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Not many replies this time, was it not as good as before?

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i think people arent replying because their keyboard is broken cos of a blood overflow in the system

What would you do if there was a cure to death?

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I blame the holiday weekend here in the States! Wan, wan! Cute!

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*will be back after recovering from blood lost* @¬@

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*recovers* lawls I actually read it all this morning and was going to reply but then passed out xD Tis really a cute story satori <3 Though now iunno if i'll ever see einhart as anything but an M to vivio xD.

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Wan, wan wan! *barks in happiness towards new update on fic*

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I just got back from the hospital, Now i have to go back again because of blood loss........

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Chapter 2 final part!

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I wasn’t sure how long we had stayed there like that, but by the time we finally moved the sweat had dried on my body. My hair was stiff and I felt a little lazy from almost falling asleep. Vivio had initiated the movement by gently patting my rear, asking me to let her up. I slowly pushed myself up and stood, hugging her once she stood as well. She held me for a moment before her hands glided along my body and gave a fluid lifting motion to make me fall backwards into her cradled arms. I was being held bridal style and she leaned over to kiss my forehead while walking us to my bathroom. I was gently sat on the bathtub side so my feet were out of it and Vivio turned on the tap, checking the temperature as it ran out.

My bathtub was a large style jet tub, big enough for me to comfortably lounge in after a long training session, but still too small for two people. I didn’t mind this too much, however, and the thought of bathing with Vivio constantly really made me feel special. She seemed to be pleased with the temperature now and stood up so she could take off her clothes. At seeing this, I tilted my head to the side, wondering how this would play to her fetish if I was naked. “Do I take mine off too?” I was forced to ask.

“No,” she assured me while peeling off her socks. “You got a good kind of suit, it lets your skin breathe while it’s on so it doesn’t get uncomfortable when wearing for an extended amount of time. It also lets water through to your skin, that’s why I got soap as well as shampoo. Double washing you will ensure that you’re clean through and through.” Her knowledge made me a little bit impressed, and we got into the tub together. We both sat on our knees while facing each other and Vivio pulled the faucet head from the holder so she could make the small hose extend out and allow her to aim where the spray went. “Too hot?”

“No, it--” I closed my mouth and shook my head. “Arf!”

“Good girl,” she soothed me, shifting to spray my hair. Her breasts were right in my face, and she didn’t try to hide the fact that she knew this. I felt her nipples graze my skin quite a few times and I started to feel a little turned on by it, despite having just orgasmed not half an hour ago. Despite this, the pampering feeling of hot water running through my hair and her hand over me made me calm down. The water went to focus on my body next, making me let out a content sigh as I felt it trickle down me. She was right about my uniform, and it was almost as if I wasn’t wearing it when the water slid down my fur. It was then that I heard sloshing noises and felt the sensation in the base of my spine that indicated that my tail was lazily wagging behind me. “You like this, Ein-chan?” Vivio whispered to me softly.

I made a soft sound that was a mix between a hum and pleased whine, which earned me a hug. Returning it, we held each other close for a moment before I allowed her to continue the spoiling of me. Soap was lathered on a luffa and I got to watch Vivio take my hand to hold it out before myself so she could carefully move the suds along my skin and fur. She paid careful attention to every part of my body, even going as far as to rub each of my fingers individually. She took her time, lathering my body slowly. I was forced to close my eyes in sheer bliss of the motions, moaning almost sleepily as the gentle pressure of her fingertips and the warmth that followed her every motion. My neck was rubbed up to behind my ears, my shoulders were massaged affectionately, and I was held in a long embrace while my back was so lovingly cleaned. She took her time everywhere, making me blush and moan as my breasts were cleaned and give small pants when she rubbed along my flower.

By the time she was done, I was almost purring in delight. It was like a full body massage by a professional, but more intimate and loving because it was Vivio doing it. My hair was being done now, and my eyes were still closed while she rubbed way longer than was needed to clean it. The scent was actually intoxicating now, leaving me smelling like the tropics. Warm water flowed through my hair as I was rinsed and when she declared me done, I almost wanted to tell her I would sleep for the rest of the day.

