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Alavon wrote:
*waves it aside*

Don't worry about. ^_^ I'll just re-post them AFTER I'm done with ch. 3 of Animal Instincts; I don't want to continue to postpone this chapter...
I hope you'll like it though.... ^^;

Hey Alavon *hugs*

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Satashi wrote:

Hey Alavon *hugs*

XD

*hugs Satashi back*

:3

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*yawn*

Chapter 3 of Animal Instincts is now on f.f.net...enjoy...

*goes to sleep*

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I just finished reading chap.3, very good ! (^^)

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langrisser wrote:
I just finished reading chap.3, very good ! (^^)

*bows*

Thank you very much for reading it. I'm so happy that I could cry...

*continues to dance around after seeing 19 reviews for Animal Instincts*

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Yeah...you mentioned being cursed to be stuck with only 15 revs each time? What kind of heartless monstrous beast would do something like tha-*drops book of curses and picks it up quickly* I mean its pretty cold and heartless I swear!

Great story though ^.^

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*points dramatically at Alicia*

So it was YOU!!!!!????? How could you have put me into that sort of DESPAIR!!!??? And here I thought we were good friends!

*goes to a corner and begins to cry.

SIDE NOTE: Thanks! ^^ I'm glad you liked it. It took a LONG time to re-write it. Overall, I was pretty happy with it and I'm beginning to fall in love with Harold, Jeffrey, Jason, Olivie and Miranda (especially Miranda! XD). By the way, my favorite line was:

"Revenge you b*****s!" -Fate

I had NO IDEA where that came out; it just felt right! I'm going over ch. 4 now so I can see what to fix; I might have to delete a lot of parts like I did with the others. It's a lot of work but it will be worth it in the end...hopefully.

And yes...no matter I many fics I write, the reviews used to stop at 15 but the curse is broken! Hurray! XD

Dreams do come true!

*snort*

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I just posted a short Poem Fic in f.f.net titled, "We're Not So Different After All" (NanoFate). That fic also has a short sneak Peek for chapter 4 of ANIMAL INSTINCTS called, "Mornings full of Sickness".

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your short poem is not bad at all, I wish I could even have enough inspiration to do a poem (snirfl...).
And the little peek for chapter 4 is a nice addition as well.

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langrisser wrote:
your short poem is not bad at all, I wish I could even have enough inspiration to do a poem (snirfl...).
And the little peek for chapter 4 is a nice addition as well.

Heh...thanks. This is the first time I did something corny like that so I just decided to make Fate write it; both Fate and I were turning red (especially when a friend of mine looked over my shoulder and muttered at me, "I will never understand you...".

*sigh*

She wouldn't stop laughing for the longest time...

But I'm glad you took the time to go to f.f.net and read it; it really means a lot to me. And trust me; the next few chapters of Animal Instincts will bring unexpected surprises....

*Wink*

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You know, I love to read, so it's no problem for me to take some time to read.
There's three I can't live without : reading, playing video games (20 years of gaming experience tend to do that (^^)), and my after-meal chococcino. ;3

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I like your poem Alavon, although poetry in English is not my thing, the images that gives are nice.

And "Animal Instics" is getting more and more interesting :)

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Nura wrote:
I like your poem Alavon, although poetry in English is not my thing, the images that gives are nice.

And "Animal Instics" is getting more and more interesting :)

Thanks! :D The next few chapters will blow your mind! XD

...

...I hope...

FATE: It sure blew mine!
NANOHA: *flails* Don't leave me!
UNKNOWN MALE: Now we are forever connected...
NANOHA: Fate! I'm sorry!!!

*wink*

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For those interested, Allquall has posted a new chapter of "The Name of War" :

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4380342/14/The_Name_of_War

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A little something that came to my head while reading another post from someone. It really doesn't have a title so I'll place it here. Warning: Might cause some of you to go "WTF?!?" ...I'm kidding :p

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"Alright this is a full blown match. You can use practically all your abilities in this battle. " Nove looked at the two combatants who were once again about to battle. "Only Nanoha-san and I are allowed to be in the area. Everyone else will wait observe from outside of the barrier."

