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[NSFW] gift lemon

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Teaser of lemon I'm doing as a gift to the person who commissioned Of Mothers and Daughters. Totally NSFW, Futa!Fate on Nanoha dom/sub smex ^^

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Nanoha smiled to herself as she pulled down the pantyhose covering Fate’s legs. After a long day at work, the thing that she was looking forward to was now before her eyes. Fate’s large, uncut, cock hung limp in front of her and she giggles to herself when her wife put both her hands onto her head. “Shy?” Nanoha asked curiously, kissing the dick a few times before pulling back.

“K-kind of…” Fate answered honestly, looking down at Nanoha as her cock was inspected.

“You haven’t shaved in a while,” Nanoha realized, running a finger along Fate’s balls. Short strands of light blonde hair were strewn all over the sack, as well as around the base of the cock and a small mass of it on Fate’s mound. “Mou…”

“I-I didn’t have a razor…” Fate blushed as she was pushed to walk backwards to the bathroom, her dick swaying with each step she took.

Nanoha shook a finger and made Fate sit on the counter top next to the sink. “Your hair grows so fast, you have to keep it trimmed.” To prove her point, she ran her fingers through the tangled mess that was just starting to get long. Fate’s lower hair was wild, covering most all of the skin there in strands of a heavy dark brown mixed with a more prominent blonde. “It’s miscolored anyway, so it’s better to shave,” Nanoha agreed with herself.

“H-hey… You know I’m sensitive about that…” Fate blushed more when she saw two binding spells go around her thighs and move out so her legs were spread so she was doing the splits. When she went to balance herself, her wrists were bound and brought above her head, making her back lean against the mirror so she was on full display. “Nanoha?”

“We’re going to clean you.” Nanoha insisted, holding up a finger and making magic weave around Fate to rob her of her clothes. The blonde’s large breasts jiggled and sagged down when the support was lost. The large cock was hunched down as well in a small arc, the head of it laying on the counter. Before any more protest could be made, Nanoha turned on the water faucet and made it warm to the touch. Several handfuls were taken and splashed on the girl next to the sink, dampening the area so Nanoha could pop the top of a can of shaving cream and smear a large puffball of it above the cock. “Now, hold still while I shave you.”

“Sh-shave me!?” Fate wiggled a bit to protest, but found the binds keeping her in check. “Nanoha!?”

“Hmmm?” Nanoha took Fate’s dick in one hand and held it, using her other to run the blade carefully along the shaft. The white cream was removed and the skin had a pretty sheen to it when Nanoha looked. “Oooh, nice.” Reaching over to rinse her razor, Nanoha smiled contently to herself.

Fate blushed hard, watching with nervous eyes as Nanoha continued to shave the skin of her dick. The warm water mixed with the heel of cream and Nanoha’s gentle caressing started taking its toll on her and her cheeks colored when her cock started growing in length. “Nanoha…”

“No,” Nanoha thumped the tip of the cock, making Fate yelp loudly. “You can’t get a hard on.”

“B-but…!” Fate whimpered as she was thumped again, feeling it even harder to keep it down when Nanoha had that sadistic look in her eye. “Ngh…”

Nanoha smirked to herself and smeared the cream along the mound above Fate’s penis so she could start there as well. Carefully she shaved the hair in short strokes, rinsing the blade more than was necessary just to ensure she didn’t nick her wife any. When the cock in her hands started to stiffen again, she thumped the head once more, making it bounce a bit before sagging again. Fate whimpered loudly, but the dick tried to stand up once more. “No,” Nanoha gripped the dick hard in her hand, squeezing it. Fate moaned and panted, trying to focus on anything instead of the pleasurable pain caused in her dick. Moments ticked by and she went soft enough for Nanoha to continue.

