So I'm takin' a shot at writin' fanfiction. It's doubtful I'll update regularly, or often, or at all, but hey, I've compiled the bits I have written (in the NanoFate chat) into this thread.
"This is... my room back on Earth. What am I doing here? The last thing I remember is going to bed with Fate-chan." The blue-eyed girl blushed to herself in memory of what they had been doing before their slumber. "Something strange is going on here... I need to find Fate-chan!"
Slowing to a stop in the park, Nanoha attempted to catch her breath from her panicked run. Something had happened; she was apparently still a high school student, and no one had heard of Fate-chan at the school they were attending. Opening communications with the Arthra in orbit, she sighed in relief as the familiar visage of Admiral Lindy appeared on the screen.
"Nanoha-chan," the aqua-haired admiral began, "are you alright? You seem to be stressed out. Have your old injuries been acting up again?"
"Old injuries?" Nanoha thought to herself, "the incident from years ago didn't cause any more damage after I finished my therapy." Shaking her head, she responded, "No Admiral Lindy, I was just worried because no one knew who Fate-chan was at school! Is she being pulled off Earth for a permanent assignment?"
"That's good, your linker core hasn't been stable since the Book of Darkness incident," the admiral sighed in relief. "But... Nanoha-chan... Who is Fate?"
Struck with surprise, Nanoha could do little more than gape in confusion. How could Admiral Harlaown not remember her own daughter? Hearing footsteps behind her, she quickly bid farewell to the concerned admiral before turning to the source of the noise. A familiar female blonde ran up to her before wrapping her into a hug.
"Nanoha, I heard that you were acting weird at school today, is anything wrong?"
Nearly crying tears of relief, Nanoha wrapped the blonde into a hug before crying out, "Oh Fate-chan! Something's wrong, no one I've talked to can recognize you! Are you alright? Do you know why this is happening?"
Donning a confused expression, the other girl held the desperate brunette at arm’s length, hands on the other girl's shoulders. Looking into tear-filled eyes, she could only reply, "Fate? No, Nanoha... I'm Alicia, remember?"
Hehe... you posted it XD Good luck with this fic!
Everyone but Nanoha forgot Fate ? It looks to be a interesting and mysterious story.
Poor Nanoha D:
I like this fic's idea, it reminds me a bit of alternatives. I just hope that Nanoha meets again with her Fate-chan someday...
interesting idea. does Alicia have a relationship with Nanoha?
alicia has some show time ;P i wonder how nanoha got into this alternate world
I see that Precia is still as evil and crazy as ever.
I'll look forward to the next part !
Jokul-san....WHY! T.T on our wedding day too? Bad Jokul-san, now you're going to have to write an update, because if I don't know what happens then I'm cranky, and when I'm cranky someones gonna get SLB'd. :D
Update soon~
Thanks for the update Jokul, I didn't expect an explanation for Nanoha’s current situation so soon, but it all makes sense now. And you’re one evil writer Jokul, separating them after their wedding, I just hope that they can meet again.
Fu fu fu~ it seems that Alternate worlds are the trend right now. AltS, Moni's entries, and now this. Same thing with Memory losses :p I for one am expecting a lot from this~ Dont let me down fu fu fu~
Precia took Lindy's place on the Arthra ? And apparently, both her and Alicia seems to hide something fishy.
I'm cuirous to see what'll happen next time !
the chapter is too short. ;_;
The concept of alternate worlds has been used before, but this is somehow a refreshing new one.
...And I'm out of things to say. I'd rather not repeat myself and say how awesome this is so yeah...
Seriously, good job and keep going!
Ah you posted it! I thought you post it in like another week or so, but I guess not~ since you posted now, now you're gunna have to deal with me needing more!~ lol
update soon Jokul-San!