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What is Nanoha+Fate in a clinic? [Crack fic Rated M]

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That was a great story! So funny XD Maybe one day we'll have Vivio x Einhart wedding too?

NanoFate fans please don't send me hate mail... I promise to turn back into a ferret and leave Nanoha (and her waifu) alone XD

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It seems Vivio took some lessons from Hayate in capturing poor helpless girl's heart. :3

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I need more Gurr-chan! >=T

Hehe anyways good luck on your new project!!

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Hmmm... Since it's christmas, and well I have a few crazy ideas in my head... 8D I'll be nice and offer up a fic... on our couple's First post-wedding/christmas date 83 of course it wouldn't be complete without my POV that has been >_> Well, helpful xD

So Merry Christmas everyone! (And btw... this is totally writing off the bat, I'm writing this from the very reply box like the other long ones I have in this thread. So... bear with me if I have any typo or grammar errors.)

PS: BE WARNED... Lots of... =Q___ scenes...

Spoiler: Beyond the storm of troubles... Parents style.

So! We are back in business and starting a whole new story! And... guess what, our couple and lovely children get to spend christmas on a date all by themselves! For now, we'll be covering: The parents. So sit back, relax, and enjoy Fate and Nanoha showering together!

Wait.. what?!

"Oooh~ Fate-chan you're so sensitive here too!" Cried out a certain brunette's voice.

"N-N-Nanoha... not there, it tickles..." Fate argued, blushing furiously in the process...

Wait... wasn't there supposed to be more time covered by that introduction?! Gah... oh well... it's fan service...

"Nyahaha~ You're so cute like this Fate-chan... When you're all mine." A big grin planted on her face.

Fate blushed furiously. "Y-You know it's my turn next..."

"Yup! And I will just tease you more when it's your turn!"

Right... Is it just me... or did Nanoha boost her seme rating to I don't know... a lot of levels? This is like leveling up ten times over in an RPG game...

"Im done~" Nanoha cheered.

"Mou... It's my turn to wash your back... I ummm... ummm..." Fate blushed red without a reason.

Wasn't it normal for doctors to see naked bodies... or is it because it's Nanoha? Hehe.. things are starting to turn interesting.

"Eh? What's wrong Fate-chan..?"

"I uhm.. Don't know where to start..." Fate admitted shyly.

Right... That's always the case when I write these things... So I guess I understand.

Nanoha smiled deviously and motioned Fate's hands to begin with her breasts. "Why don't you start over here?"

Fate was flustered and she looked like her brain was going to explode. Haha... Nanoha you big flirt.

Fate starts shyly scrubbing down Nanoha's breasts and once she was done with them she moves on to her stomach and so on and so forth. Hah.. well that ended smoothly.

I'm guessing this is only a storm alert level 1 at this stage. Nanoha was overly seme and Fate was well... uke.

We can't really help it now, can we? Let's just pray our Fate-chan scores some points next but for now the tally is.... N-1|F-0

~xXoXx~

Well, for now we have to worry about storm level 2... which is well I won't reveal it to you. Read and learn hehe.

Oh... And while I was stalling you Nanoha and Fate already finished planning for the day and I can't wait to unveil things. Readers! Be prepared.

"So... we're going to have Fate-chan cook breakfast today. I can't wait~"

"Any requests, darling?"

How SWEET! She just called her... D-D-Darling! Wow...

"Hmm... How about some Fate-chan bacon?" Nanoha said as if getting an idea out of the blue.

Fate smiled and put on her apron. "Bacon coming up!"

The smell of frying meat quickly spread in the air once Fate started cooking. Fate decided to prepare toast, marmalade, and a set of mini-omelets, completing a very delicious breakfast made by Fate. Breakfast was served after 30 minutes of waiting and Nanoha was eager to start eating.

As Nanoha started digging in on breakfast she immediately pondered what else Fate was going to feed her for today, after all they decided that she would be in charge of the food today.

This is great! I get to eat Fate-chan's cooking AND I get to go out with her... Oh I just love this day~----Nanoha thought to herself.

~xXoXx~

Nanoha was in charge of the places they had to see and she's doing a pretty good job on it: Famous museums, aquariums, nice parks, and a nice view from the top of the school clock, obviously something Fate didn't know. Fate was astonished to see all the places that her wife has shown her. There was more to go but...

"Fate-chan, this is my christmas present... part 1..." Nanoha announces with a smile.

"Hmm...? Mmmph!"

Nanoha closed in until there was absolutely zero distance between them. Well... we were kind of expecting that, weren't we?

But I wasn't expecting them to make out in the car! In the parking area of the SCHOOL! But it's a holiday... no witnesses...

Oh what the heck.

Nanoha starts to unzip Fate's jeans while kissing her. Fate was surprised at the sudden motion from her wife, expressly she removed her hand from the gear shift and forced her wife on top of her. They looked at each other lovingly before they melted into their kiss once again. Nanoha's hands dig into Fate's underwear and she starts putting her fingers in Fate's pussy.

