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[Fanfic dedication to Titi] Bathtime at Vivio's house

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Dedicated to Titi, who drew me the awesome picture =^.^=

"Haha, Einhart-san, don't be so shy!" Vivio tried to repress her giggling while rubbing a washcloth over her friend's back.

"I-I can't help it..." The silver-green haired girl looked down, her cheeks a dark red. "This is embarrassing..."

"Never had your back done before?" The blonde purposely took her time, re-sudsing her cloth once more. "It feels really nice doesn't it?"

Einhart closed her eyes, trying to focus on anything besides the gentle pressure on her back and the warm air all around her. "Y-yeah..."

"I'll do your hair too!" Vivio decided, dumping a bucket of warm water over Einhart's back to remove the subs. "Come on, Einhart-san, can I have your hair?"

"B-but..." The girl looked over her shoulder at Vivio's smiling face. "O-Okay..."

Vivio reached around and carefully pulled the stands around to her friend's back. "Oh wow, your hair is so smooth, Einhart-san!"

The girl was trying to decide if trying to cover her breasts would be considered rude now that the hair wasn't there anymore. The young and blissfully unaware girl behind her poured the warm water over her and was starting to lather suds into her head. The soft fingertips massaged her scalp and was even careful not to let any reach her eyes. As Vivio leaned closer, Einhart felt two small and very soft mounds touch her back. At once she brought a hand to her nose, gasping.

"Einhart-san!?" Vivio asked worriedly, moving to look at her friend. "Did I tug your hair too hard? I'm sor-oh! your nose is bleeding!"

"I-Its nothing!" Einhart felt shocked as the girl moved in front of her, the nude body glistening with water, droplets running over her chest and down between the developing hips and smooth-

THUNK

"Einhart-san!"

~**~

Einhart slowly opened her eyes, seeing the semi-familiar ceiling of Vivio's bedroom above her. A soft fanning motion was felt and she looked to the side, seeing Vivio in a bathrobe looking down with worry as she moved the paper fan left and right. "Vivio-san...?"

"I'm sorry," Vivio whispered softly. "I forgot that people arn't used to hot hot we take baths. Back on my Mama's world, they were known for it but I guess I got you over heated..."

Einhart closed her eyes again and took a deep breath, enjoying the feeling of moving wind on her. 'She's still so innocent...' A smile came to her lips and she felt Vivio lean over her. Opening her eyes, she looked up at her friend. "One day, I'll confess." she said simply. Vivio's confused look was expected and welcomed. "Forget it," She requested happily. "Lets continue with the sleep over, shall we?"

Vivio smiled and nodded. "Un!"

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"Satiti" = Awesome combination xD

Good job both of you! It's great that you made this together. It seems like Vivio is following her mamas' steps ^^

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I like "Tishi" better :3

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This short is cute as hell. :3

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thanks ^_^ I like Einhart, she's fun.

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very cute and fun! i think vivio is just playing the innocent role!! just like nanoha would to get to fate, haaa

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Nice fic, Satashi.
A little omake here:
Vivio: Mama! It worked!
Nanoha: Why of course. I did that to Fate-chan after all.
Vivio: So~ do you have anything else?
Nanoha: *grins evilly* Come closer, I'll tell you.
...
Vivio: *her jaw dropped* THAT! IS! AWESOME! Mama, you're so evil.
Nanoha: Thank you, love you too ^^.
[Vivio ran off]
Nanoha: *thought to herself* Fate-chan's gonna be home tonight, right? *laughed out loud* Hehehehehehehe!!!!
Fate & Einart: Why am I having a bad feeling?

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Fate and Einhart developed a "Spider-sense", and indeed Vivio follow in Nanoha's steps, that is of evil, lovelust-filled madwoman. XD

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heh...
so it is a part of a plan.

i'm bored

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Nice omake xD
I almost feel bad for Fate and Ein... if it weren't because they're at the side of their beloved ones ^^

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Funny and good short fic and draw (great teamwork ^^).

And, yeah, Nanoha and Vivio are really dangerous lovers xD

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This is a great "light novel" -- Tishi FTW! XD

NanoFate fans please don't send me hate mail... I promise to turn back into a ferret and leave Nanoha (and her waifu) alone XD

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just thinking about this might give me a nosebleed =P

What would you do if there was a cure to death?