mmn,” Fate bumped against Nanoha’s side playfully. “I know, I can tell in the way you’ve been acting… I’ve only been here two weeks but you’ve really seemed to warm up to me… I’m happy.”
Nanoha nervously moved her fingers along Fate’s, taking comfort in the fact that her friend didn’t pull away. “Uhm… Fate-chan?” She got a curious hum again and a soft smile. “Really… you being here… right here… really makes me happy…”
Fate felt her cheeks darken. “I’m glad to know I could make your life a little better.”
Realizing that Fate wasn’t taking the hint, Nanoha took a small breath to try again. “I mean… you make me happy… Fate-chan.” Leaning over against Fate more, she made them both fall over so she was lying halfway on top of her. “Ever since you came… I’ve felt like I was needed… Like I could do something for somebody else. I wanted to know about you, and it made me so happy when you told me things, that you would listen to my stories as well.” Moving a hand to Fate’s face, she traced her cheek with two fingers. “I know I jumped the gun at the start, but I learned that things don’t happen instantly like that… which is why I felt so bad about it.”
“Nanoha?” Fate looked at her, confused.
“So… so I want to do this properly.” Pushing up with her free hand, Nanoha moved on top of Fate some more. “I want to be intimate with you, as myself… So you can see the real me, and I can learn more about the real you…” Smiling down at her, Nanoha moved forward to kiss her, eyes fluttering closed.
“Wait,” Fate quickly turned her head so the kiss missed. “Nanoha, what’s gotten into you?”
“Eh?” Pulling back lightly, Nanoha blinked down at Fate. “What do you mean?” Her voice was obviously hurt at the sudden rejection. “You said you wanted it too… it made my heart beat so fast when you told me you loved me.”
“I… I what?” Fate shook her head. “Nanoha… what? I’m married, I have a family… I… I love Nanoha, my Nanoha…”
“But… but you said… in the bath before Alicia came in-“
“Alicia went in first; I went to get us clothes.” The two girls looked at each other as realization washed over their faces. “She… She talked to you, didn’t she?” Nanoha moved off of Fate and turned away, holding a hand to her chest. Her slate blue eyes were wide, moistened lightly around the edges. “Nanoha…” Fate sat up as well and placed her hands onto her friend’s shoulders. “What did she say?”
“She… She said she wanted to be intimate with me… You… you and me…”
Fate tried to absorb this information. “She thinks you're my wife like everyone else does, you know I wouldn’t want to…” her words trailed off slowly as she started to understand the situation.
“But I obviously do,” Nanoha whispered, making the room go into an awkward silence.
Fate stayed still, looking at the back of her lover from another universe. The blurred line from platonic friend and curiosity had obviously been breached, leaving them sitting on the bed they shared together. “Nanoha…I-”
“You don’t have to say it,” Nanoha cut her off sadly. “I was wrong, I’m sorry.”
Fate looked down at the sheets, replaying the scene over in her mind again and again. The look of love in Nanoha’s eyes, the sincerity in her voice, and the warmth of her breath that came so dangerously close to her lips. “I… I think I’m going to sleep on the couch tonight.” Her friend didn’t say anything in return. Slowly ate picked two pillows to take with her and crawled over the side of the bed, glancing back once at the girl who was obviously fighting back tears. “Sweet dreams, Nanoha,” Fate told her as softly as she could. When nothing came back, she turned and walked down the ramp leading to the living room. The couch was sat on and the throw blanket on the back was pulled down to drape over her shoulders. Upstairs a small gasp of air came and Fate tried her best to block out the sounds. ‘Now what do I do…?’