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[FanFic] True Lies

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This next part brought to you by the number 9 and the words "Sonic Move"

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"Nanoha...?" I said looking up at her through clouded eyes.

"Shhh" she placed my finger on my lips "Just listen to me ok?"

I nodded slowly

"First of all I wanted to apologize for what I said back in the store." she stroked my hair "I was really mad when you said that, but I realized later that what i said was even worse. I know you probably wont forgive me for that...but I didnt want your last memory of me to be a bad one."

"Last memory?" I thought to myself "What are you talking about?!" I wanted to scream but her finger wouldn't let me speak

"I am so sorry about what I said that one day also" she continued "Please don't think bad of me Fate-chan, but I meant every word of it."

Memory of the night before she left racing back to my mind

"I do love you Fate-chan...not as a sister...but as another girl"

"Nanoha..." my mind called out

"No matter what happens..." she started to tear up "no matter what outbursts I may have...that fact will never change."

I opened my mouth to say something but

"No...please..." she wiped her eyes with her other hand "don't say anything...or else I might completely break"

I grit my teeth together to let her finish.

"That is why..." she continued "I am never going to see you again."

My eyes widened in shock. I had been holding back all this time but this...this I could NOT remain silent for. I opened my mouth to protest but my voice wouldn't project.

"Goodbye Fate-chan" she leaned in and kissed my forehead "I'll always remember..."

Before I could react to what she just did, she got up and ran out of my room, down the stairs, through the hall, and out the door. I finally managed to get a grip on myself and sat up. "Nanoha!" I breathed, my voice finally returning. I ran down stairs and was about to make chase when mom stood in front of the doorway blocking my goal. "Mom!" I said half angrily

". . . . . . . ."

I grit my teeth and wanted to protest...but I knew she was right. Without even saying a word she defeated me by putting questions into my head. "What will you do when you catch her? What will you say to her? Will going now change the situation?" I could just see her asking. I fell to my knees and started crying helplessly. "I don't know what to do!" I cried out to her unsaid questions. She slowly walked up to me and hugged me gently and comfortingly.

"Lets talk about it ok?"

I cried and cried into her shoulder. I couldn't stop myself...my heart hurt so much that I wish I could quit feeling anything. I wanted to disappear...I wanted to just...

"So why was Nanoha running away from your room crying?" mom asked gently

"I...its all my fault" I confessed

"What did you do?"

"I...I told her that her mother ruined our relationship..."

"Now why did you say that?" she asked obviously not surprised

"I...I feel like..." I sobbed "I feel so lonely now that Nanoha is gone..."

"So you thought that you could get her back if you made her hate her mother is that right?" mom finished

I could only nod

"Fate...what kind of relationship do you think a mother and daughter have?" she hugged me tighter "Even if they have been separated all this time, once they make a bond it wont be broken that easily."

"I know but..." *sniffle* "I didn't want her to leave me"

"You love her don't you?" she smiled at me and asked softly

"I...I don't know."

"I know you love her as a sister...but this reaction tells me that you are interested in her as Fate Testarossa" she patted my head.

"What should I do mother?" I asked desperately

"Project your feelings to her properly."

"How do I do that?"

"That will be up to you...but if you need some help" she went over to the shelf "here" she handed me a CD "listen to this and it might help you do it."

"Thank you..." I accepted

"Now go on while I prepare dinner." she walked to the kitchen "When you are ready then go to her, but not one moment before ok?"

"Yes, mother."

The End *bows*

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Ok! What kind of another ending what that?! They didn't even make up yet! And Nanoha just left Fate-chan. I demand an encore! Another part to your Epilogue. Don't just leave it ending like that! Meanie Sensei!! >:o

Hmm... the funny thing is I thought of the same idea Haru thought of. Pair Momoko and Precia together so the family will come together and see what happens, but I guess Haru beat me to it. Oh well. *Sigh* -_-

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Fate and Nanoha seem to be near to their final confession, and with that probably the end of this fic is close too, but what keeps bugging me if that we still can't see anything between their mothers xD

Update soon please~

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Yep, the two didn't even make up, you can't end the story like that, everything needs to be resolved before you could end the story.

