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[Fanfic][Rated M] My Lover is a Flight Attendant (Chapter 6)

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Uguu... my head hurts from all the jetlag. But I still bothered to create this. I don't have an editor now so... I'm sharing this with you guys while I still don't have time to edit whatever I have written down. I'm a bit stuck so... maybe your comments will keep my spirits up and finish this story. Well I've been a bit down lately... so well, never mind me.

Please enjoy my recent piece of work. And I really apologize for wrong grammar, please if you find one, please do correct me. I will really appreciate it, thank you!

[Prologue]

Spoiler:

A/N: Well, as a writer, don't you just get inspired anywhere you go? xD Well I had this flight to Thailand recently, and got inspire by the Flight Attendants there. So, let me try! xD! And... umm... ratings... between T and M... Maybe? xD Well it depends on how I want to take this story. So It’s just around T – M, I think.

Age Timeline? After StrikerS so... They’re all about around 20 – 21. =D

My Lover is a Flight Attendant
by ~W.K.
This is like the worst way... to find you.

I want to bonk my head onto the wall, the ceiling, or anything hard for it feels so heavy. I do remember a hang-over, yes. Until I found a note beside my bedside table. I looked at it and immediately blushed for who knows how long. Until memories, FULL memories of yesterday occurred back to me.

"Fate-chan! You finally got a job! Why don't we go out and party for a while?" a short haired brunette said as she elbowed my side.

"But, Hayate, my work starts tomorrow, what if I get a bad hang-over and come in late?" I answered her as I tried to continue my packing.

Uminari International Airlines or also known as UIA requires their flight attendants to stay in their prescribed dormitories, and them to be on pairs. Newly hired FAs would trained by a senior, and will also stay in the same room as that senior. In a flight there are at least 4 cabin crews, the pilot, the co-pilot and usually a flight engineer or a few observers, it depends on the load of the aircraft. Hayate also works in this place, so she helped me to get in. In a way or another, this is like a dump for rejected Front Line Army Officers. And the like.

I'm a Criminology graduate , but I do not work for the Police force for 2 reasons. One, they say that I'm over qualified to be in any of those police force that's why I was kicked out of academy, for ‘equality purposes’. Two, it's because the job of being in the front lines is for men, talk about your higher-ups being sexist.

Fortunately, UIA, is an undercover airlines that mainly deal with, drug trafficking, human trafficking, hijacks, and other sort of cargo/airplane crimes. Basically, Hayate told me to apply for this job, since she already got in, as a tactician, and second hand pilot, for evening flights.

If you are wondering, UIA is not a part of the Army or the Navy. In this time, Air Forces are separated from the Military but... you can’t call this an Air Force anyway. But this unit is created by retired female Military Admirals Leti Lowran and Lindy Harlaown, before the mean and perverted Regius Gaiz, that wants to dissolve everyone women in the army, because as he says all they have to do is to “reproduce.”

Due to the increasing crime rate on-board Flights from Uminari to the Capital City of Mid-Childa, this unit have been approved in the City of Mid-childa as an undercover. Since criminals are suspected to have come from the city, due to the advance technology the criminals caught had used.

“But still... Hayate..”

“Fate-chan, my treat. You’ll go? I’ll invite a few of my colleagues too so you won’t feel like alienated when you start tomorrow.” Hayate said and stormed away my apartment door.

“Really, Hayate.” I told myself until it bolted open again, and brown hair popped out from it.

“Don’t forget to pack up okay? You are starting to live in the dorms tomorrow after all. I’ll meet you, 8pm at the Bar. Get dressed!” And there goes my door.

“Get dressed huh?”

Little did I know... that I...

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“Good Morning, everyone. My name is Fate Testarossa, I am the newly hired Flight Attendant, starting today. Please take care of me from now on.” I briefly introduced myself and bowed. They all look like very kind people.

“Ah, Fate-chan is it? Good Morning, I’ll introduce to you your senior then, Nanoha-chan!” a female with light green hair with diamonds on her forehead told me as she called on to someone. I read her name plate, it said ‘Lindy Harlaown, Section Chief’ so she’s the chief.

I saw copper brown hair appear from a stall, and my eyes widened in surprise. She was... she....

“Oh, Fate-chan! They told me I was getting a trainee today, I didn’t know it was you.” She looked at me and immediately came up to me. “I will properly introduce myself, I am senior Flight Attendent, Takamachi Nanoha, you can call me Nanoha.”

