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[Fanfic] To Hell and Back

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It's okay. I'm happy that you like my stories.

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It's a powerful chapter, when I read it at the time, I was on the verge of crying, and now that I read it again, I'm on the verge of tears again, because I'm happy as Fate and Nanoha are, I can feel their joy at being a true family.
Alice is the real heroine of the story, it's thanks to her that they're together again.

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Well I'm happy that you thought it was a powerful story. That's how I wanted it to be. I just wanted to show that love goes through different forms, but it always is there. Thanks again for reading

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:O that was an interesting chapter, so the family is once again togheter that's nice......i just have one doubt..... Fate before the camping had sex with Teana then she leaved to Nanoha's house? or i misinterpreted that scene? it almost felt like Fate was playing with them, but at least at the end NanoFate prevails. lol at the evil grin from little Alice. ahahaha. waiting for next update!

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I think you misinterpreted. The sex scene was of Nanoha and Fate. When I wrote it, I wanted it to be so that the reader wasn't sure whom she was have sex with until afterwards and when Alice said mommy, that would show that Fate indeed was with Nanoha

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Hell and Back 9 is up

Spoiler:
To Hell and Back
Chapter 9
Taking a Big Step
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Nanoha’s POV
Two years has passed since Fate has asked me to move back in with her. Things are just as I had expected……wonderful. In the last two years many things have happened. The main thing was that Fate and I made a decision to have another baby. Alice did not like the idea at first, but then she slowly accepted it especially when Precious was born. They are inseparable. It was funny how our second child’s name came to be. Fate and I wanted to name her Peyton, but Precia came in the hospital demanding that our baby was named after her since Alice was named after Alicia. Just to shut her up, we named her Precious and everyone loves it especially Precia. I’m just so happy with my life. Too bad that everyone’s getting older. I wish that my kids were still babies, but they can’t be that way forever. My little Alice is now six and Precious is two. I think that Precious is going to be just like Fate because she’s already displaying some of her traits. She looks more like Fate as well even though she has my hair color and Fate’s eyes…..she’s just simply beautiful. Fate and I are getting older as well. My birthday is coming up and I’ll be turning thirty. I can’t believe I’m going to be thirty. I’m a little scared because that means that the wrinkles and the gray hair are going to start coming in. Would Fate still think of me as beautiful? Would she leave for someone younger? What am I thinking? I know that she wouldn’t do that because she tells me that all the time…..and I wouldn’t want it to be any other way.
Birthday Party?
Today is my birthday and Fate has been acting differently. Usually on my birthday, she would make me breakfast and bring it to me before I could even step foot out of bed. And there would be a vase with red roses in them with a kiss waiting just for me. But today when I woke up, there was nothing. No happy birthday, no nothing. Even Alice hadn’t said anything. They just gave me my usual kiss and left out of the house. All day I had been trying to figure out why were Fate’s actions different. She wouldn’t forget my birthday would she? No, that’s crazy. I know she wouldn’t. She must be planning something. All day I had been waiting for a surprise or something, but none ever came. She forgot about my birthday. How could she? I was really mad, but more disappointed because how could she just forget my birthday especially after all these years that we’ve been together.
“Nanoha, I’m about to go to The Forbidden Fruit to get the kids and get something to eat. Do you want to come?”
“No I don’t” I said still mad that she forgot about my birthday
“Hey Nanoha….are you okay? You’ve been moody since this afternoon”
“It’s nothing Fate. I’ll see you when you get back from getting the kids” I then felt arms circle around me pulling me into a hug.
“Nanoha you don’t want me to go all the way over there by myself do you? Please come with me?” And she put on her famous puppy dog eyes and pout. I swear, Alice has really rubbing off on Fate.
“Okay I’ll come”
“Thanks baby” Fate said after placing a kiss on my lips.
The ride to The Forbidden Fruit was pretty quick, but I just wanted to go home and cry because my birthday sucked. It seemed that no one remembered. I already disliked turning thirty, but now it’s ruined. I let out a sad sigh as I opened the door to The Forbidden Fruit.
“SURPRISE” I heard a large crowd that consisted of my friends and family scream. I was so surprised that I almost fell over. I then saw Alice and Precious running over to me. Alice hugged my waist and Precious hugged my leg.
“Happy birthday mommy” Alice said hugging me tightly
“Hap birday mama” Precious attempted to say. It made me really happy that everyone was here for my birthday and it was even better to have my children greet me first. I hugged both of my kids, placing a kiss on their cheeks.
“Thanks Alice and Precious. You’ve made me really happy” I said overjoyed.