"That's fine with me" Einhart nodded "I believe it is time for me to face the full powers of the Sankt Kaiser" she looked at Vivio with determination "Prepare yourself" she got into stance.

"I'm ready" Vivio responded as she too prepared her stance

"Raising Heart" Nanoha called from above them all "Activate barrier"

"Barrier activated"

"Begin!" Nove called as she jumped out of the way.

White smoke rose up into the sky as the two combatants charged each other. Even to the trained eyes of the observers these two were moving like missiles.

"Twilight shooter!" Vivio called out as she created orbs similar to Nanoha's very own axel shooter. They lock on to Einhart and begin to swarm at her.

Einhart on the other hand continues to advance despite the minor annoyance. She knows that Vivio has only recently learned this technique so she wont be able to guide them with great precision. However, as long as she keeps dodging she wont be able to attack her target, who is dancing around her trying to find any slip ups in the dodging. She concentrates on looking for holes in Vivio's attack patterns more than dodging the actual orbs.

"Shes incredible" Vivio thought "shes much better than I give her credit for. Even though her attention is divided, there are still no holes in defenses. In that case-" she orders the bullets to attack from all 4 directions.

Einhart sidesteps the first, ducks under the second, and jumps over the third. "Finally! An opening!" her mind screamed as she jumped towards Vivio, drawing her fist back to land a strike towards the blond's open chest. "...!" her instincts give warning, however, and she canceled her attack and looked above Vivio's head where another orb was bearing down right on her. She crosses her wrists in defense as the energy orb breaks on her causing temporary blindness. "I have to be careful...or she might use that trick on me again"

Vivio used that chance and landed a kick square on Einhart's chest, knocking her back several meters and giving her plenty of space to continue firing energy orbs.

"You taught her well" Nove couldn't help but commenting to Nanoha

"Shes taken after Vita-chan." Nanoha responded "apparently Vita-chan has been teaching her how to be a frontal attacker with some mid range abilities so that she wouldn't be completely limited to close range combat."

"So that's why she was always so tired whenever she came to practice with me recently."

Slowly but surely Vivio pushed Einhart towards the edge of the barrier, cornering the girl. "You have nowhere left to run"

"Keh!" Einhart clenched her teeth.

Vivio gathers all the orbs together into a single shot and fires it. Einhart just stood there and lowered her head.

"I thought I would get a more interesting fight than this..."

"Huh?" Vivio's eyes widened

The next moment Einhart's figure was flying through the air charging towards her target.

"Is she crazy?!" Nove gasped "There is no way she can dodge now!"

". . . ." Nanoha watched silently with a small smile on her face.

A heavy explosion followed by a bright flash that illuminated the battlefield. Vivio shielded her eyes and looked on as the light dispersed. When there was no sign of her opponent, she began to frantically look around before turning her gaze upwards to the sky.

"She created a barrier at the last moment" Nanoha explained "then used the explosion to slingshot her into the air. A very clever trick for a child."

"What the-?" Vivio looked surprised, so much so that she cant evade Einhart's attack.

"Now!" Einhart passes judgment as the distance closes to less than a meter. "Guh!" The two combatants collide, but for some reason its Einhart's voice that's in pain. She fell to the ground with a dull thud and rolled away quickly to recover. "What the heck was that?" she couldn't help but asking as she looked over.

"Too bad, and you were so close too" Vivio stated "had you been a little bit taller your fist would have probably hit me before my kick landed."

"Clever move" Nove pointed out "since Vivio couldn't dodge, she countered the oncoming fist instead by kicking upwards and used Einhart's momentum and the pull of gravity in order to add more power into the counter. Very well done Vivio."

Vivio continued her attack aiming for her target's joints, body, and head. Einhart was forced to defend while she tried to catch her breath. The blond summoned forth a few more twilight shooters and sent them towards the recovering girl. Einhart leaped into the air to avoid them, but only to be met with a strike to her stomach, her side, and her face. There was no recovery for the girl as Vivio relentlessly continued to attack the other's body, finally knocking her to the ground.

