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[Fanfic] Nanoha Magica: a Madoka crossover

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If anyone's interested, i'm writing a Nanoha-Madoka crossover. it takes place during roughly 0066, and focuses primarily on Nanoha and Fate arriving in the Madoka world and their interactions with the characters there. Lindy, Amy and Chrono are also showcased in a sort of star trek-esque role of visiting the frontier. contains Nanoha badassery.

the story can be found here. remember to review!

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Ah, good work! I usually don't read fan fics (especially cross overs) but somehow I couldn't resist~ I'm interested in seeing how this turns out.

There's something interesting I'd like to share though.

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"Magical girl" is only one way of translating "puella magi". Puella does mean girl but it carries the connotation of a young female slave. Magi does mean magic but it also carries the meaning of deception. It's been suggested that it's more sensible to translate "puella magi" as "slaves of the deceiver" which makes complete sense when you watch the show~ Kyubey forever!

I did have a very minor problem with the fic though. I'd appreciate it if the time skip stuff was like, italicized or something to show that it's not actually part of the story, you know? ^^;;

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did not know that about the translation. I may work that in, if I have the chance.

also yes, the ff.net doc uploader sort of screwed up the formatting on that. when I upload the next chapter, i'm going to fix that.

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I've noticed some small typos and stuff here and there (somehow, the fact that you spelt Sayaka's name wrong made me laugh. Poor girl never gets a break ^^;; )but it's still a fun read~

I am imagining a Tiro Breaker because of you and I am also imagining everyone dying. Glorious.

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hopefully all of those typos will vanish as I reread and re-update. hard to catch everything the first time, especially when you're updating at midnight...