Dang, it seems like people are starting to write their own versions of the series
Anyway, this is my new project I've been secretly working on lately. It's a rewrite of the first season of MGLN with some major plot changes. Basically, Nanoha doesn't find Yuuno and Precia comes to love Fate. Of course, not everything goes so well and results may be sometimes hard to predict.
Because of length of the future chapters, I'm going to post the links to FF.net here. The site eats all my formating so I need to proofread everything one more time before posting it here. Not a major problem with shorter stories but, except for prologues, I tend to write rather long chapters. I hope that it's not a problem for any of you.
So, here it comes, The Prologue! Have a good read.