"Now for the finish" Vivio seized the moment and leaped into the air to swoop down on the defenseless girl below.

Einhart tried to stand but ended up falling to her knee. She cant avoid the attack so she set herself up to take it head on. Her eyes never left Vivio's as they continued to close the distance. A small grin formed on her face

"...!" Vivio realized this and raised her guard while trying to change her direction. She called forth an orb to take her place as she tried to evade.

Another explosion took place right in front of Einhart kicking up dust into the air. When the smoke cleared the figure of a girl with her arm extended could be seen.

"So...that was your real power all along" Vivio regained her stance "I was wondering why you were holding back on me when you yourself said you wanted an all out match."

"Even in that situation you managed to avoid it" she smiled "not bad, not bad at all..." she praised her opponent.

"What just happened?!" a monitor opened next to Nanoha and Nove "did she just?" Fate continued

"Yes" Nove answered "she punched it. Einhart managed to blow away the orb, the explosion, and everything with that strike."

"That would have been very bad for Vivio had it landed" Nanoha stated "It would have been easily the end of the match."

"It would seem that in close range battle, Einhart is superior. The only problem is she lacks the mobility to make her hits land and that's where Vivio's strength is." Nove continued

"That's right" Nanoha added "Due to all the training shes been given by the former Lightning Squad, her mobility is superior. All Einhart can do is counter the attacks like she did just now."

"That is going to be troublesome" Fate said through the communicator "If Einhart doesn't know any ranged abilities, then all Vivio has to do is wear her down and finish her off because it would be next to suicide to get too close."

Vivio continued to rain down attacks in between the attacks of her own. Einhart was once again forced into the defensive dodging orbs and blocking Vivio's strikes. To the observers it would seem as if it was only a matter of time, and that the victor was already determined. However to the two combatants, the fight was far from over...

"None of my attacks are connecting!" Vivio's mind raced as it continued to look for openings in the iron-wall defense "There has to be something I am missing, wearing her down like this would only lead to a stalemate." She continued to analyze "I didn't want to use this since it might be considered unfair, however if she wants an all out battle then it would be rude for me to keep this from her." She crouched down and swept Einhart's feet from under and entangled the girl in binds.

"Eh?!" Einhart's eyes opened wide as she found her mobility suddenly cut off.

"I'm sorry" Vivio stated 'but its over" she drew her fist back and charged her magical energy "Excellion!" she charged towards the bound girl and dug her fist into Einhart's stomach "BUSTER!"

Once again the stage was engulfed in smoke as Vivio's buster met its target. The battle was over and everyone knew it. When the smoke cleared, Einhart's figure laid on the ground like an old rag. The observers stared on in shocked silence before Vivio's breathing interrupted the serenity.

"Its over!" Nove raised her hand "The winner is-"

"She's getting back up" Nanoha interrupted

"What?!" Nove looked back

"Geh....ughhhhh...hack" Einhart's voice came through as she staggered back to her feet.

"No way..." Vivio stared at her "That's impossible!"

Slowly and unsteadily, like a new born child standing up for the first time in its life, Higemon Ingvalt--known to them all as Einhart Stratos raised herself upright once again. Her body was cut and bleeding in several places but no one really knew the extent of her injuries at this point. Just standing up was making her use up a lot of her energy, but she was standing and she glared at Vivio with the same determination that she had in the beginning.

"I cant believe she is still able to stand" Fate commented

"Her tenacity is pretty impressive" Nove couldn't help but smirking.

Nanoha continued to watch in silence at the marvelous display of determination.

"Einhart Stratos" Vivio called out "this is enough! Will you not yield?! This isn't a battle anymore! You are badly injured as it is!"

"I'll never...surrender..." she said as she tried to maintain her balance "not until...the emperor's memory...is satisfied."

"Then I will knock you out and defeat you. Hopefully to bring peace to that feeling once and for all."

The blond began to charge and launched another combination of strikes towards the girl's temple hoping to knock her out before any more damage was sustained. She went in for a final strike to end the battle completely...or so she thought.