"Ahh..." A moan from Fate.

Fate's left hand instinctively lowered the driver's seat while her right hand continued to caress her lover. Nanoha was surprised at the lowering of the car's chair but she was happy that Fate let her do work. Nanoha started to unbutton the black polo Fate was wearing using her free hand while Fate did the same. Nanoha took out her left hand from Fate's pussy, which she was playing with since she put her fingers in, and smiled.

"You're really wet today, darling~" She said happily, licking the juice from her hand.

Fate blushed hard, "It was kind of hard holding back at home, you know..."

Nanoha smirked, "It was ten times harder for me." With this she began unclipping Fate's bra and groping Fate's left breast making Fate moan harder than she already was. Smiling to herself, Nanoha began nibbling on her left breast. Fate's mind was about to go nuts, she was almost reaching orgasm.

But that's just it... Nanoha stopped there. "Sorry, darling... it's just part one~"

"Mou... Nanoha you big tease..."

Fate was blushing hard while Nanoha, who was on top of Fate, was smiling.

HOLY ASDKFJL! That was... kinky! And very hawt... very, very lava-like...

Ugh... I'll stop my nosebleeding nose for now and carry on with this story...

Fate buttoned and clasped back everything that needed to be done so with Nanoha doing the same. Fate was a bit dissapointed but the last destination was up to her now and she wants to take her wife to something special to her.

Fate drove for the nearby park that was beside the ocean. Tally: N-2|F-1

~xXoXx~

Sorry it has to end with this part for now... because some people couldn't wait XD

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=Q___ Ne ne Gurr-chan, I think we need more! *fleez to get tissues*

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Good job Sigurd, that was one fun and sexy reading :D Poor Fate-chan, Nanoha loves to tease her~ almost as much as we love seeing them ^^
I agree with Nanoha-san, we need more!

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Lucky Nanoha, having her way with her wife as a Christmas gift. :3

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Continuing with part two... XD Since people will definitely kill me if I just leave it there XD

Spoiler: part two... lolz.
Fate drove smoothly, seemingly taking her time with the drive. She was reminiscing the event they had before taking off. Maybe... it wasn't obvious but Nanoha was smiling at Fate's expression.

"Fate-chan looks like a pervert!" Nanoha giggled.

Fate flushed even more furiously. "I-I w-wasn't thinking of a-a-anything!"

Nanoha smirks. "LIES! Haha Fate-chan you pervert!"

Fate couldn't reply but instead held Nanoha's hand tightly. Words couldn't express how Fate feels but actions do. Smiling happily, Nanoha whispers an "I love you" to her lover.

Ahh... Nothing like old NanoFate fluff right?

"So where are we going?"

Fate looked at her wrist watch and it was just about time for her surprise. "To the Sunset."

It didn't make Sense to Nanoha, since it was virutally impossible to go to the sunset. She was in it for a surprise. Fate sped up and parked swiftly. Hurrying to the other side of the car.

"Hurry!"

Dumbfounded, Nanoha got out of the car and Fate closes the door. Then Fate grabs Nanoha's hand and immediately makes a run for it. The two of them head for the edge of the park.

At first Nanoha didn't see why they had to rush but when she looked at the view she was amazed. It was almost like she was in front of the sun, but it's only a reflection made by the sea.

Fate smiled lovingly while her lover looked at the view. "Do you like it?"

Nanoha smiles, "Of course I do! How did you find this place?"

"I happened to be passing by this before when I first moved into town five years ago." Fate explains happily.

Nanoha smiles and rewards her wife with a loving kiss.

Tally: N-2|F-2

~xXoXx~

The drive home was filled with light chatter. Everything was animated. Down to the part when they open their front door. The two of them couldn't stop smiling at each other and recall the wonderful memories they made today.

The couple heads for the living room and realized that there wasn’t anyone else in the house, the children are probably playing in Einhart’s house. No one in this living room trusted Hayate… haha.

“Nanoha… do you think they’ll be late today?”

As if on cue, Nanoha’s cellphone rings, the two of the lightly giggle at each other when they saw who it was. Nanoha picks up the call, “Mmm.. mmm… ok. Just make sure it isn’t much of a bother to Einhart-san ok?”

Nanoha smiles, “They’re tired today so they said they can’t make it home… So I let them stay at—mmmmph!”

Fate closed in on her lover, giving an unexpected kiss to Nanoha. Slowly, Fate reaches for Nanoha’s jeans unbuttoning the button and unzipping the zipper. Her left hand made its way to Nanoha’s back, her hand was looking for a way to unclasp the bra Nanoha was wearing. Sucking softly on her lover’s neck her hands instinctively pulled down Nanoha’s jeans and her right hand immediately went underneath Nanoha’s panties, straight to her pussy.

“Aaahhh… Fate-chan, here?” Nanoha moans, obviously surprised by the sudden moves her own wife was making.

“I’m sorry Nanoha, I can’t hold it back any longer…” Fate explains, still not stopping her movements.

