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Manori wrote:

As mush as I'd now like to see Ein hump jump Vivio, in this case I'm actually more interested in the conflicts sure to come.
Thus I say plot first, sex later (unless Vivio asks Ein to do something freaky during it)!

Actually, I have been asked and am really debating having Vivio buy a toy that's shaped like a dog, and ask Einhart to use it with their strap on to mount her doggy style. It would be one of those awkward moments that Einhart refuses at first, but may come back to after they get a little more comfortable with each other.

Only reason I am debating it instead of going for the drama/kinkiness of it is becasue I'm worried it might take away from the fic or squick people out. I want sex to enhance the story, not the story be an excuse for sex. you know?

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And Thats why your fics are always a joy to read. you dont rush things, you study them and see if it will benefit the story or not. (on i side note, should i call you satashi or satori, sorry just asking)

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Negi Springfield wrote:
And Thats why your fics are always a joy to read. you dont rush things, you study them and see if it will benefit the story or not. (on i side note, should i call you satashi or satori, sorry just asking)

I normally go in without thinking :3 But on a story like this, I tend to weigh the options. I want my readers to understand their issues and troubles, not just read it for the HLS.

As for what to call me, whatever you want ^^ The chatroom mainly calls me Satori ^^

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Satashi wrote:

I want sex to enhance the story, not the story be an excuse for sex. you know?

That is exactly what I was afraid this story would become. However, I'm glad to know you're thinking about everything so seriously!

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Actually, I have been asked and am really debating having Vivio buy a toy that's shaped like a dog, and ask Einhart to use it with their strap on to mount her doggy style.

I admit, this was the main sex scene I was thinking about...*wipes drool off mouth*.

But when you say shaped like a dog, do you mean shaped like an actual dog or a dog's wenis? (the former is just weird, while the latter I think would be much too squicky)

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It would be one of those awkward moments that Einhart refuses at first, but may come back to after they get a little more comfortable with each other.

Only reason I am debating it instead of going for the drama/kinkiness of it is becasue I'm worried it might take away from the fic or squick people out.


As long as that scene is left more towards the end and not rushed, I think it may actually demonstrate the fact that Ein is now more comfortable playing out this fantasy of Vivio's.

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I admit, this was the main sex scene I was thinking about...*wipes drool off mouth*.

But when you say shaped like a dog, do you mean shaped like an actual dog or a dog's wenis? (the former is just weird, while the latter I think would be much too squicky)

The latter. They actually make them :D

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As long as that scene is left more towards the end and not rushed, I think it may actually demonstrate the fact that Ein is now more comfortable playing out this fantasy of Vivio's.

:D It'd be one of the final things, if it happened

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Satashi wrote:
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I admit, this was the main sex scene I was thinking about...*wipes drool off mouth*.

But when you say shaped like a dog, do you mean shaped like an actual dog or a dog's wenis? (the former is just weird, while the latter I think would be much too squicky)

The latter. They actually make them :D


...what? well, sh*t...
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is the knot included?

Doggy style with a regular wenis I can see Ein doing, but with a dog's? That's going beyond the comfort zone and possibly into bestiality territory, right there (unless this kink is already some form of it...)

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You seem to know a lot about it for some reason :D

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Ewwwwww....
I thought it would mean that strapon would be shaped like some cute puppy or something.
Well if that's the other choice that goes beyond my comfort zone, cause it would imply that Vivio is into some form of bestiality, cause I don't even want to think why she would need her girlfriend to have a strapon looking as actual dog penis involved.
If such scene would be included I just would prefer some kind of warning before, so I could stop reading this further, I don't mind Vivio training Ein in a bit extreme ways, but that's just too much for me, cause it imply something very wrong going with Vivio furry fetish I don't even want to imagine.
But I really liked final part for chapter 2.

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Don't worry, its not going to happen :D

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ShiroAka wrote:
Ewwwwww....
Well if that's the other choice that goes beyond my comfort zone, cause it would imply that Vivio is into some form of bestiality,

So, applying that same logic does that mean I am really straight for wanting my girlfriend to use a penis shaped dildo on me? SERIOUSLY???

Dildos come in so many different shapes, sizes, textures and colors... it is all about the feeling.