"Heh...you still don't understand" Enhart ginned despite her situation. She kept her body very close to Vivio's and began to strike at all the openings.

"Kuh!" Vivio bit back as her body started to register the pain from the attacks. She tried to counter but found that her motions were too wide at such a close distance.

Einhart continued to strike at the other's knees, elbows, and other joints in order to slow down not only Vivio's speed but also her mobility. One final attack landed on Vivio's chest and sent the blond flying back several feet.

"Uggggghhhh!" Vivio recovered quickly and got back up into a defensive stance.

"Since you have shown me your greatest technique it is only fitting I finish you off with mine."

"Huh?"

"Emperor's...Chains of heaven" Einhart called out as a magic circle formed in a 10 meter radius under her feet.

"...!" Vivio gasped as all of a sudden as she was restrained by several binds. To make matters worse for her, it seemed as if the magic circle itself was the source of the binds "W-what is this?" she struggled

"Wow I never knew Einhart had that kind of technique!" Nove breathed

"She is doing the right thing" Nanoha nodded "If she cant fight Vivio because of her mobility, all she has to do is take away the enemy's mobility"

". . . . ." Einhart closed her eyes and focused her power

"Urgggggh... hrrrrnnggggg!" Vivio groaned as she relentlessly tried to break the binds

Slowly, Einhart moved her feet apart and crouched despite the blood flowing from several wounds. She set herself up to deliver the blow

"My mobility is nowhere near yours, and even though I may be as skilled as you, I do not have a wide variety of attacks like you do. As a matter of fact, I have but one superior offensive technique."

She drew her body back and tensed like a bow on the verge of breaking. In that instant, the air around Einhart began to energize and the ground beneath her began to crack under the force of her power. She was putting so much energy into her attack that even the observers across the barrier could feel its power.

"Oi! that's dangerous!" Nove called out "We have to stop her!"

"No" Nanoha responded "this is their battle. They must end it."

"Vivio is going to die!"

"Dont worry...Vivio is as stubborn as I am. She told me last night that she wants to settle this match for good. She wants to show Einhart that she isn't just taking these battles for granted. She will fight either till she wins, or shes shown her determination. That is why I wont stop the match."

"Nanoha-san..."

Einhart knew she had enough power for one strike and that she knew she needed mobility to make it hit, but since she couldn't match Vivio...so she devised another way and this was her way to do it. She had insured that the blow would hit...and at this range it might even be fatal.

"I am sure you don't remember this" she spoke to the stunned Vivio "the former Emperor didn't show you this technique, but I hope you never forget this."

Vivio threw aside all thought of struggling free and concentrated her power in creating a barrier in front of her. She knew quite well just how deadly this strike was going to be despite it being her first time seeing it. Her gather of magical energy was fast and powerful, however it paled in comparison to the even greater magical energy gathering at her opponents fist.

"Emperor's....DIVINE JUDGMENT STRIKE!"

The entire area was swallowed by a torrent of light. Everything was engulfed in a raging gale of power, the only thing standing between it and Vivio was the barrier that was created. Even though it seemed that it would hold the incredible power...the barrier's energy lasted for merely a moment. A unidentified shape was forcefully ejected from inside the circle, it looked like a person and slammed forcefully onto the side of the barrier.

After a few more moments, the large wave of energy subsided and everyone watched in silence. Einhart slowly lowered her stance and quietly dropped to her knee, as if scared to break the silence with her heavy breathing.

"Its...over" Fate said through the communicator, finally breaking the serenity

"No, not yet" Nanoha responded without looking at Fate.

Vivio's body began to move, slowly but surely she regained her strength. With trembling limbs, she managed to stand, her breathing ragged and unstable.

"I wont...lose.." Vivio muttered.

". . . . ." Einhart stood up and looked on

"I said...I would help you ease...that memory..." she continued

"Thank you..." That message was written all over Einhart's face as she momentarily smiled at Vivio.

Vivio slowly took one step after another towards Einhart. Slowly staggering towards her opponent to finish the battle. She charged the remainder of her magical energy as if to give it one last go. Her body began to glow as the magical aura took form. It was shaky and weak...almost as if if was going to snuffed out the moment you breathed on it.