Nanoha was really surprised, she thought that SHE was the one to deliver this and on the bed too, instead she found herself pinned on the wall in her lover’s arms. She was really defenseless against this kind of attack.

Silly Fate-chan, you are always the fastest to make these kinds of moves, but… I’m more powerful I’ll definitely overthrow you!—Nanoha thought to herself.

As if they were in a wrestling show, Nanoha unbuttons her lover’s shirt and pants and effectively pins Fate to the wall. Nanoha’s left hand moved in on Fate’s pussy that had been eagerly waiting for her fingers as well. Nanoha leans in for a kiss, to silence Fate, and unclasps Fate’s bra. Nanoha gropes Fate’s right breast and continues to muffle her lover’s moans in their kiss.

Fate was either in the middle of caring about her brain melting down or suffocating from her lover’s kiss. Once she was released from the kiss Nanoha’s next moves elicited a louder moan than she originally anticipated. It was from the stress of the last set of movements.

Nanoha was pleased when she heard such a loud scream of ecstasy from Fate. But Nanoha was far from done; she wanted to go past beyond orgasm tonight. She lowered herself, facing Fate’s wet clit, she lowered the black panties that were in her way and she began licking Fate’s hole. By the time she did so Fate was already dripping wet and her left hand was groping Fate’s ass.

Fate reflexively held Nanoha’s head, she was really crying out in indescribable pleasure.

Nanoha continued licking and groping until she sensed that Fate was really reaching orgasm. Then she pulls Fate and forces her onto the sofa.

"Fate-chan is being extra naughty today~ I like it."

Fate flushed but there was really no stopping Nanoha from doing what she was doing so, she didn't answer. Nanoha kissed Fate more, a little bit more lovingly with each moment her tongue explored her lover's mouth.

Nanoha instantly pops an idea. "You know Fate-chan... I kind of know what dinner is already~!"

Fate follows, "E-Eh? But how?"

"Because, it's simple! It's you isn't it?!"

Fate blushes, "I-It's not m-me... R-Really..."

"Ehh... then what is? I'm hungry... well guess... I'll just have to settle for this appetizer~" Nanoha said, leaning in to kiss Fate.

~xXoXx~

The night ended with the two of them gently hugging each other near the fireplace, having hot cocoa and a banana-split style ice cream dessert. Banana-split... haha... funny... though... cute? Or is it kinky... I dunno...

"Today was nice, wasn't it?"

"It was. So, do you have any plans tomorrow, darling?"

"Then, it's my turn tomorrow... Hehe."

"All right. Since we both did agree on this."

And so... I end this story here... after this dangerous adventure of nosebleeds, internet crashes, and well... a lot of... challenges!

Abrupt end, I know x_x;; It's just that... if I write any more I feel like I'll die of blood loss... @_@;;

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Mmmm *thinking pose with hand and handkerchief on her nose*

Loved the Fic Sigurd! XD

I like it how they had to choose one thing or place for their date each of them. ^^
And Fate is fast, yeah *nods head* But Nanoha is strong. *thumbs up*
No one can resist a Nanoha or a Fate... I really don't know how they do it! D8 (referring to Nanoha & Fate)Specially how the things are getting interesting.
I like the making-out in the car... that is so hot! *puts hand back again on her nose*
The bath... ¨Nanoha *nosebleed*
And Vivio is such a good and obedient girl and daughter. ^^ I want one of that.

Perfect Sigurd!

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It isn't perfect @_@; Lol... the making out in the car came from me picture here

<<< THAT

xD but I took it to a... sexier level XDD

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^^ Nice!

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*trying to stop nosebleeding*
*fails*
*dies in excitement*

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Fate and Nanoha had a very nice "dinner". ;3

Merry Christmas to everyone !

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So, what was the final score? xD
Fate tried to take the initiative and be on top this night, but it seems like she will never defeat Nanoha on the bed~ Our blonde is too uke for that.
Thanks for the fic Sigurd, this was a fun reading, you do know how to write romantic lemons :D

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It was kinda... easy once I got past the, "e.e It's so kinky" train of thought XD

And the final score is F-2|N-2 It's a tie 8D I can always imagine this outcome whenever there is a scoreboard between the two XD There is actually no other was these two would be willing to outscore each other, except in the presence of sex XD

Egads... Did I just say that? XD

Anyways I'm glad you liked it, I was kinda nervous on how people would think about this @_@

Till' the next time I write :D

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*recovers from low blood pressure*

Fun holiday reading!

NanoFate fans please don't send me hate mail... I promise to turn back into a ferret and leave Nanoha (and her waifu) alone XD

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*looks at everyone*
Have you no shame, hold those nosebleeds back people!
Anyways, excellent fic Siggy, it was very nicely written and in all honesty, who doesn't want some good NanoFate love. Well, 'till the chat says hi, good day.
*finally falls over into a pool of his own blood*

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Lolz... all the M rated stuffies are coming out XD I wonder if we'll get anymore before 2011? O-o

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