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[Fanfic] Another Nanoha Christmas Story

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Christmas was always a fun time for me. Nanoha-mama was really into the holiday, so we always had a fun time. Currently she was outside out house on a ladder I was holding for her. A string of Christmas lights were hanging from her side as she merrily stapled the cord to the house. In fact, we were both singing a small Christmas carol that was playing on the radio curtsy of Raising Heart -who now sported one red wing and one green wing in true holiday fashion. One thing about Christmas that I enjoy now that I was a teenager was that my eyes matched the holiday. Back when I was younger people would tease me about it, but now I really enjoy the fact I was 'christmasy' all the time now. Mama started climbing down the ladder and I moved out of her way so we could shift it over a few feet so she could go back up. After a playful curse to aunt Hayate about 'anti-flying laws', Nanoha-mama started climbing back up while I fed her the Christmas lights again.

Another Nanoha Christmas Story
By: Satashi


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Thanks for sharing Satashi!
I'll be looking forward to the full version and to the obligatory happy family moments ^^

Take care.

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I'll post the same joke I mentioned earlier

Nanoha: Alright we're done! Fate-chan if you would please

Fate: *grumble* how did I turn into a power generator? *zaps*

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Haha! That's a funny joke! Wow, that got me laughing. Lol.

As for you Satashi, wow, I don't know where to begin. Um, well, I've been meaning to tell you but just didnt' get to time to... in AlternativeS! Ok. Um... You were the first person I started reading FanFics from. The very first person who inspired me into writing. The first person who caught my attention. The first person who every time I read the story from always gave me motivation. The first person who for some weird reason was the first one that I followed until the end of the story, not literally stories, but the chapters (Until to the 'To Be Continued' ones). I read all of your stories and I can't get enough of it. XD

I read AlternativeS! like 20 times a chapter before moving on to the next chapter. I never got bored reading the same lines over and over and over and over... and over again. Phew, I just lost my breath there for a sec. I'm sorry I'm not commenting on AlternativeS! because I'm already this far. And I don't really know why. I could just switch over to AlternativeS! but I don't want to. I kind of feel relieve now that I'm letting this out and telling you. You were just the very first person that had everything to do with Fanfic/writing for the matter for me. If it wasn't for your story, I wouldn't be here now. (:

Wow, I think that was KIND OF cliche. Haha. I have a lot more, buuut if I do say it/write it then it'll probably take up a whole page like what Alicia Testarossa (Sensei) said in her other comment she made. I don't want that to be happening. :3

"You can close you eyes to reality but not to memories..."

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Wow, that's a lot of firsts @_@

I'm really happy you like my stories that much ^.^ I don't really know what to say to all that other than thank you ^^ I'm glad you're happy


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...

"You can close you eyes to reality but not to memories..."

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Lol. Yeah. It is a lot of firsts. XD

Your welcome. And thank you for sharing your stories. (:
Yeah, reading your story just makes me happy no matter what mood I'm in.
Sick, mad/angry, hungry, happy already, lonely. Yup, and many more.
It just takes my mind off of things and for some reason I'm all smiling and stuff, you know? :3 Haha.

"You can close you eyes to reality but not to memories..."

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I want the full version too, I love ur fics Satashi (extra love to Vampire Fate).

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I like your Christmas stories, Satashi, so I´m waiting for the full version ^^.

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Love the story and can't wait for more!

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Maybe we should create shirts that reads, "Satashi's Official Fan Club" or how about "Satashi's Official Fan Girl/Boy"?

*fleez*

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Hope it won't dissapoint you guys ^_^

Its gonna be a fluffy story building up to a Chrsitmas party. It'll focus on all the characters and their relationships. Nanoha/Fate, some Hayate/Yuuno on sidelines, and a nice chunk of Vivio/Syn as well as Nanoha and Fate having "Mama moments"


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What more could we want for Christmas! XD

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... but why am I paired with Hayate? I prefer the Lieze twins X3

Ok, I was totally joking there. I'm looking forward to your heart-warming Christmas story eagerly!

(I adore Hayate by the way... and I'm SO jealous of her harem XD

NanoFate fans please don't send me hate mail... I promise to turn back into a ferret and leave Nanoha (and her waifu) alone XD

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Nyahaha. Yuuno-kun, you're so funny. XD
Hayate-chan for some reason always has a harem. :3

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Takamachi Nanoha! I've finally found you! Now listen to me very carefully *cough, cough* This red gem here is not an ordinary ruby, you see it gives you magical power to seal those jewel seeds...

