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I interpreted it as "Hayate, as the head of the Yagami family, is most likely the oldest child. Vita is the youngest child. Therefore, Hayate and Vita are sisters."

I wonder if I'm the only one who was excited about that? I wanna see this sister thing in action! XD

...Oh. Maybe the Yagami family is one of those really big, influential families and the employees call her master out of respect? Or maybe it's one of those "STFU and enjoy the damn thing" moments XD

Cardboard box is here!

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Hayate and Vita as sisters? Possible. Then again, they should tell us anyway something about their parents. Even if it's going to be 'they went overseas' thing, it's better than totally avoiding giving any explanation.

As for the 'big family' thing, sure, they can call her 'master' out of respect but why the hell their surname is the same? xD It just doesn't make sense, unless it's some kind of mafia where all members get the same last name to be recognized better xD

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Mafia? I was thinking about that too XD

Then I remembered this and suddenly it all made sense:

http://nanofate.us/gallery/general-images/79d6b024cc00a0cce2f9cea4057f90ffjpg

Something as crass as being the mere head of a large mafia family is underneath Hayate X3 People just call out master out of pure awe and fear! Hayate isn't handicapped, she just can't be bothered getting out of her chair for someone like us. (And we are not ready for the destruction that happens when she stands up)

Just kiss her ring hand, present your feeble offerings and GTFO. And never look at Hayate in the face, she hates that XD Don't make her bitch slap you!

(Is having way too much fun with this)

Cardboard box is here!

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NO YUUNO!? YEEESSS! BUT NO CHRONO? aaaww D=

.... pending

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Natus wrote:
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First and foremost, please make your sentences shorter. Or rather, stop using run on sentences as they make it hard to read ^^;;

I suppose you raise some valid points but there are also various factual inaccuracies in here as well. Nothing especially major or glaringly wrong but if you're going to complain about something then at least make sure it exists, ya know? (it looks better on your part as well)

For example, it it's weird that Reinforce would call someone in her family "master" then Reinforce should actually be related to Hayate and not just one of her employees.

...But yeah, even if Reinforce is an employee it's still weird to call your boss that. Well, if it comes to that I suppose it's weird to have Hayate employ people when she's 10 or whatever ^^;;

I'd imagine that they wanted to keep character dynamics the same, since if they were changed them to make the setting more realistic then people would bitch about how this isn't even related to it's mother franchise anymore or something ^^;; (Follow up complaint; just make an original series if you're going to do that! Further follow up complaint; why aren't you making more Nanoha stuff?! Damn you and Dog Days! =_=;;)

I suppose that they're (heavily) relying on the fact that this is Nanoha related to their advantage. I wonder what you mean by the fact that you don't get anything out of the characters though? I realise that I have prior knowledge to fill in the blanks but you can easily pick up characteristics about each person just from this alone. Not a lot but still enough to get a (very) rough sense about each character.

For example, Levi appears in about 6 panels but it's pretty easy to pick up that she's somewhat childish and energetic with a youthful glee. (Her grinning ^w^ face is adorable~)

Cardboard boxes are full of love so we're fine with anything and try to enjoy things as best as we can~ I know I fawned over this like the little fangirl that I am but I'm sure the manga will turn out at least moderately well. (Or rather, I'm sure it will turn out at least moderately well for me while everyone else may very well hates it) I'm quite excited about the manga and I'm interested in seeing how the game will turn out myself.

I hope the game makes sense and doesn't use weird tactics like Yu-Gi-Oh's "I attack the floatation ring on your flying castle causing it to crash and kill everyone" nonsense unless the game's rules makes this a reasonable option. I wanna see if I could follow along with the player's logic, you see~ (Related to this, incredibly convenient cards that could only possibly be used in that one circumstance)

...Heh.

Hearing you talk about how everyone is fawning over Brave Duel reminds of of the times when every fanboy fawned over Fable, Skyrim, the Wii, the newest COD/Halo/some of shooter I've completely forgotten the name of etc. I feel like I'd be pretty pumped if I was producing/selling this game. Even though someone's not a big fan of card games the virtual reality element is sure to turn heads~ Not that I can really talk about other people fawning over things though, excuse me while I fawn over Precia some more ^^;;

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And back.

Completely random turn of topic, long post is long. Not that this is bad or anything (I'm sure there are lots of people who go TL;DR though >_>;;) but I'd recommend writing shorter paragraphs so it looks less intimidating and maybe putting the whole thing in spoiler tags.