I had wanted to clean her as well, but I was too lazy now, on the verge of awake and asleep and not really noticing anything around me. By the time I was more aware of my situation again, Vivio was done and turning off the water. She got out of the tub and stood on my fluffy bathmat before crouching down and holding out her hands. “Come here, Ein-chan?” From her crouching, I knew what she wanted. I didn’t have any problems with it right now, and I carefully crawled from the tub, allowing her to help me into a sitting position on my knees. I knew what she would say, having heard it countless times today, but even so, hearing “Good girl!” again made me smile.

She was paying so much attention to me, I felt spoiled rotten. Every simple thing I did made her beam at me and praise me, and I strangely liked it. I think, deep down, under my quiet personality, I really enjoyed the attention. Right now I was getting even more of it, smiling as my hair and body was towel dried before a hair blower was taken to me. My whole body was groomed in this way, paired with a brush that Vivio had stolen from my counter. Although the hair on my outfit wasn’t long enough to comb, she still took pleasure in making sure none of it was tangled before going to my real hair on my head. It took a long while, but she dried it while being careful not to hurt me from the blower’s heat. When she was finally done, I was completely dry and sporting a cheerleader style high ponytail. “Okay, Ein-chan, wait on the couch okay? I’ll be out shortly.”

I shook my head and stayed sitting, looking up at her as she stood. “Oh, you want to watch?” She asked me, getting a nod. “Silly puppy.” She giggled and patted my head before going about taking care of herself. I got to watch her fix her hair and dry it, as well as put on some more of my clothes that I had originally left there for me to change into after Vivio left today. Now that she was dressed, she bent over and smiled at me. “Come on, Ein-chan.” She held out her hands and clapped twice to encourage me to take a few uncertain steps forward in a crawl. “That’s it… come on.” She backed up and I walked on all fours for another few steps before giving an apologetic look to her. “Oh, it’s okay, it’s okay!” Vivio quickly ran the small gap between us and took my hands pulling me to my feet. “You don’t have to right now! It’s okay!” From her worried voice, I knew she was worried about scaring me, so I encouraged her by giving a small kiss to her cheek.

“Maybe one day,” I whispered to her.

“Okay, thank you, Einhart-san.” She kissed my cheek and then took a step away, smiling and pulling on my arms. “This way, Ein-chan!”

I then realized that she was calling me Ein-chan as her pet and Einhart-san as her girlfriend. The silly nature of it made me laugh to myself, giggling at the thought of me actually having an honest to god ‘pet name’ from her. She was amused as well, and was still grinning when I sat on the couch. Vivio pet me a moment before going to the bags she had brought earlier. When she came back, I realized that she had brought her manicure kit that Hayate had given her as a birthday present. I cocked my head to the side and she tapped my nose playfully with a finger. “I’m going to groom you,” she promised. “That includes your nails as well as hair.”

I never, ever painted my nails, so I was curious at having it done by someone else. I watched her carefully clip each of my nails down really short and then proceed to glue on fake nails that were a little long, but curved to a gentle round tip that I didn’t mind too much. True, they were longer than I would have liked, but oh well. After that, Vivio took her time to paint them a greenish silver that matched my hair perfectly. Finally, she peeled off clear stickers from a sheet designed for nails and painstakingly lined them up just right before smoothing them and clear coating over them. When one hand was done, I brought it to my face to inspect the small designs, sweatdropping lightly when I saw white dog bones and stars over my polish. My other hand was completed shortly thereafter and, to my surprise, even my toenails were groomed, clipped, pressed, painted, and stickered.

When Vivio declared herself finished, I felt a little weird. My nails were always plain and simple, but were now so blatantly overdone and prettied up, everyone would notice. Well… at least she was smiling at me still. She must have wanted to do this alone for a long time. “They look wonderful,” I told her, getting a wide smile and a hug. “I love it, good job, Vivio.”

“Mmn!” She hummed, squeezing me tightly. “It looks wonderful on you!” Pulling back, she kissed my nose and we shared a giggle together.

All in all, today has been rather amusing and eventful. Although I started off a little worried about all of this, I had to admit that being pampered was nice. I was actually looking forward to tomorrow as well now. I knew that we would have a Strike Arts meet with Nove and our friends, followed by Vivio and mine’s special one on one training in Kaiser Arts. After all of that, Vivio promised me a warm meal, a nice bath, and more massaging that she referred to as ‘petting’. If this was all it took to make her happy… then, yes, I got off really easy.

To be continued in chapter 3!

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^//^ thats so nice~ <3~

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Einhart is such a lucky "pet", to have such a loving "owner".