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Even Precia knows that Fate really loves Nanoha, u can't finish it like that =/
Please, write another part!

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I'm guessing that this "epilogue" portion will become longer than the main story XD

NanoFate fans please don't send me hate mail... I promise to turn back into a ferret and leave Nanoha (and her waifu) alone XD

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Certainly.

But it's not like we're complaining xD

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This next part is dedicated to the statement Yuuno requested. Hope the setting was done right hehe. It is also brought to you by the number 10 and the words "Wing Road"

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I dashed in the door to my own home breathing hard and deep. Mom greeted me by the door dressed up to go shopping.

"Welcome....home." she looked at me worriedly "Are you ok Nanoha?"

"I'm...back" I said between breaths "Yeah...I'm ok...just ran..home...thats all"

"Ok I am going shopping, I thought you were going to make things right with Fate. Did something go wrong?"

I shook my head "Can we...talk about it...during dinner?" I asked slowly catching my breath

"Alright we can do that. I'll be back soon ok?"

"Take care mom" I waved.

I collapsed a little bit when she finally left. My control over my emotions finally breaking again. I slowly crawled to my room and plopped myself on the bed. "This is the right choice" I told myself "This is the way it has to be...Fate-chan wont ever love me outside of being sisters. There is no way I can go on living like we used to. I have to keep away from her for a while, until I can deal with these feelings. Then maybe..." a knock on the door interrupted my thoughts. I picked my head up and listened.

"Nanoha!" a voice called "Open up Nanoha!"

"Fate-chan..." I breathed, my eyes widening a little bit. "Why..." I asked the empty room "why are you here..."

"Nanoha!" more banging on the door "I know you are home! I met Momoko-san on my way here! Open up!"

I walked over to my window and opened it "Go away, Fate-chan!"

"No! I want to talk to you!" she yelled from the yard

"Its over! There is nothing more to talk about!"

"Nanoha quit being selfish! Let me in! You are bothering the neighbors!"

As if on cue, 6 police cars rolled up with their lights on and the officers began to disperse.

"God dammit!" I yelled as I put on my computerized targeting system and pulled the mini-gun out from under my bed. I went back to my window and aimed it at a very shocked Fate.

"You in the window!" a voice called "Drop your weapon and place your hands above your head!"

I pulled the trigger and started firing.

"Holy shit!" one of the officers shouted

"That's a damn Minigun!" another yelled

I continued firing destroying all the police cars one after another. Forcing Fate and the officers to hide behind whatever other cover they can. 8000 rounds later, I raised my weapon and looked out through the area with my targeting system. A message popped up on my screen: Human Casualties....0.0

"You are bothering the neighbors with all your yelling!" I countered

"Let me in or I will scream bloody murder till the police arrive!"

*argh*!!!! I ran downstairs and opened the door. I pulled her inside and bowed in apology to the neighbors who had looked outside to see what the commotion was about. "What are you doing here?!" I screamed at her.

"I wanted to talk to you."

"There is nothing more to talk about Fate-chan! Go away!"

"No!" she gripped my hand and wouldn't let go. "We were both mistaken from the start. I was afraid of liking you. I thought that everything between us would shatter forever if I had returned your feelings. I didn't want to lose everything that we built up our entire lives."

"I'm scared too..." I looked down "but I cant stand it anymore. I had to say it...even if it would end up being like this in the end. I just couldn't lie to my feelings anymore Fate-chan."

"Nanoha..."

"Why is it..." I tightened my grip a little bit as I grit my teeth "why is it that we were born like this...born as sisters, even though we aren't related by blood. It would have been better if we were strangers." I tried to fight back my tears...but my body would not listen to my commands "Then we could have liked each other normally..."

Fate pulled me closer to her and hugged me "It was because we were born and raised like this that we were able to be together." she started crying as well "I wont lie to you...deep down I knew I loved you too. I just was scared of what might happen...if I took the next step."