“Okay, Nanoha.” I blushed immediately as her hair swayed revealing her neck a bit, not to mention my eyes trailing her round buttocks. ‘What am I doing checking out my senior?!’

“Well come with me, I’ll give you a short tour around the base.” She told me and slowly passed by me. Whispering five seductive words into my ears secretly. “Thank you for last night, nyahaha~” if you don’t consider her laugh... a word.

“Y-You’re... We-welcome..” I told her as she grabbed me by the hand and out the door, my face still flaring a riot of blushes, I hope no one notices. And I’m grateful that Hayate-chan isn’t—

“Oh! Nanoha-chan! Fate-chan!” Hayate. The worst nightmare to have I seen today, I am so... not getting away with this.

“Oh, Hayate-chan! You’re early.” Nanoha said and started a short conversation with Hayate.

“Oh, Carim-san asked me to check in early, you know, stuff. So, so, what happened last night after I left?” Hayate said and nudged Nanoha.

My head turned to look at her as if it was into ‘automatic bolt’ as I was about to open my mouth to say something.

“Nothing much, Hayate-chan.” Nanoha answered, and smiled. I raised an eyebrow.

“She’s keeping it a secret...?” Well if that’s what she’s doing... I pondered at it a little and saw Hayate looking at me.

I shook my head left and right, and she just stared at me.

“Fate-chan, you’re acting suspicious.” She told me and walked past Nanoha to stand in-front of me. “NOTHING, Happened?”

I unconsciously blinked my eyes multiple times before my focus went as tray, landing at Nanoha giving me a ‘ssshhh’ sign.

“N-N-N-N-N-Nothingatall!Th-there’snothingsusipiciousatall!Istheresomethingtosuspect?!” I panicked. I’m dead.

“Fate-chan, you’re voice cracked.” She told me. Oh dear, it did. It made me blush more that the beautiful brunette behind Hayate was chuckling. “Fate—“

“Hayate-chaaannn~” blonde head with a headband popped out from one of the doors behind me and Nanoha and Hayate immediately averted their attention there. “Come here now~~”

“I’ll talk to you later, Fate-chan. Nanoha-chan capture her for me okay?” Hayate said and went into that said room in a sing-song voice. I even heard Nanoha answer ‘okay,okay, I’ll capture her.’

“Well... shall we go now?” That brunette with beautiful blue eyes told me as I followed her around.

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“Um... Why...” Fate, playfully trying to play with the rim of her skirt tried to start a conversation as she and Nanoha were walking back the office, finishing their rounds.

“You’re wondering why I’m not talking about it?” Nanoha answered as she turned around and faced the blushing blonde slightly behind her. “Because I want to keep it a secret.”

“Just at how seductively did she say that... I forgot the next words that I wanted to say.” Fate thought and almost hit her head on something, before she noticed that they were back inside the main office.

“Ah, Nanoha-chan, Fate-chan, welcome back.” Lindy Harlaown, Section Chief, greeted the two. “It looks like the rounds of the base and interior and exterior of an aircraft went well.” She looked at the half-calm, half-nervous blonde and smiled.

“I look forward to seeing you later then. Nanoha-chan, Yuuno-kun, and Miyuki-chan, Nanoha-chan’s sister, will be leading the flight later, you will come with them to observe and of course help some passengers, as they guide you on on-hand activities inside the aircraft. For now, please come with me and you still have a few paper work to finish your hiring.”

“Yes ma’am!” Fate, agreed and followed the light green haired female.

---
“Well to simply summarize it... I had a one-night stand. With my current senior, Takamachi Nanoha.”

-Prologue End-

A/N: Well, My mind is boggly~ Hello Jetlag, you really lagged me this much. Characters will be introduced as the story flows. So, for now it doesn’t have a really ‘fixed’ plot, so maybe I’ll write different cases per chapter. Or Something. Well tell me if you liked it, so I would know how to tackle it next time. Thank you for reading and look forward for more! =D Maybe I should elaborate more about what FAs do in the aircrafts... Hmm... xD

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great story!!! i really like it!!! are you going to contuine with it?

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Yes, Thank you. I will definitely continue it, and finish the plot. =D

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If I understand correctly Fate works in an irregular military unit ?

This sounds quite promising !

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Oh, that's not wrong. =D But in an understanding situation, Fate now works for a secret Police Force that handles airplane crimes. =D

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This fic is looking great, that was a nice start konagami. So far I'd say this is T rated since you're not describing what they did during the night (not that you shouldn't do it in the next chapters! xD).