“I hope that you really like your party mommy because mom worked really hard in planning it” I then turned to Fate. She knew all along. I went over to her and gave her a hug.
“Happy birthday Nanoha”
“Thanks for the party Fate. I was so mad at you because I thought that you forgot about it” I said with a pout.
“How could I ever forget your birthday Nanoha? I love you so much” I was just so happy in that moment, that I just had to kiss her. She made me do happy. “Let’s enjoy your party shall we?”
“Sure” and the music was started and everyone started dancing.
Fate’s POV
The night had progressed rather smoothly and now was the part where everyone says a few words about Nanoha. My mom was banned from the stage knowing that it was going to be a disaster, but that didn’t stop my mother from saying what she wanted to say. After noticing that she wasn’t going to be called she said in a very loud voice “It’s okay. I don’t have to speak, but I am going to say that as long as one of my grandchildren was named after me I can be happy with you and my daughter being together”. My mom is something else. She never fails to embarrass me and Alicia. Even as she gets older, she seems to get worse and worse, but I wouldn’t want to have it any other way.
Everyone one had their chance to speak and now it was down to the last two people.
“Okay everyone, it’s Alice’s turn” Alicia said. She was playing host for tonight.
“Happy birthday mommy. I’m so glad that I have you as my mommy and mom you to. Thank you for bringing me into this world and making my life happy. And to top it off, you guys are back together. All I wanted was all of us to be a family and I’m just happy that we can be. Thanks mommy for being my angel and taking care of mom, Precious and myself. I love you and Happy birthday again”. I was so surprised that my little princess could feel that way. I even cried at her words. As she walked over to us, Nanoha kissed her as she wiped her tears and I kissed her to. I was happy that she wanted us to be together and I would do everything in my power to keep us that way.
“Last, but not least…..it’s Nanoha’s lover’s turn. Give it up for my little sister Fate” Alicia said in a dramatic way. I was going to kill her after this was over. I was nervous, but I didn’t let it show as I went on the little stage and snatched the microphone from my sis.
“Happy birthday Nanoha. We sure have been through a lot haven’t we?”
“Damn straight you have” Hayate screamed out. I shot a glare at her and after the laughter in the room subsided, I continued to talk.
“Anyway…..we’ve been through a lot and I never would have thought that we would be back together now, but I am so glad that we found each other again. I’m sorry for all the times that I’ve hurt you, but I promise that I will make it up to you with everything that I can offer. I wrote you a poem for you, but I want you to be up here with me as I say it to you”. There were awws and ohs all around the room as I saw Nanoha pass Precious to her mother. She slowly made her way onto the small stage and when she was in front of me, I grabbed her hand tuning everyone else out and only looking at her. After a deep breath, I said the poem that conveyed all of my love for her.
There are no words that can explain what I feel for you
But the fact that I only have eyes for you
I remember when I first looked in those beautiful eyes and saw that smile of yours
I vowed to myself that I would be the reason that you would always be happy
Just to see your eyes twinkle and see that radiant smile I loved so much
I can admit that I made a mistake in letting you get away
Replacing those eyes and that smile with something unrecognizable
But that’s the past and now that we’re back together
I vowed to make those eyes and that smile come back forever as long as I live
My life with you
I only want it to be one way (Moves to be on one knee)
And that’s you being with me as my lawful wedded wife
I could hear all the chatting in the background, but all I really focused on was the woman that I want to be mine forever. Nanoha started crying as I went into my pocket and pulled out the black box the held the wedding ring that I wanted to give to her. I opened it slowly revealing a diamond ring. Looking in those blues eyes that I loved so much, I brought the microphone back to my lips.
“Nanoha…..I love you. Will you do me the honor of being my wife?” I said a little nervous at what she would say. She seemed to be crying more, which had me waiting longer to hear her answer. Once she was composed somewhat, she decided to answer my long awaited question.
“I’m sorry Fate….” I was crushed. I was sure that she would say yes. I wanted to cry at that very instant. I heard all of the shocked gasped from the audience watching and I was just hurt and embarrassed that I just got rejected. “ But you’re going to be stuck with me the rest of your life” I almost died from a heart attack when Nanoha added to her previous sentence. I was so happy that I started crying as I hugged her as tightly as I could. Once I let her go, I put the ring on her ring finger and kissed it. I would do things right this time. I would make her happy. I was happy when I saw Alice and Precious running up to us to hug us and all the cheers we were getting. This had to have been the best day of my life and I would cherish it forever.

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I hope that it's not the end and that you will describe the wedding ^^
But if it is the end I will be satisfied all the same. It's a good fic :)

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There is one more chapter, but I'm sorry because I didn't put the wedding in it.