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My reply was based on Vivio character we learn to know in this fic and only for her, a hard furry fetish addict.
It was not meant to generalise what lesbians/bisexuals do in their bedrooms and their motives.

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Chapter 3 START!

Vivio's POV this time!

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I smiled happily while browsing the local pet store near the school. Classes had let out a long while ago, and we all already had our usual after-school training session with Nove. Now Einhart had already gone home and was waiting for me to get there. I had this extra stop on the way, and I was humming to myself while I looked at everything around me. Einhart and I have been doing our ‘puppy play’ for two weeks now, and she seemed to be enjoying it a lot more than I thought she would. Every night she would compliment my cooking, as well as purr in delight when I massaged her. When we bathed together, she would selfishly lay up against me and let me tend to her, sometimes even almost falling asleep during it. I didn’t mind, though, as it was nice for me as well. After all of this, I was sure she would enjoy doing something else as well, which was why I was at the pet shop again, wondering what toys I could buy that she would like to play with.

Puppy Love III
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I looked down into the plastic basket I was carrying and couldn’t help but give a nervous grin. I already had a Frisbee, and a small rope that had large knots on the end, and I was debating more. I really, really wanted to buy a large bone for her to chew on, as the mental image made me want to squeal with delight at how cute it would be. I could just picture her on all fours, head down and gnawing on the bone while her tail wagged spastically behind her. I had to stop myself from grabbing one and putting it into my basket and walked away from the area quickly. She was still new to this, and no matter how much I wanted to see that, I respected her enough to move slowly. We were having fun together, and I wanted that more than anything else, even if it was the cutest image I had ever envisioned…

After picking up more shampoo and paying for my items, I headed to the shopping district and bought things for dinner using money from Einhart and mine’s joint wallet that I started carrying due to her insistence that I couldn’t spoil her so much. Although I didn’t mind it, it really upset her when I paid for everything. We had a small spat over it, but I backed down in the end. I couldn’t afford to buy dinner for two every day for very long with my allowance, and we both knew it… but it didn’t make me want to take care of her any less, though.

Arriving at Einhart's house, I opened the door with the key she gave me and called out my arrival cheerfully. “I’m home!” I shouted playfully, getting a tackle hug from Einhart as soon as the door closed. I hugged her as best I could while holding the bags and inhaled her scent. She smelt like a freshly bathed puppy, and I still felt intoxicated whenever I inhaled her new scent when hugging. We pulled back and shared a small peck to the lips before she let me go and followed me to the kitchen.

She was already in her uniform, and was so used to it by now, she didn’t even blush when I looked over her mostly nude body. Her breasts were on full display, free and jiggling with every motion she made. Her lower half showed wild dark green hair that was rather thick and curly, and so thick I could actually tangle my fingers in it after we made love… Actually now that I think about it, I wonder if she would let me trim it…

Einhart moved a hand in front of her flower and I blushed, realizing that I was staring. “Ah, sorry,” I apologized with a small giggle. I leaned over and gave the slightly shorter girl a kiss on the cheek. “Lost in thought.”

“What are you thinking, staring there?” She inquired, moving to hug me from behind so she couldn’t be looked at.

“You’ll find out later,” I promised her, making her squeeze me just a little more. I finished setting out the things needed for dinner and took Einhart's hands away from around me so I could lead her to the couch while still holding her hands. “Here, sit.” I requested of her, smiling brightly when she sat on the floor. Her knees were bent to sit on, but were slightly parted so her hands could go between them, much like a dog would actually sit. She looked up at me and I patted her on the head. “Good girl.” She smiled and giggled, nuzzling her head up against my hand when I pet her. “I bought some things for you,” I revealed, going back to the counter to pick up the other bag.

“Wan?” She asked me curiously, following me while I came back to the couch to sit in front of her.

“Look,” I smiled, pulling out the two objects. “A Frisbee to play with and… a tug-o-war rope.” I showed her each item and smiled at her. “I thought… maybe we could go a little farther?” I gave her a questioning look and to my surprise, she smiled at me and I saw her tail wag behind her, reacting to her mood. “Alright!” I leaned over and gave her a tight hug, holding it for a long time. “You’re the best, Ein-chan.” She barked at hearing that and I giggled. “Yoshi, yoshi,” I stroked her hair, causing her to smile and giggle at the attention that she had grown to fully enjoy. “Okay, Ein-chan, I’m going to toss the Frisbee a little bit across the room, I want you to walk properly over to it and bring it back, okay?”