Take care

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Thank you very much, Haru-san! The day will come that I will definitely right what happened, please look forward for more! =D

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Kona, mate, I am simply adoring this story so far! I'm all giddy again I could, I could, nya~, nyan~nya~...*trails off into weirdness*......

Sorry about that mate, well, I'm loving whare this is heading so far so keep up the great work Kona, and I can't wait for the next chapter. And yes I agree with you, jet lag is a Bitseach.

On a lighter note! Here is a picture, within a picture, within a picture, within a picture FRAME, within a picture...on television.

Courtesy of my friend Laevantien -- http://raventhesilence.deviantart.com/
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Thank you so much for reading Reo-san! And I'm glad to have gotten you all giddy. I hope in the first chapter, I would make you all giddy again. Please anticipate for more! =D

And thanks for that... uh, picture, within a picture, within a picture, within a picture frame, within a picture on television. =D

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Great job Kona-chan~ (did you see what I did there? KONAgami-chan?) I didn't mess up you name too =D.

I'm really interested in this fic, partially because I want to know how it REALLY went last night ;D, and also becasue I've never read one like it before.

Great job, couldn't have done it better then myself, and saying that, you did it better then I ever could lol. *whispers* BTW I didn't find any mistakes. Though since, I'm usually messing up at spelling all the time, I wouldn't count on me....>.> (XD)

Update soon~

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Yes I saw, Nanoha-san, you can spell today! XD

Nanoha-san, I will make sure that what happened that night would be unique. xD!

Oh, Don't say that Nanoha-san, I'm sure you're just tired that's why you are messing up your spelling and that you miss Fate-san. Mwahaha. xD!

Will do, please anticipate the next chapter~ =D

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LOL Indeed~ All of the above ^ ^

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Wow, This is a great plot can wait for more *smiles* and i hope you show of what happen last night between them XD

~what happen if nanoha and fate are real~

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Hello Mon-san~ Oh, Thank you. I will, so please anticipate it! =D

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Hello konagami-san~ and no provlem also i will xD

~what happen if nanoha and fate are real~

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Good job, I really like the prologue, and I am curious about the next chapters *.*

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Thank you! I hope the next chapter would make you curious for the next one as well. Please wait for more! =D

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It's quite interesting setting choice for AU than high school kind of story.
And of course I enjoyed reading this, and want more.
Prolouge seems promising!

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Yes, I thought it'd be a bit unique, so I went with it.
I am very glad that you enjoyed reading this. I will definitely write more! =D

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ooh new story and great idea!!

apparently nanoha and fate just met at the party the previous night...one night stand?? won't they be rooming with each other since the trainee stays with the senior?? this will be cool!!! i wonder why nanoha wants to keep it a secret.

well, update soon!

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Yes, they apparently, had a one night stand. And the rest of your questions to be answered by chapter 1. =D

Please anticipate it! =D

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I haven't been so inspired lately, but because of you guys that I was able to finish my struggle to writing chapter 1! Please enjoy! =D And look forward for more. =D

UPDATE I have corrected the seat counts! Thank you so much Jokulhaup-san for the correction!
[Chapter 1]

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A/N: Thank you very much to everyone who reviewed/replied this story! I shall continue it with all my might!

My Lover is a Flight Attendant
By ~W.K.
Well, now I know that there’s something worse.

What surprised me the most is...

“Looks like we’re roommates. Well yeah, the seniors would have to be roommates with their juniors. Which part of the bunk bed do you want?” Takamachi Nanoha, my current senior told me, as I felt glued onto the floor my eyes staring at the sexy brown haired female in-front of me.

“Calm down...” I looked at her and smiled, “You’re occupying the bottom one right? I’ll be on top then.” I told her and moved to fix my luggage on the empty closet beside hers.

“The one on top huh...?” She looked at me and smirked.

“I-I-I-I didn’t mean it that way!” I blushed as I reasoned out... the wrong thing.

“Mean which way?” She asked me and chuckled. “You’re so cute, Fate-chan.” She told me as she started stripping down her clothes.

This is bad, my heart is beating fast, and I can feel my face heating up. I don’t know how she’s able to act so casually as if nothing really happened last night! And right now, she-she- she-she’s... stripping in-front of me!

“Umm...” I hummed her as I tried to pre-occupy myself with unpacking my clothes, while she undresses behind me. “And... I still owe Hayate a story! I. Am. So. Going to, die of embarrassment.”

