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[NSFW CYOA] Vivio/Einhart

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C!
Go Fate-mama! Go!

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Give me a C! =P

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A

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nanohaxfate wrote:
C
. Just edited

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I want to know that ^^
C!

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b

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I have to go with C

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B or C...
hm..... erm..... i think give the girls a chance to explain would be the best but still why would nanoha become a white devil because of this? xD

B.

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B ... then A if the explanation isn't satisfactory XD

NanoFate fans please don't send me hate mail... I promise to turn back into a ferret and leave Nanoha (and her waifu) alone XD

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When will u continue this story, Satashi? I wanna know what happens next. :D

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A

WHOOPS

Edit: Ooops. I guess I'll go with C

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wow, when did this all start? haaa i had a lot of fun reading this!! very entertaining..man satashi, u come up with the coolest things!!!

i got with C

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C!

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I vote C!!

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i'll settle with a B

i'm bored

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C FOR THE WIN!

'Tis the will of all things good... to annialate all that oppose NanoFate.(Well, liberate them into our fandom only by force).. from the power (or threat of use of) of the RMZ4 space laser, Ragnarok.

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I choose C

"My friends, love is better than anger. Hope is better than fear. Optimism is better than despair. So let us be loving, hopeful and optimistic. And we’ll change the world." - Jack Layton.

"Humans are greedy. Therefor they are human."

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Wow, you guys didn't let this die did you? :P I think it safe to say that C won ^_^

Nanoha placed a hand on her hip. "Really, consider your location, Vivio."

Vivio held up her hands in defense while shifting to get out of the position. "Th-this isn't... Einhart-san, say something!" Her friend looked frozen on the spot, mouth open slightly but not able to make any words.

Nanoha let out a small puff of air and turned to her wife. "Fate-chan, can you handle this?"

The blonde nodded sweetly. "Of course, you get some rest. Tomorrow is a big day for you with your student testing." With a small wave, Fate sent Nanoha on her way and then turned to her daughter and girlfriend. "Okay, you two, I think its time we had a talk."

Einhart's eyes widened and she finally remembered how her vocal cords worked. "F-Fate-san, this was really-"

"It's perfectly normal," Fate soothed the girl, moving a chair towards the couch so she could sit and face both of the terrified girls in front of her. "You see, everyone reaches an age where they start to have special feelings for someone they care for."

Vivio felt the color drain from her face in a weird tingling sensation. "M-mama... We're-"

"Old enough, I know, that's why I should talk to you about this. I know just how you feel, as I discovered this with Nanoha when I was younger." She missed Vivio's disgusted face and Einhart's furious blush. "I know how you feel wanting to be close with your loved ones, but there's a time and place for things like this. On the couch in our living room isn't one of them."

Einhart tried to stammer out when Fate paused to take a breath. "Fate-san! Really, Vivio and I-"

Fate raised her hand lightly to make the teen halt. "I understand, Einhart-san. Don't worry, I respect you and understand your position dating my daughter. I know she is in very capable hands, but I do feel the need to remind you that she is younger than you and may need some time to feel as comfortable as you do."

Vivio felt as if she were going to faint, having never even thought about Einhart in that kind of way yet. "Mama..."

Fate smiled brightly. "I trust you to make your own judgments, Vivio. If you and Einhart-san are already in a sexual relationship, then I support you." The mother happily continued to smile, missing the high pitched shriek that Vivio let out. "But it seems that you two lack restraint, so I'm afraid I will have to make some rules."

Vivio was frantically fanning herself, too scared to even look at Einhart. "Mama, really, we've just kissed! A little flirty kissing, but still-!"

Fate looked at Einhart, who suddenly felt compelled to hide the hickeys on her neck. "Th-these are..."

"Proof of love," Fate finished the sentence contently. "But again, things like that are frowned upon by other people. Vivio-dear, you should show some restraint for Einhart's sake."

The younger blonde wanted to hide behind her friend, but was too embarrassed to move at the moment. "I'm telling you..."

"Now," Fate leaned forward and put a hand on each of their shoulders. "I will leave you two alone to finish your date, but promise me this... Rule number one, only hold hands when in public. Rule number two, kissing is allowed in private, but, Rule number three: no petting until you both talk with each other to discuss your feelings on this."

"P-PETTING!?" Einhart looked at Vivio and felt her heart jump into her throat. "I-I-I-I-"

"Fate-mama! We haven't gone past-" She stopped when Fate put a finger on her lips.

"Its okay." Standing, Fate gave them one last smile. "I'll tell Nanoha what we talked about so she will understand as well." Giving them a small, polite, bow, she left them alone.

Each girl stayed where they were sitting, eyes wide and cheeks red.

~End

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LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL
This end was too much!!! Poor girls xD

The only bad thing is that you finished it D: But at least we have your other CYOA (that hopefully you haven't forgotten yet!), and Alternates too, which is not with votes but somehow it feels like an interactive fic too, and is in its best moment ^^

Anyway, thanks for this final chapter! Maybe we can use something to tag complete fics in this forum.....

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aahh it was hilarious!!! and you ended it?? aahhhh but thank you for the run of posts!! it was really fun to read.

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Wow, that was good. Fate didn't even let them explain themselves lol
Thank you for this chapter ^^

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Lol, awesome! I can only imagine how Vivio must feel after going through that. Heh, I bet that Rule #2 is going to get alot of use before their date is over.

"My friends, love is better than anger. Hope is better than fear. Optimism is better than despair. So let us be loving, hopeful and optimistic. And we’ll change the world." - Jack Layton.

"Humans are greedy. Therefor they are human."

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Poor Vivio and Einhart, they can´t explained themselves xD, but realy funny ^^

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Wa is so funny

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Great CYOA! MOAR! X3

NanoFate fans please don't send me hate mail... I promise to turn back into a ferret and leave Nanoha (and her waifu) alone XD

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That many votes, and so few people have something to say after it was finished?

Guess you don't want me to do that other CYOA, huh? *taps foot*

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It was great! Please do more. Please. I will give you someone's first child as a token of my appreciation. You can name it Vivio if it has heterogamous eye colors. Think of all the potential conditioning and teasing you can do!

All this can be yours for another CYOA :D Act now, get another person's first child whom you can name Einhart.

Nanonymous
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fufufufu... my cheek hurt ;p

huh, Satashi likes messing with her fans... LOL

ofc, MOAR! I want to see what happen next after Nanoha know about this? - devil white mode?

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Very amusing, hands-down. And, this is only BARELY NSFW, which isn't really a problem. XD

Ending it with 'the talk' was simple and pretty nice.

'Tis the will of all things good... to annialate all that oppose NanoFate.(Well, liberate them into our fandom only by force).. from the power (or threat of use of) of the RMZ4 space laser, Ragnarok.

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Because it was voted that way :3