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Vivio (Choose Your Own Adventure)

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That was a nice way to end this fic, definitely better than the chicken end xD A little epilogue with Ein meeting Vivio, Nanoha and Fate at their home would be great too, in case that someday you feel like writing something more in this universe ^^

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awawawa... its the end d... i'm kinda sad but i really like the story.
didn't even manage to make the selection on how the story will progress. :3

Thanks again for writing such an interesting fan fics Satashi-san. :3

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I miss out on the voting but it couldn't be better!
I almost fainted here as well. Einhart acts tough but she is delicate.
You could publish this at FF, Sata-san.There's even a Einhart character section in ff? I think you'd be the first. <3

anyway arigatou gozaimashita Sata-san. *bows*

and Happy New Year everyone!

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I already said this at AS but \good end/ though the chicken end was awesome, and I'm still waiting for that omake you promised me.

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The Shiny Sword Omake!

Vivio pulled Einhart closer, inhaling the sweet scent of her date and exhaling softly as she rested her cheek on the soft hair. The pair moved together on the dance floor slowly, turning in a slow circle as the gentle song played from the band. The blonde moved her hand around Einhart's neck, getting a pleased sound at once as the little nip of hair was once more twisted around her finger lovingly.'

Letting out a content Sigh, Einhart held Vivio close, moving her thumb down Vivio's spine in a loving manor. The moment was ruined, however, as the two were suddenly pulled apart by a chaperon of the church. "Now, now, you two," The old prude woman scolded them in a stuck up way. "Make room for god, for you are in the Lord's sight." Vivio gaped at the woman, mouth open, for a full three seconds before pulling Einhart close again. "Now see here, young lady, you will keep your distance. If you want to touch, then hand on hand is acceptable. Now, make room for god."

"I am," Vivio threatened her loudly. "Or do you want to tell the Kaiser that she must make room for herself, in the arms of her date?"

The woman looked at Vivio sternly for a few moments before her jaw suddenly went slack. "I... I'm sorry, your majesty, I was wrong."

"Now," Vivio stuck up her nose while Einhart snickered. "Fetch us some punch."

"R-right away!"

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Yes! I am God! Now fetch me some punch! >:D That was perfect Satashi-san :D

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Awawa! here comes vivio :3
Happy New Years to everyone at NanoFate!

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Happy New Year! :)

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The omake was great xD Good job Satashi, and thanks TheShinySword for coming with the idea.

And happy new year to everyone! Hope you are all having good times ^^

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A good end ^^ (pity that I missed the final votes, but I always spend the firt day of the year slepping or groggy in the couch xD). And the omake was really funny :D

And Happy New Year to everyone ^^

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I'm kinda wondering.. what was the "Satashi recomended ending"?

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Happy new years everyone.

Both E and F were the good endings where Einhart faints :3

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Happy new year to Satashi and everyone! Thanks for this cute story and the omake is funny too :)

NanoFate fans please don't send me hate mail... I promise to turn back into a ferret and leave Nanoha (and her waifu) alone XD

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Einhart just got added to the character list on FF.net <3

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I can't set it as Vivio x einhart because then everyone would know she doesn't pick Syn

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Err. You are right, Satashi.
I hope you write more of them in the future <3

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awww... hontoni kawaii~
i like how Einhart is so embarrassed about the loving passion thing its just so cute
and how Vivio doesnt seem to mind it at all =P

Edit: i guessed that Vivio would pick Einhart when she chose the emerald earrings since its sorta like the silver green hair that Einhart has =P

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VivioTakamachi wrote:
awww... hontoni kawaii~
i like how Einhart is so embarrassed about the loving passion thing its just so cute
and how Vivio doesnt seem to mind it at all =P

Edit: i guessed that Vivio would pick Einhart when she chose the emerald earrings since its sorta like the silver green hair that Einhart has =P

Kinda yeah :3 Syn's route was if Vivio was simple. Since Vivio chose to dress up and go all out, she got Einhart ^_^

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Vivio x Einhart is the best <3~ =P

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VivioTakamachi wrote:
Vivio x Einhart is the best <3~ =P

It is <3 That's probably because it's so much like NanoFate, lol

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It is <3 That's probably because it's so much like NanoFate, lol

true, true lol =P

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VivioTakamachi wrote:
Vivio wrote:
It is <3 That's probably because it's so much like NanoFate, lol

true, true lol =P

I actually like it because it is Einhart and Vivio and NOT NanoFate.

I like NanoFate, but I don't like comparing it to Hartio. It's two new girls with their own story. Let them come to terms by themselves without pushing Vivio's parents onto their relationship.

BTW that is the reason I hate 99.99% of all things Hartio.

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i get what you mean, it would be nice to see some Hartio without the influence of NanoFate, but everything is always compared to something else~ Hartio is compared to NanoFate because NanoFate is sorta like a standard...

lol, either way i will like all hartio things =P

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Satashi wrote:
I actually like it because it is Einhart and Vivio and NOT NanoFate.

I like NanoFate, but I don't like comparing it to Hartio. It's two new girls with their own story. Let them come to terms by themselves without pushing Vivio's parents onto their relationship.

BTW that is the reason I hate 99.99% of all things Hartio.

I understand how you feel completely xD But I see it sorta as being more themselves and as being sorta like Nanoha and Fate.... it's kinda complicated how I see it. The way I see it, it's more about them being themselves. If there wasn't a NanoFate, but there was Hartio, I would still love the couple xD I just like couples similar to NanoFate and Hartio in general (idk about everyone else ;P)

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thats cos Hartio is awesome no matter how similar or different they are from NanoFate <3~

It sorta fun now that there are 2 people called Vivio lol =P

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VivioTakamachi wrote:
thats cos Hartio is awesome no matter how similar or different they are from NanoFate <3~

It sorta fun now that there are 2 people called Vivio lol =P

Agreed XD and agreed again, lol.

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I would of made my user name as Einhart Stratos but too late now...

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I can change your user name if you want, just tell me if you want it changed to "Einhart Stratos" or to something else.

Take care~

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Really?! u can?! Oh can u change my username to "Einhart Stratos" then? that would be really nice~
thnx very much~

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Haru-sama is the REAL mage here XD

NanoFate fans please don't send me hate mail... I promise to turn back into a ferret and leave Nanoha (and her waifu) alone XD