“Well, I’m taking a bath first okay? Unless you want to take one with me...” She told me as she turned to look at me, and my shocked expression. “Just kidding.” She added and went in the bathroom.

“Why do I feel like my heart is going to jump out of my chest any time now?”

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The main office of the UIA is surrounded by multiple three floor buildings, used as an apartment/dormitory for all flight attendants and crew.

Three floor buildings have different tenants living on each floor. And each floor has three rooms, one kitchen, one bedroom, and one living room. The whole building posses an elevator and emergency exit staircases for the convenience of people living in it.

Takamachi Nanoha and Fate Testarossa reside in Building 110/40 on the Third Floor. Living on the same building are Hayate and Carim on the second floor, and then the newly hired Teana and Subaru on the first floor.

“Fate-chan. Now spill it out.” Hayate said as she almost choked the sighing Fate inside the cafeteria of the Main Office.

“H-Hayate. N-Not here.”
“Well, just spill it out already.”
“Something happened, fine.”
“Was she good?”
“Ye--, what are you saying?!”

Hayate let go of Fate’s collar and crossed her arms. “Well, you said that something happened, so I just asked.”

“I can’t answer something too personal!” The blonde almost shouted at the short-haired female with a matching blush. “Well, what of it?”

“Well, Nanoha-chan is the best Flight Attendant in the whole office. What I mean here is that she’s the best at handling crimes.”

“Uh... I’m not really getting your point, Haya—“

“It means you’re dating a big shot!”

“We’re not dating!” With this, all the heads in the cafeteria turned to look at the blushing blonde haired. “Um... So-Sorry.”

“Really? Well you see... Nanoha-chan is not the type of person who’s going after a one night stand.” Hayate explained, her facial expression turning serious.

“Well, she does look like that—what?” Shocked, she turned to look at her left and right and whispered, “Are you for real?”

“Hm. I’m for real. Do you know Yuuno-kun?”
“Ah. That ferret-liking boy?”
“Oh you’re jealous.”
“I-I-I’m not! Just continue your story!” Red cheeks complements her blonde features, Fate, still has not gotten rid of her blush.

“Well, Yuuno-kun has dated Nanoha-chan before. They lasted for around... three months. Being adults, nothing happened, not even holding hands or a kiss, nothing! Nanoha-chan said she was already ‘in-love’ with someone else.” Hayate looked at Fate. The red-eyed female’s expression is indescribable. Mixture of shock and confusion, the short-haired brunette even managed to tease. “Oh, Fate-chan, your mouth’s open.”

“S-Sorry. That’s for real?” Fate asked as more confusion arisen.

“Yeah, and not just that. Almost all of the men in the Office had expressed interest in her! But she turned every, single, one, down!”

“Well, even I had some interest in her...”

“Oh?” Hayate said as her eyebrows raised one of those devilish ones.

“No! I... Uh... You know, Hayate, this is all confusing me. Why she wanted that night to be a secret, or whichever. But we just met yesterday, so this is something I can’t...” The blonde tried to explain her side. Having a hard time with her words, and a lot more confusion.

“You can’t comprehend huh? Well, I’ve known Nanoha-chan ever since we were in Third Grade, but I’ve never actually figured out what’s going on in her mind, and is always secretive about her love life. But from what I can tell, Nanoha-chan expresses great interest in you. But what about you?”

“Well, I can’t answer that now... I’m still confused as to what I’m feeling. Sorry, Hayate.”

“No it’s fine. Thanks for sharing this to me though. I hope it helped you, lessen the burden.” Hayate said as she stood up, with the blonde following. “Tell me hot, smoky details someday.”

“Cut it out."

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“Welcome to flight 5X-326 to Mid-childa. Destination from Uminari International Airport to Mid-childa International Airport. Departure time is 6:45pm and estimated time of arrival would be 4:45am of the next day with Mid-childa’s time being ahead for four hours. Your flight would be led today by Captain Carim Gracia, with second pilot Yagami Hayate.” There echoed the voice of that packed short, brown haired with blue eyes female, as she spoke through the intercom.

“We will now demonstrate to you safety measures while you are aboard this aircraft with our in-flight attendants, Yuuno Scrya and Takamachi Miyuki...”

I simply stared at them doing the instructions as my mind was drowned by Nanoha’s voice. Just hearing her voice makes my heartbeat.

“...If you have any other problems, just push the flight attendant button on the panel above you and we will come rushing to attend to your needs, Thank you. This is your flight attendant Nanoha, with Yuuno, Miyuki and Fate. Please enjoy your flight.” I looked at Nanoha as she finished her instructions, and sighed.

