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Queens of Darkness

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What will Fate do if Nanoha falls in darkness and cannot save her beloved Nanoha?
Fate is confronting Nanoha at the place where they first met. They are alone.
“Nanoha, please come with me. I know you have killed people during your recent missions but it is not too late to come back.”“I won’t, my dear Fate-chan.”
“Nanoha?”
Nanoha transforms into her barrier jacket. Her barrier jacket is fully black in color. “I won’t go back, Fate-chan. I can’t do it.” “Nanoha…” “I will continue killing people even our own friends but I will tell you one thing.”
Nanoha walks close to Fate and kisses her lips deeply. “I won’t kill you no matter what you do. I love you so much.” “Nanoha, I love you too.” Nanoha then opens a portal behind Fate.
“Nanoha, what portal is this?”
“I will go to a palace of darkness that I made especially for us both only. Do you want to come?”
Fate says without thinking. “You have to convince me first though.”
“Sure. How you want me to convince you?” “I want darkness power as well. I don’t care about anything else except being with you, my love.”“Of course.”
“Stop right there!” Crono appears behind them.
“Brother!” “Fate, I will have to arrest you and Nanoha.” “Really? Nanoha, can you beat him up? Just don’t kill him. Let him have a taste on what happens when he stops us.” “Your pleasure, my love. Chain Bind!” Crono could not move as a dark Chain Bind is preventing him from moving. “No way.” “And now, DIVINE BUSTER!” Nanoha shoots a black Divine Buster at Crono and it hit him. He is flung back and fainted. “Now, shall we, Fate-chan?” “Ok!” “O darkness, please give my love dark power as well and same as mine.” Fate feels her power changes and transforms into her barrier jacket. She is suing the same barrier jacket as Nanoha now. “Same huh?” “Of course. Let’s go before we are interrupted.” “Yup!” “Mamas!” “Vivio?” Nanoha and Fate turn around to see Vivio running towards them. “Mamas, are you leaving?” “Yeah, we are leaving. Sorry, Vivio.” “Is alright, mamas just go ahead.” “Vivio.” Vivio kisses Nanoha and Fate’s cheeks. Both of them then kiss her cheek back. “Goodbye, Vivio!” “Goodbye, Mamas! And I will take care of Einheart-chan well!” “Glad to hear that!” Nanoha and Fate enter the portal together while holding hands.
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Nanoha and Fate had dressed themselves in their black princess costume. Fate is now lying on Nanoha’s feet. “No one can disturb us now right, Fate-chan?” “Of course. If anyone tries to, we will just kill them off without mercy even if our friends attack us.” “That’s because we are called…” “The Queens of Darkness.”

P.S: First time writing a NanoFate fanfiction

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Thats a pretty good fic you wrote,Good job :)

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Ty

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It could use some polish, but the idea is certainly interesting.

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I agree. The idea is interesting and has a lot of potential, it's not common to see and evil Nanoha and Fate.

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So u like my idea? Thanks.

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I actually hope there could be a doujin based on this

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A story where they both fall to the Dark Side ? Interesting !