What, you knew all these already?! Errrr, ok... never mind then ^_^;

NanoFate fans please don't send me hate mail... I promise to turn back into a ferret and leave Nanoha (and her waifu) alone XD

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Nyahaha. Yeah, I knew it already. You told me years ago Yuuno-kun. Nyahaha. ^^ Thanks for reminding me again. :3

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have a teaser

Vivio grinned up at her mother as Nanoha tried in vain to reach the last inch to staple the lights at the peak of their house. "Can you get it, mama?" She called up, unable to suppress the laughter in her voice.

Nanoha grunted, trying her best not to hop on the ladder. Already at the very top on her tiptoes, she kept struggling to make it. "I can get it, Vivio," came the annoyed reply. "Just... one... inch..." After a few more seconds of trying, she rebalanced herself. "Hayate-chan would never know if I flew up an inch."

"Yes I would," Hayate's voice shocked Nanoha enough to grab a hold of the house to keep from falling off the ladder. "You okay up there, Nanoha-chan?"

"Ha-Hayate-chan!" Nanoha looked down and laughed nervously. "When did you get here?"

"Right about the time you said you would fly. You know there are laws, and I am the one who has to take responsibility when you break them."

"It's one inch!" Nanoha protested.

"Laws are laws, Mama." Vivio called up, much to Hayate's delight. "Want me to gt it for you?"

Nanoha puffed out her cheeks and tried again, balancing as best she could on her toes. "No! I have it!"

The shorter woman on the ground looked over at Vivio with a happy smile. "She's still in denial that you're taller than her now."

"She is not!" Nanoha yelled loudly.

Vivio bit back a laugh. "Mama, just come down and let me do it." Her words made Nanoha look down at her for several moments before giving off a sad sigh. "But you always hold the ladder for me while I put up lights..."

Hayate crossed her arms. "And Fate-chan always get that last little bit for you. Admit it, Nanoha, Vivio hit a growth spurt this year. You were complaining about it when you had to buy her new clothes, like her bras."

"Aunt Hayate!" the blonde blushed darkly and resisted covering her chest in favor of holding the ladder stable for Nanoha's decent. "don't say things like that so loudly!"

With a laugh Hayate shook her head. "Hey, be proud of yourself! The first girl to hit double D before the age of eighteen!"

Nanoha huffed at her friend while giving Vivio the staple gun. "Shush, Hayate-chan."

Vivio climbed the ladder and easily stapled the lights to the border. Once done she started working them down and over to the side to finish off that section of the house. "There, all done!"

Hayate nudged her friend softly. "She's grown up into quite the girl, hasn't she."

"Yeah," Nanoha admitted proudly, but her voice was laced with a bit of sadness. "I can't beleive I've had her for almost eleven years now..."

"Believe it," Vivio told her happily. "And next year I graduate high school. I wonder what apartments I should look at?"

Hayate covered her mouth when Vivio winked at her. Nanoha, on the other hand, crossed her arms firmly. "You're not moving out."

"Sure, sure," Vivio was robbed of her teasing when a truck pulled into the driveway. "Fate-mama's back!" Running over to the truck, the girl looked at the large Christmas tree in the back. "Wow, its huge!"

The blonde opened the passenger side door while her brother got out of teh other side. "Its nine feet."

Nanoha put a hand to her chin. "Will it fit with the star on top?"

Fate nodded. "Yes, our ceiling peaks at twelve feet near where the tree will go, so it will be fine."

"By the front windows?" Chrono asked curiously, letting down the tailgate.

Nanoha shook her head. "I thought we decided to put it near the back wall?"

"No," Vivio disagreed. "You decided that. Fate-mama and I agreed on the front window. Out numbered two-to-one."

Hayate clapped her hands before Nanoha could pout. "On that note, lets get this lovely tree into the house! Ami asked me to make sure dear little Chrono would make it back in time to go shopping with her."

"Shoot me," Chrono muttered under his breath while pulling the tree from his truck bed. "Why do I have to do the hard work, you girls are stronger than me anyway."

Vivio helped with the middle of the tree. "Because your the boy, that's why."

"What about Yuuno?" the male grunted while carrying the tree with Vivio's help, lead by Fate near the front while Nanoha and Hayate discussed placement as if they had a choice in the matter after the two blondies made up their minds.

"Yuuno-san doesn't count," Vivio answered the question. "He's more female than Syn."