Once the top was done, Nanoha lifted Fate’s penis and placed a bind on the head, just tight enough to keep it raised. Her free hand smeared cream along the sack containing Fate’s testicles. Carefully she pulled the skin tight and moved the razor along the curves as best she could, pleased at the result. Stroke after careful stroke was made, and areas were repeated with the aid of more cream before Nanoha was content with the result. A few more handfuls of water were splashed onto the area before she got a small hand towel and wiped it dry. “Much better! Now to make you smell like a girl.” Reaching over she got a bottle of hand lotion and sanitizer that was scented with a soft cucumber melon. Placing way more than what was needed into her palm, Nanoha gripped Fate’s dick and started stroking it up and down, smearing the lotion all over it and using her other hand to rub Fate’s balls.

“Nanoha!” Fate closed her eyes tightly, dick stiffening at once in Nanoha’s hands.

“Oh my my,” Nanoha mused seductively, still smearing the lotion around the area. “Look at this, didn’t I tell you not to get hard?”

“But…” Fate went silent as her cock was grabbed. “I’m sorry!”

Nanoha slowly ran her hand up and down the almost nine inch shaft. The skin was soft and smooth, glistening in the light. The head was still partially covered from Fate’s foreskin, but the purplish colored head was peeking through at the tip. “Well, I think you should be punished for disobeying an order, don’t you?”

Fate felt her cock shoot straight up at the words, fully erect and hard for a full three seconds before it relaxed a little. “Y-yeah…” She tried to shift but couldn’t, still bound on display. A wet trickle was already leaking from her folds covered from her sack, dripping down onto the counter. “Punish me,” the words were almost pleading, holding a requesting appeal to them.

Nanoha pulled her binds, making Fate fall from the counter and hang in the air before being pulled behind her on a leash that went to a new bind around Fate’s neck. Hauling her wife in the air, Nanoha moved her to the bed and sat her down on it. The blonde was on her back, knees now bent and a bind going around both her thigh and shin to keep them that way. Her dick was almost straight up now, but bent towards her stomach to hover over it. “What to do with you…” Nanoha purred, while stripping her clothes off.

When the blue eyed girl was fully stripped, she smirked down at Fate and crawled along the bead until her Face was just before Fate’s penis. Her tongue came out and dragged along the underside of the shaft from the balls all the way to the tip before skillfully wrapping around it and pulling it into her mouth. A hard suction was made and Fate groaned in pleasure. “Just kidding,” Nanoha cooed out when she took her mouth away. When Fate gave her a confused look, Nanoha pushed her hand down at the base of Fate’s cock so it would stand out as much as possible. When she was satisfied, she touched the base, weaving a pink magic circle almost an inch long around the shaft. With a snap of her fingers, it tightened until Fate yelped.

Nanoha watched with pleasure as she stroked Fate’s cock. The foreskin was peeling down a little to reveal the head when her hand went down, and wrapped back up again when she went backwards. Ever so slowly the skin was getting darker, giving a faint red tint as it swelled up. Leaning forward again, Nanoha traced one of Fate’s now bulging veins with her tongue, lapping up the scent of cucumber melon and loving the silky smooth skin. “So biiiiiig,” Nanoha praised, moving to the top and swirling her tongue around the smegma free head thanks to her earlier water splashing and rubbing before the shave. She wiggled her tongue under the foreskin and went around the cock head as much as she could before twirling back around to get all of it.

By now Fate’s dick had swollen to almost one and a half size thickness and almost an extra inch in length. Nanoha moved up and straddled Fate’s lap, grinning as she ran the engorged cock head between her folds long ways. “Want to fuck me?” She asked huskily.

“Y-yes…”

“Too bad,” Nanoha chuckled sadistically. “Your punishment is to get me off alone…” She met Fate’s eyes and licked her lips slowly, making sure Fate was entranced by the motion before sliding her hips down so her cock went before the entrance. Moving back up, Nanoha gripped the dick and began tapping it back against her clit, moaning at the feeling. Fate was squirming now, panting as the sensitive member was used in that way. One of Nanoha’s hands went to her own breasts, massing it fully and teasing her nipple. Her other held Fate’s dick to her slit, running it up and down the lips to offer friction and stimulation.