“Did you have all of that memorized?” I asked her.

“Yeah, one of us got to do it one way or another. Since I’m your senior, I felt like I should be showing a good example, nyaha~” She told me and smiled. Cute.

“I will have to do that too someday then.” I answered her and gave her a smile. Oh, she blushed.

“W-well, you can do it on your next shift. You can write it down and read it. It takes time to master though.” She said as she pushed some buttons on the touch screen monitor above the jump seat, called Flight Attendant Panel or FAP. She then later grabs the intercom she uses to transmit the directions in the aircraft, and pushes a few numbers before speaking something.

“Cabin crew, please prepare for take-off.” The voice of the captain, Carim-san, was played around the aircraft, as we flight attendants took our seats.

“Please straighten up your seats, remain seated as our plane takes off from the ground. You may turn on your devices, once the captain has switched off the seatbelt sign. We will now turn off the lights upon take off for you to get a good view of the cities of Uminari, for those who are reading you may turn on your individual reading lights.” Nanoha said as she completed it, followed by a short cough right after she dropped phone.

“Are you okay?” I asked her, since I am the flight attendant seated beside her after all. She seems to have been sweating, but she’s still keeping a smile. This is worrying me.

“I’m fine, Fate-chan. If I was sick, I wouldn’t have been able to board this flight. It’s against the rules.” She answered me and smiled, while looking like she was suppressing a cough from her throat.

“Well... if you say so but... are you sure you are okay?” I asked her again, and only got a nod in return. “This is so going to stress me out. For the next 10 hours that is.”

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4 hours into the Flight...

“Master, The man at Seat 11F has snuck in a gun. So are the men in seat 2B, 6A, 16D, and 24E.” A red orb blinked as it dangled from Nanoha’s neck.

Every military graduate that took special courses in-between mid-childa and Uminari criminology universities, are required to have, devices that transforms into their respective chosen weapon of choices.

Almost all of the female flight attendants in UIA took special courses, and they call them “mages.” Because of UIA Agent’s titles in mid-childa, they’ve been called mages because they are those who ‘Saves people while soaring through the sky.’

“5 men in total, huh? Hijacking?” Nanoha asked the orb as I looked at them. I’ve been twirling a triangular gold object in my hand, which I call ‘Bardiche.’ He has been informing me of the same things, looks like we’re going to work.

“No, Master. It seems to be a different agenda.” The red orb talked again, whereas Nanoha nodded.

“Thanks, Raising Heart.” She coughed again. I turned to look at her. And then she smiled at me. “I’m fine; we’re waiting for them to move, before doing an action.”

“Alright, just, please, tell me if there’s something wrong with you.” I told her, and she just gave me a smile, again.

“I will. Please don’t worry, Fate-chan.” She told me and stood up to reach again the intercom and talk. “We will now, deliver food from our front trolleys to serve you a very light dinner.”

The seating arrangement was 2-4-2 meaning that the plane had two isles, divided into 3 columns. There are 200 passengers, and total counting of 206 people on-board including the captains and the flight attendants. The seats are arranged from A – H, with their corresponding, row number from 1 – 25.

The man in 11F has the window seat, 2B is an aisle seat, 6A is another window seat, 16D is a seat in the middle column, and 24E is an aisle seat at the back. Quite distributed, this must’ve taken a lot of practice.

Nanoha and Miyuki-san pushed the trolleys that carried the light meals to be delivered to each passenger, as Yuuno tried to assist Nanoha. I saw him reaching out to her forehead with a concerned look but she just carefully shoved his hand off. From my peripheral vision I saw the man seated in 24E stand up and walk towards the guy in 2B.

Guy from 24E accidentally bumped 2B’s elbow that toppled over a plastic glass of orange juice. Now splattered on the floor of the plane.

“What the fuck are you doing, asshole?!” Guy from 2B shouted and grabbed 24E guy’s collar. I rushed over to the two of them and broke them up.

“I’m sorry sir, it was an accident, we will clean then floor and deliver you a new glass of juice. Please, calm down.” I told them as at the same time, all the other guys started to cause a ruckus, breaking the plastic plates, disturbing the passengers, until one of these guys pulled out his gun, and a gunshot was heard.

My eyes followed the direction of where the bullet went through, to one of the windows inside the aircraft. I saw Nanoha immediately rush towards that particular window as she patched it up with a temporary masking tape.

