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Valentine Heart Break (One-Shot)

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A/N: Hey guys! I know that Valentine's Day is a couple days away but I might not be able to post it on Valentine's Day so why not? Just a cute little one-shot that I wrote which was inspired by true events (Sadly not mine T^T). Enjoy and let me know what you guys think!

Valentine Heart Break

“I can’t believe it! Once again, I’m alone on Valentine’s Day!” Nanoha moaned.

Fate sighed, tightening her fingers around the steering wheel. Nanoha always got upset because of this retched day and it killed Fate that she couldn’t do anything to cheer her up… well she didn’t have the courage to anyway.

That bit of hope that she carried all these years about Nanoha reciprocating her feelings flew out the window a couple of months ago. Why do you ask? It’s simple really…

Nanoha got a boyfriend.

Just thinking about it made Fate’s already broken heart, break. It was bad enough to hear Nanoha moan about Valentine’s Day, but to have to hear about how she missed her ‘Kyon-chan’ was like pouring salt on an open wound.

She was really sick of it all; the sympathetic looks that Shamal gave her, the “I told you so” looks from Hayate, hell even Chrono had started to treat her differently after the couple came out to everyone, and he wasn’t even in the solar system.

What did Nanoha see in him anyway? Sure he was handsome and charming and absolutely perfect, but she stood a chance against him… right? Why couldn’t Nanoha look at her the same way she looked at him?

She heard Nanoha moan again and gritted her teeth, her anger reaching boiling point. Sometimes she just wanted to smack the girl and scream, ‘If you miss him and wanted a Valentine, why did you break up with him in the first place?’

But before she could even voice her opinion, she would glance at the beautiful girl next to her and notice the sadness in those amethyst eyes. All previous thoughts were soon forgotten and guilt took their place.

A small part of her was happy that Nanoha broke up with the guy, and she had had to hide the slight smile when Nanoha came to her house in tears for comfort.

“I have to stop by the pharmacy to pick up something for my mom. It’ll only take a minute, do you want to wait in the car?” Fate asked, knowing that Nanoha didn’t want anyone to see her puffy eyes. Nanoha gave her a grateful look and nodded.

Fate was already on her way to the register by the time Nanoha called, asking how much longer it would take. Fate apologized, explaining the long line at the registered. She lied, for in reality, she was trying to think of a way to cheer her secret love up.

She abruptly stopped, an item catching her eye, giving it a glint that Hayate would be proud of, as a plan began formed in Fate’s mind.

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Mou, Where is Fate-chan? Nanoha wondered. They were already late for Hayate’s Valentine get-together. God she hated that holiday. It only reminded everyone about how lonely they were.

Her thoughts were brought back to Kyon-chan. He really was a great guy and always treated her well… Why did she end her relationship with him?

Hearing the car door closed snapped her out of her reverie, and she turned to scold at Fate for taking to long, but the sight in front of her left her speechless.

“Will you be my Valentine?” asked a man with a mustache, long blonde hair pulled up into a bun, and a familiar pair of warm burgundy eyes, holding out a Hershey kiss.

Nanoha’s eyes watered as she smiled at the cross-dressed Fate. Ignoring the Hershey kiss, she raised her hand and stroke Fate’s now blushing cheek, her smile widening when Fate leaned at the touch.

Now she remembered exactly why she broke up with Kyon …

He isn’t my Fate-chan.

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I lol'd imagining Fate with a mustache XD.
Nice and cute.

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This was so cute, I loved the ending.
Thanks for sharing this short with us ^^

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Thank you for sharing this =)

"He isn't my Fate-chan." Awww~

Valentine's coming soon, I'm expecting chocolates and roses... But they're not my Nanoha-chan. <3 Lol. xP

~ I x you, you o me ~

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btw, I was hoping to take this someone out on V's day. But she's going out with this all wrong person.
Wonder what she'll do if I were to put on a moustache and do what Fate-chan do... Lol xD

~ I x you, you o me ~

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ichigo-feito wrote:
Wonder what she'll do if I were to put on a moustache and do what Fate-chan do... Lol xD

You can try and tell us how it goes! If it doesn't work, we can always blame Hitomi xD

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Hey!!!!!!!!! jaja XD

It actually does work because it happened to one of my friends last year. Good luck ichigo-feito!!!!

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Hehheh...thanks you guys!
But I bet she'll run and hide for cover when she sees me like that xP
I'm just gonna go as myself...Nothing beats just being yourself ;)
Or I can just secretly point finger and blame Hitomi if it didn't turn out well hehehe don't hit me! XD

~ I x you, you o me ~

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this is kinda cute :3 Gjjj :]

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Sugoku kawaiigata yo! Here's hoping for more from Hitomi in the future :)