Fate’s dick was covered in Nanoha’s juices now, shining in the light and sliding with ease along Nanoha’s swollen lips. Several minutes passed by before Nanoha gripped Fate’s cock in her hand fully, pressing the head to her clit and rubbing it against her nub. Her other hand reached down and spread her folds apart, hips pushing forward as if to try and make her swollen clit extend out more. Fate’s cock head was pressed harshly against it and rubbed more, using the foreskin to tease it as well. “I’m…” Nanoha panted. “cumming!”

Fate watched in awe and a light amount of pain as her dick was used as a simple sex toy for her wife. Nanoha’s breasts were heaving, bouncing as she rocked her hips. She felt her cock being slapped against the nub, hearing soft wet sounds as Nanoha’s honey splattered around them from the slaps. Finally, Nanoha’s eyes rolled back, her body arching and hips trembling. Nanoha’s hand got rougher as she demanded her orgasm, tugging and jerking the cock against her clit until Fate could feel the sudden wetness running down her dick. Her balls were coated and it continued to go along the skin until it dripped down into the small damp spot on the sheet where her own vagina had been leaking.

“Good girl,” Nanoha praised. “You made me feel really nice…” Leaning over Fate’s body, Nanoha kissed her a few times before pulling back. “But… I’m not done yet…” Nanoha slid back until her head was above Fate’s dick again. She dipped down and took it into her mouth expertly, sucking and slurping loudly as she licked her own juices up.

“Gah!” Fate bucked her hips upwards, but found them shoved back downs. “Nanoha… please… please let me…”

Nanoha pulled back, stroking Fate’s cock rapidly with her hand. “Let you what?”

“Let me… Let me…” Fate blushed hard. “Throat fuck you!”

Nanoha opened her mouth and sank back down, releasing her hold on Fate so the girl could harshly buck her hips upwards. The binds on her wrists were let go and Fate instantly grabbed Nanoha’s head, shoving it down and burying her swollen member into Nanoha’s throat. The gagging sensation came at once, and Fate pulled the head down harder, pushing her hips up and feeling the gag reflex stroke her cock. She managed to get almost half way in before Nanoha tapped her leg repeatedly, making Fate let go so Nanoha could jet back and cough up spit along Fate’s cock. Deep, ragged gasps of air were taken and she nodded at Fate.

Once again, Fate pulled Nanoha’s head down and held it, now humping her mouth as if it were a pussy. Thrust after hard thrust came, paired with the stroking sensation of Nanoha’s convulsing. “I’m… gonna cum!” Fate yelled, pulling Nanoha’s head down harder despite the pleading taps on her thigh. She forced Nanoha’s nose to her mound, cock full buried in the gargling girl’s neck as Nanoha struggled to pull away and not to pass out from it. “Cumming!” Fate shrieked again, only to yell in pain as there was a sudden squeezing on her balls.

When Fate’s hands retracted, Nanoha jerked back, the ten inch cock slipping from her throat and twitching fiercely as it tried to cum. Coughing harshly, Nanoha spat up several times onto Fate’s cock, chest heaving. Her mascara was smeared down her face now and was covered from her own spit that was dripping in globs from her cheeks and chin. “Bitch,” Nanoha accused, squeezing Fate’s balls that now had a bind around them so she couldn’t get her orgasm. “When I tap, it means let me breathe, right?”

“R-right!” Fate screamed, body shaking as her balls were roughly fondled. The cum was backed up in her shaft now, caught somewhere just under the base of the first bind. “I’m… I’m sorry!”

“Are you?” Nanoha asked, glaring in dominant but loving way. “Then you should make it up to me, right?” Another long string of spit fell from her face and onto Fate’s covered cock.

“Y-yes… just.. please!” Fate was almost crying. “It hurts!”

“Good,” Nanoha sneered, smirking as she caught the turned on expression mixed with light fear and overwhelming trust in Fate’s eyes. She made the bind on Fate’s balls a little tighter to ensure they would swell and then turned her attention to the still shaking shaft that she knew to have an orgasm already stuck inside of it. “Then I’m going to milk you dry without letting a single drop escape your lovely shaft.” The woman straddled the soaked cock and sat down so the swollen tip could enter her vagina. Reaching under, Nanoha put two fingers on Fate’s dick and rolled the foreskin down, enjoying the look on Fate’s face as the swollen member made the skin stretch. “So, Nanoha sank down slowly, feeling her insides spread apart as the well lubed stick split her. “Can I use our cock as a sex toy until I’m satisfied?”

