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The World Revolves Around You (Update: In My Head and Puzzle Pieces)

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No one starts out being the best, so keep on doing what makes you happy and in time, the efforts will bear fruit~

;_; Poor Sharky....

Eisen, Usa-mimi Mode!

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I wanna be the very best, like no one ever was. To make Fate a dude is my real test, to make everyone laugh is my cause.

/end attempt at being fun.

>___<;; I gotta drive either the Toyota Celica or take the bus... ): I'm going to miss the stereo system that said "Hello" when you turn it on.

Dreams do come true! 8D

( ì x î ) I feel sorry for that little girl. Lol

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You'll get there~ I'll cheer you on from here, supporting you all the way ^w^

Oh wow, it says 'Hello' ?
Well, at least you have a means somehow~ Better than nothing, right?

Eisen, Usa-mimi Mode!

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Lol yay. :3 Oh! I'm still working on that little Vita x Hayate thing for you, I'll try and sketching something for it, too.

Yes, it says "Hello"... well it better since it cost me over 2k. >:T It was soo worth it though. I feel like Knight Rider. 8D I actually kind of miss the wifey's old Black Mustang GT... it looked like KITT.

Dreams do come true! 8D

( ì x î ) I feel sorry for that little girl. Lol

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Booyaka~ I can't wait but, I shall :3
I would greatly appreciate a sketch~

Wow, and here I am aiming to get a Nissan 350Z...
You know your cars well~ I hope that things will look up soon~

Eisen, Usa-mimi Mode!

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You really like to have Fate as a soccer player, don't you Yuki? xD Good job with BMP, this short was cute~

By the way, you should be happy that in "Face Down" Fate didn't get a rhinoceros instead of a seagull as her pet xD

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Not really, but Soccer Fate had the most positive reception from all of her incarnations under the Team GEMINI name.

I am -very- happy it wasn't that... it'd probably have a heart attack, or worse... pay for the damages, no wait... yeah, I gotta pay. My insurance said that they don't cover debris from the sky... so I fail. :D Close to $5,000 in repairs.

At least it sparkles now.

Dreams do come true! 8D

( ì x î ) I feel sorry for that little girl. Lol

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Heya, just made the account so I could comment ^_^

Amazing shorts Yuki, the stories are absoultly amazing, and I get so much enjoyment reading them, that I'm just hooked onto more of what you write. :D The detail and description you write for each scene, character and event is brilliant and is espically easy for the reader to picture what happening in our mind. :P You are a very talented writer, so thanks so much for writing this and other stories. Your most recent short of BPM was great, and was so good to read, that it made my evening brighten considerably, since doing coursework pretty much makes me want to throw my laptop away lol ;D (Also the picture you drew aswell, was amazing, espically in the time frame aswell, and regardless of how late it in the morning ^_^)

Anywho before I continue rambling on and getting carried away (*sigh* coursework calls) just wanted to say thanks so much for the time you take to write these masterpieces, and I'm eagerly awaiting for future updates of whichever lol :)

Cheers :D aaaaannd she offs! lol x

P.S almost forget, the change back from your normal first person to third, was great, and regardless of how long ago you wrote in third, BPM was amazing, and flowed very nicely :) (if you did continue this short, it would be greatly appriciated, or whichever, and i look forward to your future stories you have in store). :) x

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Wow, the fact you went out of your way to just leave me a message is touching. Well at least we both know that I can only get better from this point on, and the only reason why I've even gotten this far is because of kind fans like yourself pushing me further and further along the way.

BPM really made me proud as a writer. I didn't think I was capable of switching so easily, but as usual, I like to underestimate myself. I couldn't tell you how happy I am to see nothing but positive reinforcement from those who read it. As for brightening your day, that's even better! Normally people tell me I make them depressed because I run Fate through the dirt... but I'm trying to change that. Y'know, livin' life where the grass is brighter.

I think I was about ready to die after drawing that... x__x my writing is normally much messier, even more so during the night.

Dreams do come true! 8D

( ì x î ) I feel sorry for that little girl. Lol

Nanonymous
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Thank you for posting another cute nanofate story but you really should get more sleeping time...5:30am! Wow...that's even later than me! And very nice sketch...I like the double meaning in the title...when you named your cat Dog was there a double meaning as well?

