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Tokoharu's Evening Rain [Uncensored MV]

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WoW~ Okay, this one just kinda came together faster than I thought. I'm not aiming for perfection so this will do for [Evening Rain]. Absolutely uncensored. Adult 18+ label.

The color effects in the opening card was inspired by the MSLN Movie 1st booth at Comiket 79. The huge sign at the booth changed colors and it was mesmerizing like the effects seen in the MV.

There's a hold up on [Love Countdown]. I don't have a song in my head for it yet. And the ending is just so, so cruel...poor Nanoha. I might actually do two versions and change the ending to a "happier one". Basically, Momoko never came home that day....

I actually have potential songs for [Koi wo Shiyou] and [Baby! Baby! Baby!]. So I guess I might as well complete Tokoharu's collection. [Koi] is going to give me wrist pain...so long!

Here it is:

Evening Rain by Tokoharu
Scanlations by NanoFate.us & Wings of Yuri Team
Loving You by Crown J (featuring Lyn) (Yes, I love Lyn)
Post Production by Code537

http://www.mediafire.com/?40bopc4ex3y4p3n

Enjoy!
CODE537

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Code537 wrote:

There's a hold up on [Love Countdown]. I don't have a song in my head for it yet. And the ending is just so, so cruel...poor Nanoha. I might actually do two versions and change the ending to a "happier one". Basically, Momoko never came home that day....

Change the ending of a doujinshi with something else? I'll have to say not to do that. You shouldn't change anything more than is needed when you have to change. For example, translating you change the text. If you cut the ending and leave it out or replace it with something else, then you are destroying what the creator made and stealing their work for your own. If it is for a parody reason then its okay, but not if you're changing it just because you "don't like it" and think it "could be better."

So you shouldn't cut anything out for your own gain.


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I concur with that one as well Satashi...those that cut stuff out because they don't like it...should either look into something else or find a way of making it work, without taking away the dignity.

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Eeek, point completely taken. Thanks for the advise. Cheers.

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I just noticed......

The song....

It's....

I demand Nanoha xtreme beach volleyball NAO!!!!!!!!