"That's not saying much," Fate mused absently. "Okay, Brother, can you make it into the tree stand?"

"Don't call me that," Chrono struggled to get the trunk into the stand. "It's embarrassing."

After watching the small group struggle for a few moments, Hayate finally voiced her thoughts aloud. "Did you cut the tree yourself?"

"No," Chrono sighed out as the tree finally fell into the stand. "We just picked it out."

"Because," Hayate pointed at it. "Pre-cut trees need to be trimmed on the bottom so they will drink the water and absorb the nutrients."

Chrono looked at Hayate and then to Fate. "You're kidding, right?"

"Knew I forgot something." Fate bopped her fist onto her palm. A small silence passed through the group before everyone looked at Chrono again.

"For the love of..."


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Aww just what I need to get in the christmasy mood!

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Thanks for sharing this teaser, this short is looking very fluffy so far~ Hayate's timing was great, seeing her teasing her friends is always something fun to read, I liked your stubborn Nanoha not wanting to accept how their daughter is growing and the little family dynamic we got when Fate arrived was heartwarming too ^^

I hope we can see more of this before Christmas.

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Thanks for the teaser, as it was said, it helps to get in the Christmas mood.

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Ah, I love NanoFate couple so much.

Thank you!

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I'm definitely "teased", Satashi-sama! Looking forward to the whole story :)

NanoFate fans please don't send me hate mail... I promise to turn back into a ferret and leave Nanoha (and her waifu) alone XD

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lolz u don't like hayate? :3

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I was only kidding. I LOVE Hayate... I especially love peeking in when she happens to be groping someone in her harem XD

I almost got smashed by Graf Eisen once though, when Vita caught me peeping *still shivers remembering that*

NanoFate fans please don't send me hate mail... I promise to turn back into a ferret and leave Nanoha (and her waifu) alone XD

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yuuno wrote:
I was only kidding. I LOVE Hayate... I especially love peeking in when she happens to be groping someone in her harem XD

I almost got smashed by Graf Eisen once though, when Vita caught me peeping *still shivers remembering that*


..... That's why I displace myself among various universes and time periods. So that way I am pseudo-omnipresent to do all sorts of mathematics and such, and keep in mind to look out for extra-universal chaos (Or, problems in a universe other than my own.) Sound irrelevant? Well, it enables me to notice what Hayate is up to while guarding in case any trespassing perverts come by. Sure, she could just put up a barrier or something to keep people out, but she is a little lazy. XD

Unfortunately, that applies to me as well.

I'm not sure Hayate is actually attracted to boys. (Sure, there was someone Hayate spent time with in StrikerS, but he's just an insert character to cover up what Hayate is really like.)

Anyways, -_-U Someone created another Sigma Virus robot... Time to send X some of his old weapons... AGAIN!

'Tis the will of all things good... to annialate all that oppose NanoFate.(Well, liberate them into our fandom only by force).. from the power (or threat of use of) of the RMZ4 space laser, Ragnarok.

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Hey, who are you calling a "trespassing" pervert? I wasn't "trespassing"... just hiding LOL

NanoFate fans please don't send me hate mail... I promise to turn back into a ferret and leave Nanoha (and her waifu) alone XD

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yuuno wrote:
Hey, who are you calling a "trespassing" pervert? I wasn't "trespassing"... just hiding LOL

..... I'm only semi-perverted. Plus, I was in like, 15 other universes keeping track of events for their next 30 years.

'Tis the will of all things good... to annialate all that oppose NanoFate.(Well, liberate them into our fandom only by force).. from the power (or threat of use of) of the RMZ4 space laser, Ragnarok.

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I was only kidding. I LOVE Hayate... I especially love peeking in when she happens to be groping someone in her harem XD

Yes, and those that gets groped by her are all of us girls. I was a victim in her hands. Nyahaha. It was weird. :3 And it was NOT good.

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Takamachi Nanoha wrote:
I was a victim in her hands... And it was NOT good.

But you secretly enjoyed it didn't you, DIDN'T YOU? XD

Just a little bit at least?? *listening hopefully...*

NanoFate fans please don't send me hate mail... I promise to turn back into a ferret and leave Nanoha (and her waifu) alone XD

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But you secretly enjoyed it didn't you, DIDN'T YOU? XD

Just a little bit at least?? *listening hopefully...*

No. I didn't enjoy it at all. No, not a little bit either. It felt weird... if it was Fate-chan then... Nyahaha. Yuuno-kun you pervert! :P

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