Einhart looked at me a moment while she thought, but eventually nodded at me. Her tail had slowed down, but it picked back up when she nodded to herself. “Wan! Wan!”

“Okay! Here goes!” I gently tossed the item a few feet away and watched in delight as Einhart turned and walked on all fours to it. I got a spectacular view of her rear as well as her flower, and I felt the familiar feeling of getting turned on start to creep between my legs before I pushed the thought away. My ever so loving puppy picked up the Frisbee in her hand and turned around to crawl back. Her breasts were swaying under her and I gulped, realizing that this was playing on my kink more than I thought it would. She reached up and handed me the Frisbee and I shook my head to clear the perverted thoughts. “G-good, but you aren’t’ supposed to use your hands.” I held up a finger. “Paws can’t grip objects, right?” Her face colored scarlet, but she nodded anyway. “Okay… Fetch!” I tossed it again and Einhart moved away from me, moving over to the Frisbee and staring at it.

Slowly, Einhart lowered her head and bit the curved edge of the Frisbee that had fallen upside down. With it in her mouth, she turned to me and trotted faithfully back to me, her face red, but her tail wagging. “Good girl!” I almost shouted when she laid it at my feet. Moving off the couch, I hugged her tightly and rubbed her back. “Ein-chan, you learn so fast!” I saw her tail speed up, wagging back and forth quickly as I held her. After a few moments we pulled apart and she licked my face, smiling as if she had been wanting to hear that for quite some time now. “Want to play some more?” I asked hopefully, getting a nod and a woof.

I sat back on the couch and picked up the Frisbee again, carefully tossing it and watching my girlfriend trot away, her rear shaking as she did so. This time the Frisbee landed correctly and she looked at it curiously a moment before nudging it, attempting to bite it but unable to do so since it was curved downwards to the floor. I giggled at this and she looked at me in shock, eyes wide at my laughter. She set a determined face and nudged the toy with her nose, trying to make it so she could bite it without using her hands. This lead to an extremely amusing full minute where Einhart nudged the toy across the floor while trying to bite it in vain. Finally she growled deep in her throat and I noticed her reach for it a bit before growling again and moving her hand back. Using her nose, she nudged it along the floor until it hit the bottom of the couch. I was laughing fully now, fallen over on the couch on my side and holding my stomach while I cackled at the sight.

Einhart kept struggling, and even barked at it for my pleasure, which sent me into another rolling fit. She let me enjoy this for another minute before she finally broke down and carefully applied force to it so it would lift up when pressed against the couch. Her tongue came out and caught it, curling to bring it to her mouth and allow her to bit it fully. Her tail was wagging spastically at her deed and she trotted back to me with a look in her eye that clearly stated her accomplishment.

Wiping a tear from my eyes, I coughed and laughed a bit more before reaching out to take the Frisbee. “G- good” I chuckled again. “Good girl.” I tried to pull the Frisbee back, but she didn’t let it go. I blinked and pulled again, this time feeling Einhart bite it harder and pull back. “Ein-chan?” I pulled again, only to have her growl at me and pull back. She was looking at me in clear defiance and pulled back, making me let go of the Frisbee. “W…What!?” I moved from the couch to go around her, trying to take the Frisbee. Again she growled and turned her head so I would miss. “H-hey! You’re… you’re not supposed to do that!” Was this revenge for my laughing!?

I moved around Einhart again, grabbing the Frisbee and pulling as much as I dared so I wouldn’t hurt her teeth. “E-Ein-chan, you’re supposed to let go!” She knew this! She was smart! “Ein-chan! Drop! I mean it!” She growled again and shook her head, knowing full well I couldn’t pull hard enough to free it because it might hurt her. “Bad! Bad Ein-chan! Let go!” She met my eye and I could tell she was thoroughly enjoying her payback for making her use her mouth. “Ein-chaaaaaaan!” I whined, tugging and twisting it to try and make her let go. She had the upper hand here, and she was abusing it. “Please! Please drop it. Mou, Ein-chan! Drop! Let go! I mean it!” My commands were ignored and she began to back up, forcing me to take a step forward so it wouldn’t pull too hard. “This isn’t fair!” I was blushing now, embarrassed out of my mind that she was doing this to me. “Ein-chan, DROP!” I pulled again and she let it go, making me stumble back and land on my butt. “Oomph!”

