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[Fanfic] Behind BetrayerS

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Joined: 10/03/2011
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Hi, I'm kinda new here (aka I've stalked the site but never registered until now). I've recently started writing fanfics and would like your comments and proof reading skills(and even suggestions) before I try to post the finished product on

Disclaimer: I don’t own Nanoha, or BetrayerS (which is confusing)

A/N: This is my take on the BetrayerS and why they did what they did. I’ve never written in first person before, but I will do my best. If you get the chance to read the comic and would like to see something added you are free to make suggestions (although I highly doubt I’ll use them considering how long I think this will probably be).

Out of habit I will be spelling these character’s names this way: Arf, Yuuno, Zafira. If you’re a fan you’ll know the others as you see them.

Enjoy. I apologize for the shortness of the intro. This is a very slow work in progress.


The Last Testimony of Takamachi Nanoha

I suppose if I was back at home this would be called the last Will and Testimony of Takamachi Nanoha. But by now I am either long dead, or have been stripped of any belonging I may have had. I was instructed by my friend not to leave any evidence of our plans behind but I find that I am unable to do this with a clear conscious knowing that Fate may be suffering because of my actions. If this has the misfortune of being found by a stranger then I ask of you, stranger-san, to honor the last wish of a dead woman. But I hope that it is you, Testarossa Fate, which finds this. I have no right to ask anything of you but I beg that you to keep this a secret, for the sake of the future, the memory of our past, and most importantly our daughter. You have and will always be my Fate-chan.