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NP, it's what I'm here for... sleeping is for the weak! -keels over-

My daughter named the cat... she just likes to annoy me.

Dreams do come true! 8D

( ì x î ) I feel sorry for that little girl. Lol

Nanonymous
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YOu aren't weak but you still need enough rest. We don't want you to topple over from exhuastion...since you are one of the big shots in Nanofate fics. For the short drabble on Fate teasing Nanoha on being the most beautiful, hope you can add on stuff like Nanoha's reaction/actions and how Fate tries to make it up...very loving family but I get what you mean...

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I was kidding... >__> I actually sleep at work. I'm at work as we speak. I think I have to be here till 1am though, gotta do the budgeting... fun. </3

Me a big shot? Now you're just flattering me.

I regret making that joke... but I just couldn't resist. XD

Dreams do come true! 8D

( ì x î ) I feel sorry for that little girl. Lol

Nanonymous
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Ouch...bad economical times...sigh...oh Nanoha, Fate, bring me over to your world where there is no budget cuts! No, no not flattery, just simply stating a fact. I know what you mean about the jokes...its so hard to resist, I play jokes all the time to my friends :P I'm such a nice friend...good luck at work

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Yep... I need more staff here, even more so since my vacation starts next month, but it's nearly impossible with these numbers. orz

Y'know we sell "Glacier Water" for $60 >___>... we sell one box per week.

I'm very snippy in person, so my sarcasm knows no bounds... >: Though I have noticed I've been making fun of Twilight more often.

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Vaccation tymz FTW! I can finally spend time with my newborns and do what's most important. Write more NanoFate!

Dreams do come true! 8D

( ì x î ) I feel sorry for that little girl. Lol

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*sigh...must be hard being an asistant dictator..."Glacier water" for $60! is that US or yen? Just so you know I suck at math so can't really convert these things without computer. A box a week...wow. You don't seem like a snippy person, more like someone who can think fast and have new ideas popping out all the time. Haha...Twilight...never read it. *Bow head in shame*
Congrads on your upcoming vacation...looking at your work hours, you deserve it. Yes and spend lots of quality time with your family...cause that is what's important in life...plus fanfics :P

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Well I think I'm the manager, since the current "manager" is the owner.

I live in Canada, so... yeahh...

I can be very snippy, even more so with scissors on hand, but this is a good thing. It adds some charisma to my writing... which I will -finally- have time to do at a reasonable hour. Since when I'm at work, I usually come home at 1am or later, so with vaccay I can finally write without losing my sleep and my family bonding time.

I have -soooo- many projects lined up for next month.

Dreams do come true! 8D

( ì x î ) I feel sorry for that little girl. Lol

Nanonymous
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Manager...wow, must be hard to work till so late! Ha ha...snippy with scissors...indeed that is a good thing but even without them your writing has a lot of charisma since it's drawing so much readers and fans. Working isn't easy...sigh...but at least you can get a vacation next week. Congratulations! Feel really happy for you to finally spend time with the ones you love and doing things you enjoy. Can't wait for the upcoming projects. *Excited excited*

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I have a lot of plans for my month long vacation, and this means good things for the NanoFate community.

Just Be Friends <-- Not to be confused with what my wife wrote. This one is based on the song itself.

Smiling <-- Fate's thoughts on Nanoha's smiling face.

Bless You <-- Alicia is in the hospital, close to death, with Nanoha by her side till the end.

Love's Song <-- Sequel to "Bless You". Fate and Nanoha's lives after Alicia dies.

Black Rock Shooter <-- I did a few projects based on this, most notable is my "Rise of The Devil" project which had to be dropped due to my laptop melting.

BPM <-- Makes it's return as either a full story or another oneshot depending on the future reviews it receives.

Windows <-- Nanoha and Fate spend a quiet evening IMing each other.

Double Lariat <-- Nanoha talks to Fate about how she has her in her grasp. Once again, Vocaloid Song.

Jikan yo Tomare <-- My right hand "man" Usa write a short story about this. She didn't really finish it, so I'll be picking it up and continuing it.

Fine Line Between Us <-- Shall be completely remastered to fit my 2010 writing style. It will be guaranteed to be much longer with extended scenes.

Some other one shots are going to be written, but for now these are the only ones decided upon.

Plausible Projects during my 1month Vacation!