Einhart was laughing now, sitting on her knees while holding her sides. Small tears were coming from her eyes with the laughter and her whole body was shaking. Despite me repeatedly telling her she was being bad, she kept on laughing, having to pause to take deep breaths while I tried to regain some of my dignity. A few moments passed as I glared at her, arms crossed, and she took her time to calm down. When she was finally done, she took a long breath to calm down and then grinned at me, going back to all fours and walking to my feet. “Are you done being defiant?” I asked curiously, getting a nod. “Mou… Okay then.” I pet her. “I forgive you. Now then… Fetch!” I tossed it lightly.

Luckily this time it landed upside down and she was able to easily trot her way over to it and pluck it up with her teeth. Her eyes were sparkling and her tail wagging along with her rear as she came back to me, lifting her head so I could reach down and take it. “Good gi--!” I praised, pulling the Frisbee, only to have her teeth bear down. “…Ein-chaaaaaaaaan!” She was grinning, teeth beared and biting the plastic hard. Her eyes were sharp and clear on her defiance to me. “Bad! Drop! Don’t make me do this again! I mean it! Drop! Ein-chan! I’m going to count to three.” I held up three fingers to show my point, lowering them as I went. “One… Twoooo…. Let go dangit!”

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That was awesome~
maybe u could make a chapter in Vivio's POV and a chapter in Einhart's POV or something =P
I get my revenge on Vivio laughing at me! =3
i wonder what would happened next... im not listening to vivio again... =3
<3~~~

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That was awesome~
maybe u could make a chapter in Vivio's POV and a chapter in Einhart's POV or something =P
I get my revenge on Vivio laughing at me! =3
i wonder what would happened next... im not listening to vivio again... =3
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XD you need a spanking :P

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O//O n-n-n-no i dont! >//<
speaking of spanking... ehto... u know what im gonna ask right?
im guess u either forgot... or u r still really busy... but i say forgot... >.>

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Ah, that was refreshing. such a nice mood they have there. A good chapter and a good read for me! (wonder what einharts thoughts were?)

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I see Vivio lacks authority with her "puppy", she needs to show Einhart who's the boss, else it'll be Vivio who'll become the "pet". XD

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i think its kinda nice that einhart is being disobedient, because all pets are naughty sometimes =P

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Vivio didn't do it right. You're supposed to do something else when teaching your pet to do tricks!

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Oh man that was a fun read xD Good to see einchan having fun with this too. Now the thought of einhart laughing and grinning like that, soo cuteee xD~

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By coincidenceTHISappeared today on 4chan.

It might explain some things...like why Nanoha would be cool with this...

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I love this puppy play. Wish this was NanoFate though. Had similar idea

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Oh man that was a fun read xD Good to see einchan having fun with this too. Now the thought of einhart laughing and grinning like that, soo cuteee xD~

need more fanart! :D

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By coincidenceTHISappeared today on 4chan.

It might explain some things...like why Nanoha would be cool with this...

There's a reason Nanoha is okay with puppy play ^.~

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I love this puppy play. Wish this was NanoFate though. Had similar idea

Sorry, I like Hartio better now :3 you should write it as NanoFate then!

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I wonder who will win this 'tug of war' in the end, will Vivio completely break Ein to do whatever she wants, or it will be Ein who will dominate Vivio while using her furry weakness, or they'll reach some compromise...

And it was nice to see a chapter based on Vivio pov, at least we see a bit about what she's thinking.

I hope in next chapters we will get a scene where someone from their friends like Rio, Corona or Nove, or maybe even Fate, would make a surprise visit to Ein apartment at some point to see her in this new look ;)

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Love how rebellious Ein's acting - it's adorable.

And I know I said to put plot first, but I think this would be a good time for Ein to raep jump Vi and bite lick her all over :D (since she's currently in a disobedient mind set)