"But you didn't..." I pushed her back slowly "You left me there...all alone. You abandoned me..."

Fate stood in shock at what I had just said. She opened her mouth several times to try to say something but nothing ever escaped. Nothing would ever come out no matter how long I waited, so I decided to make the decision for her.

"Go home Fate-chan...and forget about me." I kissed her hand one more time before I ran upstairs to my room and slammed the door.

"Nanoha!" Fate called as she ran after me. "Open up! Nanoha!" she started knocking

"Go home...please!" I sat down back against the door hugging my knees.

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I grit my teeth "Is this it?" I thought to myself "Is this all you can do, Fate Testarossa?!" my mind yelled at me. I racked my brain as to what else I can do to explain to Nanoha how I felt.

"listen to this and it might help you do it." my mom's words flowed into my memory.

"Will it really work?"
I asked myself "No...it has to work. This is the only thing I have left." I took a deep breath.

"Nanoha..." I made sure she was listening "I cant express my feelings in my own words so...please allow me this one time to do everything I can to convey my feelings to you."

"Please....no..." she sobbed

I braced myself for probably the most embarrassing moment of my life...then began...

"Look into your heart...you will find

There's nothin' there to hide

Take me as I am...take my life

I would give it all...I would sacrifice"

She opened the door slowly to me laughing lightly with a teary face

"Oh - you can't tell me it's not worth tryin' for..."

I can't help it - there's nothin' I want more

I would *fight* for you...I'd lie for you

Walk the wire for you...ya I'd die for you

Ya know it's true

Everything I do - I do it for you"

I looked away from her embarrassed more than any other moment in my entire life.

"That...that was some pretty embarrassment singing Fate-chan..." she sniffled "that and there are parts missing" she chuckled

"Nanoha" I grabbed her and hugged her again "If you aren't able to be embarrassed for the sake of the other person...you don't deserve to be in love." I smiled warmly "That is what mom tells me anyway" I laughed lightly.

The end end? Yes? no? hehe

Edit: i was getting a lot of death threats last part XD

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You've come thru for us Alicia-chan! Great (almost) ending ♥♥♥

Arnold's cameo is hilarious! Too bad the "director" (ummm, YOU) didn't leave that part in the final cut XD

NanoFate fans please don't send me hate mail... I promise to turn back into a ferret and leave Nanoha (and her waifu) alone XD

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Wow, I want a little more ;).

And lol with the cameo xD

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I love that song!
And I also want a little more too, come one, u don't want to finish it right now xD
an lol to the police part hahaha

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I wonder how Nanoha could hide and find 8000 rounds of heavy machine gun ammunition, but Arnold would've been happy to see that. (^^)
Fate took some courage to admit her feeling, and don't hesitate to eventually ridiculed herself, that's my girl, go for the kill (figuratively speaking, of course) !

As for ending the story here or not, I leave it up to you, but good chapter, funny and cute at the same time. :3

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Wow. I would've been embarrassed too if I sang that song. Lol.
Good job Fate-chan. Good job in not giving up on Nanoha.
The end end? Um, I'm not sure. One more part? Maybe, if you want.
But I would like to see a better ending than just them hugging at the end after that happened with the whole yelling and stuff.
Well... it's still an 'ok' ending.
Sorry Sensei... I have to say...

ENCORE!!! AGAIN!!! >:o

Awesome job! >:)

P.S.
It wasn't 'ok' at all...


It was CUTE AND FUNNY!!!

"You can close you eyes to reality but not to memories..."

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ok just so I dont get anymore death threat e-mails I'll put one more down. Theres still one more aspect I havent touched on...and you guys will have to wait till its officially published for the smex scene unfortunately :p

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ok just so I dont get anymore death threat e-mails I'll put one more down. Theres still one more aspect I havent touched on...and you guys will have to wait till its officially published for the smex scene unfortunately :p

Finally Sensei. I hope it's good, I mean the thing you left out that is. Yah! I can't wait! But I will be waiting unfortunately. XD Ok, I'm done talking, I need to sleep.