Einhart attained her stance once again while slowly closing her eyes. For the second time, the incredible energy formed around her as the magic circle remade itself beneath them. This time, however, the binds didn't rise to restrain Vivio.

"Rhaaaaaaaa!" Vivio's knees begin to buckle, but she forced them to straighten as she drew closer and closer towards her goal. Her magical energy trying to shield its master from the incredible pressure, almost as if using Vivio's own life force to protect her. "Please...just once more..." she urged her body "Move...!" she took another step "I have a promise to keep...and I cant quit until I've fulfilled it!" Her body called forth one last spurt of energy as she charged almost at full speed "Behold, Higemon Ingvalt!" she roared "My determination as the Sankt Kaiser!" she launched her attack with the last of her strength...

Einhart held her position steady

". . . . ."

While Vivio looked like shes betting her very life on this, Einhart remained calm...almost content. She held no contempt towards her oncoming enemy and faced Vivio's final gambit with the very honor it deserved. The time for words was over...all that was left now is to lower the curtain on this battle forever.

"Emperor's..." she whispered, lowering her head as a small tear fell from her eyes "divine judgment strike..."

They collided once again, then parted...for the last time.

"I have clearly seen your feelings..." Einhart broke the silence after a few moments "had you held back just a little bit before our blows connected and then charged it to full..." she lowered her stance "then maybe the result would have been the opposite."

Vivio's figure gently falls forward and hit the ground. After a few more moments, Einhart followed.

"The match is over!" Nove declared "Winner...Einhart Stratos."

She and Nanoha rush over to the two girls to check on their injuries before picking them up. Einhart opens her eyes and looked over at Vivio

"Thank you...Takamachi, Vivio..." she whispered before her eyes closed once again and enveloped her in darkness...

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That was quite a fight between Einhart and Vivio.

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EXPLOSIVE! Wow, cool story Alicia-chan!

NanoFate fans please don't send me hate mail... I promise to turn back into a ferret and leave Nanoha (and her waifu) alone XD

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New Story updated:

Love Is All It Takes...

Set one year before 'Bath Time'. Fate T. Harleown has to face the most important moment of her life; the birth of her child!

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Lovely ficlet, Alavon. :3

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Whoops! >_<

I forgot to click 'yes' to allow the poll to be seen on my profile. Sorry! ^_^;

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Animal Instincts Chapter 5 is 87% complete. Date of completion: February 7th

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7 more days for just 13%?
D:
Hurry up please! ;_;

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Haru wrote:
7 more days for just 13%?
D:
Hurry up please! ;_;

Yeah; I still have to finish the last part and then I have to leave it aside a few days so I can go back and edit it. :p

Patience is a virtue.

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Well the Omiai is done and chapter 4 of BetrayerS is out. I guess that means I need to write the omiai fic. Btw Alavon....you work the cash register XD

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Alicia Testarossa wrote:
Well the Omiai is done and chapter 4 of BetrayerS is out. I guess that means I need to write the omiai fic. Btw Alavon....you work the cash register XD

Huh? 0_o I thought I was an Archaeologist?

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I meant in BetrayerS lolz

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Chapter 4 is a great read. It kept me wondering about Fate until the end... And I am SO jealous of Shiny Sword, Alavon, Radiant Beam, Raiser, and Satashi! They all get to work in this apparently really fun cafe... I wanna see Alicia-chan in maid outfit too!!! XD

NanoFate fans please don't send me hate mail... I promise to turn back into a ferret and leave Nanoha (and her waifu) alone XD

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What's this about them working in a cafe?! ?_?

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Animal Instincts, Chapter 5: Hayate Yagami is now posted.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5451815/6/Animal_Instincts

@Alicia: I don't mind working in that Cafe... :p

EDIT: Found a mistake so I had to replace the chapter with the edited version...

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5451815/6/Animal_Instincts

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There's quite a lot of drama in this chapter, I hope things will go better for them, so many sad happened to them.