I wonder what'll happen after their training sessions.

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langrisser wrote:
Einhart is such a lucky "pet", to have such a loving "owner".

I wonder what'll happen after their training sessions.

probably more love making ^_^

.... or DRAMA!

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Satashi wrote:
langrisser wrote:
Einhart is such a lucky "pet", to have such a loving "owner".

I wonder what'll happen after their training sessions.

probably more love making ^_^

.... or DRAMA!

As mush as I'd now like to see Ein hump jump Vivio, in this case I'm actually more interested in the conflicts sure to come.
Thus I say plot first, sex later (unless Vivio asks Ein to do something freaky during it)!

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BTW, was the sex scene too much? Was it good, should there be more or less? Anyone have anything they're really wanting to see?

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*cough* more *cough* >//>

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It was pretty cute and good as it was actually though I'd kinda like to see ein-chan take a dominating role too xD. Iunno how it would fit in but maybe like take vivio by surprise or something?

*Also a long shot but I kinda miss Syn too, she kinda poofed when einhart, corona and rio became vivio's friend. Though I know original character and such but just thought I'd throw it out there xD*

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Personnaly, I don't find the sex scene was too much, and it was a nice scene.

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Fullblown M Ein is awesome :D

Write moar please :3

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XD Thanks for the input~

For the next chapter, I might do it in Vivio's POV. It's going to focus on her trying to train Einhart to do tricks (Paw, shake, sit, lay down, roll over, fetch, ect).What do you think?

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that would be kinda cool ^^
a different POV here and there would be nice, a different perspective on the situation~

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<3 I lahv et :3

Maybe you could add a whip scene to that too? XD Just a thought lol completely unrelated but ok xD

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<3 I lahv et :3

Maybe you could add a whip scene to that too? XD Just a thought lol completely unrelated but ok xD

How would a whip scene work? What would you want with it?

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I honestly feel that that's a bad idea. Showing the events from Einhart's perspective would give insight into how (humiliated? shy?) she feels about being trained, but at the same time how she may (not) be willing to follow through. I think that... if you showed it from Vivio's... it wouldn't reveal anything that you couldn't show through Einhart's perspective anyway.
I think you should use Vivio's PoV sparingly, such as when you have to show how she feels but can't do it through her actions (introspective reflections when she argues with Einhart?).
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Well, this is from Vivio's POV because it needs to show something that Ein can't see. I wanted to show a bit of how hard Vivio is working for this as well, so it doesn't look like she's just asking for everything. I don'tplan on using her POV often, this may be the only time actually

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Ah, I see, I see.
In that case, it's fine.
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*nodnodnod* I do like the thought of that tho maybe 'walk' before fetch? xD

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Saiori wrote:
*nodnodnod* I do like the thought of that tho maybe 'walk' before fetch? xD

How about learning to walk BY fetching? Like Vivio teaching her it's okay to do it by playing fetch.

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Ah indeed sounds like a plan xD. Though one more question, if its fetch I guess unless its a huge apartment and they can do it indoors, I wonder if Einhart would allow herself to go outside to play fetch in the costume xD.

All in all I'm looking forward to your next update~ Ganbatte ne satori <3

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Ah indeed sounds like a plan xD. Though one more question, if its fetch I guess unless its a huge apartment and they can do it indoors, I wonder if Einhart would allow herself to go outside to play fetch in the costume xD.

All in all I'm looking forward to your next update~ Ganbatte ne satori <3

XD no, not yet! Einhart will only wear it inside (for now!)

If you look at Ein's apartment in the manga, it's a loft style, looking like she rented a gym. There's enough room for a sparring mat, a bed, weight lifting equipment, ect. So she has plenty of room for Ein to walk on all fours for several seconds to fetch something. ^_^

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;o~ for now xD Now I can't wait till she gets the courage to go outside and see what happens when she's seen by somebody she knows xDD *cough syn randomly coming back* Sorry imagination talking xD

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;o~ for now xD Now I can't wait till she gets the courage to go outside and see what happens when she's seen by somebody she knows xDD *cough syn randomly coming back* Sorry imagination talking xD

XD that will be wayyyyy at the end, and may not be part of the official story :P

I do plan on her wearing the suit outside (under her clothes), but I'm not sure about walking her naked in the park just yet....

Everyone else's thoughts?