“Y-yes!” Fate allowed her wrists to be bound again and moved above her head. Her hips had circles around them, keeping her pinned to the bed, and she felt her breasts move up as they were bound together as well, pressed together hard. “Use it… as much as you want…” She moaned and purred, feeling overwhelmed from the domination that she loved so much from her partner. “Use me as a sex toy…”

Nanoha smirked and leaned down to Bite Fate’s neck hard before licking the skin there. Her lips moved to Fate’s ear and whispered softly. “Remember the safety word?” She felt Fate nod and smiled to herself. “I love you.” Kissing Fate’s ear, Nanoha went back in character and sat up on Fate’s body. “Now… to punish you for taking advantage of letting you throat fuck me, bitch.” She rolled her hips and grinned, feeling Fate’s dick still trying to release the built up cum into her womb.

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Satashi-kun, I love you. It doesn't matter if you're futa, let's run away together.
But seriously, it was a fun story, and I'm glad you wrote it.

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holy cow..that is one dominating nanoha!!! ah way to go satashi....shaving fate's balls...now that is something never written before ;P

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After reading this, I'll need a new shirt, mine is covered of blood.

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May finish it tonight.

How were others liking it so far?

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My blood.......You killed me.....(not that i mind though)XD

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*nosebleed*

SATASHI... THAT WAS THE MOST INTENSE SEX SCENE I'VE EVER READ. IT WAS AWESOME.

You just made me anemic... AGAIN... xD

It reminds me of the chatroom...

Fate: SPANK ME NANOHA!
Nanoha: Of course dear~ *spanks*
Fate: *Moans*

Lalalalala~ I did not roleplay... or did I? >:]

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LOLS~ you guys are so much fun hahahaha im crying/laughing too hard.
Please do continue this asap Satashi, its smooking hot and thank god I stuff my nose beforehand

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I enjoyed this part of a lemon quite well Satori, it was rather hot and steamy and from the looks of it *looks at other posts* you may have killed a few people. Well, I honestly can't wait to see the next part, but take your time with it, no need in rushing something so great. 'Till than *tips hat* good day to you.

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when will the FateXAlicia lemon will come?

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To be honest, I found this particular story a bit of a turn off, at times of course.
Whenever balls came into play in this fic I got negative feeling.
I should see the comment about shaving Fate balls earlier than reading this fic...
But that's just me, it's not my kind of fetish, I expected a bit different kind of futa Fate, I just find futa girls hot in overall till they won't change into half-males by having balls, a penis instead of clit is acceptable by my standard.

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Same here, but as long as they are in essence the same person I think this shouldn't matter too much.

Still I'm happy that Satori-chan seems to be enjoying writing this fic, and that people is having a fun time reading this not very conventional fic ^^

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@everyone: Glad you like it so far. I'm hoping to have it completed tonight, if possible... Depends if I buy Cave Story on the Wii or not... :D

This goes by guidelines set by the person who is getting it, but I have freedom to play with it :3 Normally Futa to me is just penis instead of a clit, but this time it's different. Besides, shaving was really amusing to write lol.

I like Dom!Nanoha as well as reverse_dom!Nanoha (like in Mother/Daughters) so these are interesting to write. Binds are awesome when used correctly :D no skill needed, just draw out what you want with magic hehe.

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OK...if there's one thing that I'll admit about this one...is I can only put this in two words.

HOT and Amusing.

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Love the dom Nanoha both ways...are you updating soon. Much get blood transfusion

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*fell off with stupid smile and nosebleed*

Go Satashi-sama, Go Satashi-sama.

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Wow...Dominant Nanoha...

*nosebleed*

*Faint*

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Love this story...dying from nosebleed* please continue soon

Nanonymous
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Please continue. Want to see how Fate is punished

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Accidentally, I found another Futa Fate story in this artist's website...For those who can read Japanese, it is actually quite sweet...

http://astllatte.xxxxxxxx.jp/r001.htm