Lyrical Days <-- my gender-bend story. This one may, or may not, be written with smiggers. It depends on her availability after her exams and whether or not we can keep a straight face on long enough to actually write something.

Road to be Queen <-- My seven month long project. No other information shall be revealed about this until everything is set in stone.

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Since they're just one shots, minus the plausible stories, I should be able to write one per day since I type around 70words per minute. o-o

Dreams do come true! 8D

( ì x î ) I feel sorry for that little girl. Lol

Nanonymous
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Very excited for the upcoming posts. They all look like they have a lot of potential! Is Bless You NanoAlicia? I wish the next month will quickly come! Isn't it weird that I'm probably more excited about your vacation than you? Oh...one per day...that would be nice. Then I could be able to read your writing and have it brighten my day for everyday next month! Wow, 70 words a minute! WOW! ><. I am soooo jealous! I have so much ideas but could never convey them onto the paper since I am a super slow thinker, writer, and most of all typer *I think I just made up a word*. I am really back with computers and electronics.

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Lol I am, too. I get to work with my wifey on a few of them. And yes, "Bless You" is NanoAlicia. This one is going to be dedicated to my friend TruePrime since he liked the pairing.

Naah, it isn't strange. Honestly, my staff is more excited about me being gone for a whole month more than me... I swear, when I get back, the restaurant will be nothing more than rubble.

Yes, one per day, now whether they'll be posted per day is still being discussed. Mostly because all of my editors are MIA minus Jokulhaup who's still trying to get used to everything. He'd doing a very, very good job though... but he can't be free all the time y'know? So even though I can write all these pretty quickly, I gotta wait for someone to edit, I guess I've gotta go back to recruiting. Haha.

I worked in an office for a bit and typing fast was a requirement. I guess A.D.D helps... but with the medicine I'm taking for it, everything has become so much clearer. That's probably why BPM worked out so well.

Dreams do come true! 8D

( ì x î ) I feel sorry for that little girl. Lol

Nanonymous
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It's so nice that you can work with a loved on, sharing a hobby together...*envious* oh a nanoalicia...i-interesting...can't wait! Ha ha, I am sure your staff likes you...they just think you should take a break that's why...*cross fingers* hope your restaurant won't turn to rubble. MIA minus? I'm sure a lot of people would die of happiness being your editor...
Can't wait for BPM...hm...maybe I should work in an office to get my typing faster...

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Missing in action minus the new guy who's actually here. Working with me as an editor can be a big headache... @_@

Typing this fast takes lots of practice... and it's boring.

Dreams do come true! 8D

( ì x î ) I feel sorry for that little girl. Lol

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Hehe, I got faster in typing from years of Starcraft Battle.net.
Just about tripled my speed.
Also, editting for TG isn't particularly hard, it's just that Yuki's timing can be slightly awkward.
(Late at night... Zomg!)
<3 you anyway.

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Lolz, >___> Wait till you get more used to it... be glad I don't see you on at 5am!

Dreams do come true! 8D

( ì x î ) I feel sorry for that little girl. Lol

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@Vita - I'll work extra hard on it then, but idk how long you'll have to wait since work has bee really hectic... orz

I want a BMW X6... I love Shark car to pieces and bolts, but it's just too small for my family. It's either that... or I get a limo. Haha.

Dreams do come true! 8D

( ì x î ) I feel sorry for that little girl. Lol

Nanonymous
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I go with the limo..ha ha. Other than typing fast, there is still so much I need to learn to actually write a fanfic as pro as yours or other great authors'.

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-still at work- ;.; I'm really not that great. I've only gotten a "little" bit better just recently.

Limo... <.< Those things are hard to corner with.

Dreams do come true! 8D

( ì x î ) I feel sorry for that little girl. Lol

Nanonymous
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Yeah limos are really hard to drive...and they are so long it makes me wonder if it would break in half if someone really heavy sits in the middle of it. Plus they are a hassle to find parking spaces for.Don't be so modest, your writings are extraordinary. Good luck with work...

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>_> I worked for a limi company for one day... quit it on the very same day, too. I got so scared to drive the darn thing I ran away.

On a neater note, Jokulhaup's edit of BPM is amazing. You'll definitely see more of his works integrated into mine. So many with him, I would look like such an ugly nub.

Dreams do come true! 8D

( ì x î ) I feel sorry for that little girl. Lol