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This ending has been brought to you by the number 11 and the word "Closure"

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"I told you it would work out" Momoko laughed as she sat next to Precia

"That was pretty sly don't you think" she smiled "putting that microphone on Fate"

"Where did you get that thing anyway?" she asked putting down the receiver

Precia looked at her like the answer should have been obvious "You don't remember? You gave it to me when you brought Nanoha over. You said you wanted to hear her voice whenever you were near the area" she poked Momoko "but you forgot to get the receiver when you left hahaha"

"Hey I was in a rush!" she joined in laughter.

The two women stood up and started heading towards the Testarossa home

"Still...I didn't really think Fate would do that" Precia smirked

"Do what?"

"Sing that song I had her listen to"

"I thought it was cute"

"She was off key"

"Oh come on! Give your daughter some more credit why don't you?" Momoko playfully punched Precia's arm

"Maybe I should have her take singing lessons."

The two women laughed as they reached the house.

"Hey..." Momoko stopped her

Precia turned around "What is it?"

"I wanted to thank you..."

"For what?"

"For everything..." she looked down on the verge of tears "for taking care of Nanoha, for treating her as your own daughter, and..." she started trembling "for letting me have her again."

"Hey, what are friends for" she gave the shaking woman a hug

"Thanks..."

"Oh...my god" a voice interrupted them

"MOM!" I called out "what are you two doing?"

"What does it look like?" she just looked over at Nanoha and myself as if nothing was wrong "I am going to make Momoko part of the family" she grinned

"Huh?!" Nanoha's expression was just so cute

Momoko looked up at mom with the same shocked expression

"I'm older than you so there is no objection" she grinned at us

"B..b-but!" I protested

"Fine then!" Nanoha grabbed my arm "Then Fate-chan will come over to MY family."

"Hahaha, that will work too" mom smiled

"Aren't you deciding things a little too rapidly?" Momoko started questioning us

"No" mom shook her head "we can live here, while the kids stay at your house, or vice versa whichever is more comfortable."

"Mom!" I still couldn't believe it "you are speaking non-sense!"

"You two are already lovey dovey" she pointed at us "fine, all of us will live here for now. Until you cant take us anymore and you two decide to move out" she grinned

"Wha-what--"

"I would *fight* for you...I'd lie for you

Walk the wire for you...ya I'd die for you"

My voice came through as she clicked the button on a recorder

"Mom!" I said horrified "You-you-you you were recording us?!" I ran up trying to get the device from her

"You really think I would turn down this opportunity to have a wonderful moment like this?" she grinned

"Nanoha! Say something to her!"

Nanoha just stood there....blushing...completely useless

*ARGH*!!!!

"Now now" mom swatted my hands away "Momoko brought us some dinner. Lets all go prepare as a family this time."

Everyone nodded as mom opened the door

"Everyone..." she bowed lightly "welcome home..."

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Happy family end :)
Fate is so cute, always blushing =P
Thanks for always update soooo fast ^_^

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Awww, so cute, love the happy end, makes me all warm and fuzzy inside. :3
Thank you for your work on this story.

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Okiez the story is now "officially" posted on Fanfiction. If you dont want to go through all the different parts then you should be able to find it there. If not then click on my ff.net name and you'll find it. Thanks for the fun times ^.^

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Happy ending ^^, so cute. Je, the parents always embarrassing their kids xD.
Thanks for this fanfic ^^.

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Aww, now THAT was a good, happy ending. I love it! It's so cute! Fate-chan and Nanoha. Lol. Well, that was nice. Finally over with a better ending I should say. Haha. Awesome work! >:D Yah! Lol. :3

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aww i loved the story!! great job!

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Thank you, thank you for a wonderful happy lovey ending! For a one-shot there were certainly a surprising amount of ups and downs and edge-of-your-seat moments. Excellent story-telling -- and audience teasing! XD

*lowers the curtain for Alicia-chan*

NanoFate fans please don't send me hate mail... I promise to turn back into a ferret and leave Nanoha (and her waifu) alone XD