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It's so good to see them happy after all their hardships. :3

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Hell and Back 10 is up

Spoiler:
To Hell and Back
Chapter 10
Epilogue
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Nanoha’s POV
It’s been fifteen years since Fate and I got married. It was my dream come true. Fate looked dashing in her black tux and she never stopped telling me how beautiful I looked. I’ve changed a lot over the years. I’m not as young looking anymore, I have a few wrinkles and I have some gray strands. But I’m happy because Fate still continues to love me just as she did many years ago. There’s not a day when she doesn’t tell me that she loves me and that I’m beautiful and I just can’t help but feel that I’m the luckiest woman in the world.
My little girls are all grown up now. Alice already has her own place and is dating a nice woman that I feel that she will marry eventually. Precious still lives with us since she’s still a teenager. Oh how my children went from little babies to such beautiful women. Fate still calls Alice her little princess and even though she says that she’s too old to be called that, she loves it. She doesn’t have to say it out loud for me to know that she loves still being considered Fate’s little princess. No matter how old they get, they will always be our little girls.
I was currently sitting on a bench in the park that’s nearby our house overlooking the beautiful lake. I couldn’t help, but think of all the events that led up to now and I’m grateful that everything played out as it should.
“Thinking about the old days again?” Fate said as she sat down next to me.
“Yeah. Just thinking about everything leading up to this point. I can’t help, but wonder sometimes what if things hadn’t worked out the way it did. What if we never got back together?”
“Now why would you think of something like that?”
“I don’t know. I guess that I know that I would be so unhappy if you didn’t choose me”
“Well you don’t have to worry being without me and being miserable because I’m never going to leave you Nanoha”
“You better not” I said with a smile.
“How could I when I love you so much?” Fate said placing a kiss on my lips. Even at this age, Fate’s kiss still sends shivers up my spine.
“I love you Fate”
“I love you too Nanoha…..forever and for always. Now let’s get out of here. I have a surprise for you in our bedroom” Fate said with a seductive voice.
“You’re so naughty Fate” and we went home making passionate love. Something that I would never get enough of.
Fifteen Years Ago
Normal POV
Teana sat on a bench in a park. The same park that she had come to everyday for the last two years. She would always think about the bad luck she had. Her heart was still broken and she was still sad about what had happened. She always would end up crying just thinking about it and really wished that it would stop already, but she knew deep down that the pain she felt was too great. She just wished that her pain and suffering would end.
“Hey pretty lady. Why are you crying?” An unknown person came up to Teana. Teana’s first thought was to ignore the person and walk off without a word, but this person’s eyes and the concerned look expressed on their face made her change her mind.
“Just thinking about the person that broke my heart”
“Oh so that’s what it’s about. I always wondered why every time I saw you, you were always crying. I thought that today I would gather my courage and come over and ask you. So it was a bad break up huh?” the unknown person said as she sat down on the bench next to Teana.
“Yeah it was. I guess that it was really bad since I’m still crying about it after two years”
“I know what you mean. I have been with someone for five years and she left me because she felt that I didn’t make enough money. I was so heartbroken that I locked myself in my room for a long time. After a couple years, I felt like I could start dating again, but nothing ever really worked out” There was sadness in the unknown person’s eyes despite the smile on their face.
“Really? You seem to be a really nice person?”
“Yeah. It was really a tough time. Losing the one you love the most is never easy, but I can deal with it now. I know that love with come at some point and I refuse to be that sad person that I once was and I think that you should stop being sad to”
“I don’t think it’s that easy” Teana said looking at the lake.
“Nothing’s ever easy, but as long as you want things to change in your life and do it, you can be happy again. I’m sure that you will find love again….all you have to do it want it. Now stop crying and put a smile on the pretty face of yours” The unknown person said with an encouraging smile. Teana could help, but smile. “That’s what I wanted to see….that pretty smile of yours. You’re really beautiful. You should smile more often”
“Thank you for your kindness. I really appreciate it” Teana said very grateful to the stranger sitting next to her.
“No problem. Hey….how about I buy you some coffee…..”
“Teana……my name’s Teana”
“Teana. That’s a nice name. So how about getting some coffee?” The stranger said after getting up and holding out their hand.
“Sure” When Teana touched the strangers hand, she could feel a spark. For some reason she felt really comfortable with this person and the stranger felt the same way to. The stranger flashed Teana a smile as they started walking towards the nearby coffee shop. “Thank you again….um”
“Oh sorry for not introducing myself. My name is Subaru”
“Well it’s nice to meet you Subaru”
“You too Teana”
What both didn’t know was that their chance encounter would lead to them being together for the rest of their lives.

This is the last chapter. Thanks to everyone who posted and read!!

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It's a cute epilogue for Fate and Nanoha, they have their happy family and a happy life.

It's good Teana has her share of happiness, she was a good person and deserved to find true love too.

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Awwww, I'm happy to see that Teana is not alone at the end.
Even older, Nanoha and Fate still goes at it like bunnies XD