“What can pesky little Flight Attendants do to us? Now everyone, bring out your hand carry bags, and put your valuables inside this garbage bag.” Guy from 11F said as every one of his men took out the same bags and made some rounds, with one of these men going into Captain’s Room.

“You dare show your faces as you commit your crimes, huh?” I somewhat heard Nanoha mutter those words as she walked towards their seem-to-be leader, guy from 11F.

“Oh, hey, you’re quite cute, aside that, hand me your valuables.” 11F guy said as he tried to stare down on Nanoha, who’s particularly giving him a death glare. “What? You’ll just keep on staring at me huh?”

“You all won’t mind if I just blasted these guys out the aircraft right?” She smiled, and that’s like a signal for us. Time to apprehend.

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“Fate-chan, you were good!” Miyuki said as she praised the blonde handcuffing the last man who had created a fuss inside the aircraft, while one of those men was being dragged out by Miyuki from the Captain’s Room that one was passed out too. Yuuno and Nanoha giving back the passengers valuables.

“Thank you; it was my only specialty after all. Close range combat. You as well Miyuki-san, I was surprised.” The blonde replied to her and dusted her clothes.

“Well, I’m sure the person who surprised you the most is Nanoha though, but you seem to be too good at hiding your shock.” The eyeglasses wearing female said and tied all of the 5 men together with a long rope.

“Hayate had told me a lot, I already expected much.” Fate answered as she greeted Nanoha and Yuuno as to they have finished handing back the passengers things. “Good Work, Yuuno, Nanoha.”

“To you too, Fate-san.” Yuuno answered and went into the lavatory to clean his hands.

“Good Work, Nee-chan, Fate-cha—“ Brown haired female managed to utter a few words, before collapsing into the blonde’s arms.

“Nanoha? Nanoha!” “Nanoha-chan!” “Nanoha!”

Time left before arrival, 4 hours and 35minutes

A/N: Well that’s about it. Nyahaha~ I hope you enjoyed it, not much of NanoFate scenes yet but… I promise to give you more in the later chapters. Have a nice day!

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mmhh...I wonder with who was Nanoha in love when she was dating Yuuno.

Somehow, I'm sure Fate will have to endure a lot of teasing from everyone.

Well, I hope Nanoha get well soon.

Looking forward to the next chapter !

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^ ^ I seem to have loved that chapter~ Kana-chan can't wait for the next chapter! This is such a interesting fic, I fallen in love with it XD keep up the good work~

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Thank you very much, Nanoha-san. It seems like you can't spell today. xD! And you have fallen in love with it. Like with Fate? =P and yes, will do keep up the good work. =D

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Ahhh....It seems you can tell now...^ ^; I've become very predictable. Hm...Fate-Chan? When did she come into this! XD Loving Fate-Chan, and loving your story[ies] are to deferent concepts my friend. Loving your story is like loving a big batch of cute and funny puppies, you look at them and play with them, and you can't get enough of them. Fate-Chan on the other hand.....*kof* *kof* I'm getting out of hand...But you get the idea ;D

Better~

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Na-Nanoha-san is scary.

Y-yes! I get the idea! XD! Arigatou~ xD

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...really? robbery during flight? ..don't rush your fics, wait till your muse come back .. atleast I hope there will be a bigger case and more Nanofate scene, cause I'd read your stuffs in ff.net and its cool.. the last part with Nanoha was good and I'll look forward too.

peace >,<

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No-no, I'm not rush writing, I swear. If it does seem a bit fast-paced, I apologize. But no, I am not rush writing at all, was it because of Hayate's talk with Fate? xD! I did say there would be at least one or two cases in one chapter to make it interesting and stay on storyline. And I'm glad you liked my fanfic. I will definitely bring more NanoFate scenes. =)

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I giggled at FAP, ah the joys of being gutter-minded. ~.~

Also, if there are two hundred passengers on the plane, and twenty-five rows with six seats per row (A, B, C, D, E, F) then that leaves fifty people without a seat.
25 x 6 = 150

Lastly, don't force yourself to write, we can wait for ya... probably.

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LOL, FAP yeah. I'm really sorry about that, it was a mistake on my part for forgetting to count until 8. Because at that time, what I had in my head was a number of 6 per row, but with the idea of 8 passengers per row, if you.. know what I mean. XD!

And no, I am definitely not forcing myself to write. I'm not having a writer's block, what I've been struggling to fight with is sleeping irregularities. D: But even if the story felt that way, please still do look forward for more.

And Thank you again for the correction, that really helped. =D