If you don't mind me asking, why did you even write this? Or rather, you mentioned that you do the same thing for Vivid and Force (and I'm sure everyone knows what your opinion is on that anyway) so I'm wondering if you only talk about things that irk you ^^;;

If you hate it, that's fine. If you want to say you hate it then go ahead. It's just that I get this feeling that you're making it your mission to spread the hate ya know? I'm not saying I don't want to hear your opinion, I just think you're trying too hard to hate it or something. ^^;;

Oh, it's been 5 minutes. Time to fawn over Precia again~

First and foremost: No. I will not make my sentence of my paragraphs shorter. About the other part I don’t even know what that means so maybe, when I get what that implies.

Second… you didn’t show anything “wrong” in my analysis. You agree with me on the “Master” title for Hayate being odd. And I don’t care about if this is a Nanoha spin off, this has nothing to do with the original source so no, they can’t use the same material just exactly like in the original. Are they going to call the players mages now? Maybe the organization that will make the tournament will be the TSAB and the planet is now call Mid-Childa, and they live in the Belka prefecture and their magic cards are Lost Logias… No, I will not take that crap, if they are going to make a whole new universe with the same characters then change it or don’t bother at all.

What I mean by anything out of the characters is that, putting the names (Which I already knew) aside, I don’t know anything about them. And I mean I don’t know because their dialogue was over and over about the game. Really all their lines can be change by this: “Today we are releasing the Brave Duel, is great” and you won’t be missing anything. Levi maybe gives an impression but: Nanoha, Fate? What I am supposed to take from them because, Nanoha’s name is on the title and yet she only appears in 4 pages in the entire number one. What I mean was far too long and introduces a ton of characters that could be introduced as the plot moves on.

And no, I will not compare the Brave Duel thing with a real life situation because of this: I am supposed to like the story. Reading all the characters just saying the same lines again and again isn’t going to make me like the game is going to bore me to death. Yeah, is cool, is great but I get it just with one time, if you want to keep the subject then give us more information about it like the rules, how the system works, why is so popular, etc. I mean, change the song so we can really get involve. Also, is this game just for cute little girls? I really think boys will be more interesting in the whole “Virtual fighting game” rather than cute little gamers and of course we will have to deal with the tons of pervs that will came in to see it just for the naked scenes or worse, to play it.

Final: I only use spoiler with images. So why did I even bother? For one simple reason: Because I wanted to. You see I like to say what I think and why I think that. Yeah, it seems I mostly talk about what irks me but that is just because is more dynamic than talk about what I like (Which will be me saying: “This is awesome”) However I will like to say what I enjoy about Nanoha and I can really try to do it. In fact I will do it for the first two seasons, thanks for the idea. But I am getting out of track here.

No, I don’t spread hate and I am not trying to hate it. I am trying to like it and falling. Is too early to say this manga is bad and I was joking in my last post when I say it sucks, what I say is that is generic and not really special way to start the manga. I mean, this is not different or impressive at all, but that is the same for all the mangas I read about Nanoha and is my complain: seems that this will not be do with something ViVid and Force also lack, passion. So, yes I like to seem ranting but no spreading hate, just make it clear what I think and I will keep doing it.

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This scan should have some info on how the Mobage game works: http://imgur.com/2Vp6b

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two things I noticed
1. since most of the Nanoha characters are shout outs to various mecha characters and machines, Professor Granz is probably a shout to the super robot Granzon from Super Robot Wars

2. from the transformation sequence and such, if the cards are support and magic spells, this manga may be more similar to Kamen Rider Ryuki/ Kamen Rider Dragon Knight than other card game series

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Well reference of Super Robot Wars are all over Nanoha, more in StrikerS where I can see where they take those military things from. About the second I say is just an excuse to do naked lolis.

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Some spoilers for the next chapter of Innocent are out, posted here starting at post #68: http://nanochan.org/board/kareha.pl/1340440619/l50

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please give to us link to this manga in english

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THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!
I ♥ LOVE ♥ Nanoha Innocent, just one chapter and I'm already hooked. -^.^-

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It's just a shame that the scanlation for the latest chapter might be delayed a bit: http://raizoo.wordpress.com/2012/11/05/just-a-heads-up-about-duel-01/

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Next chapter on Yamibo, Nanoha and Fate meet, Fate 'saves' Nanoha from Vita's attack ;)
So many characters, are the kids at the end Teana and Subaru?

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Looks like it was love at first sight again :)

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Nanoha Fate Rabu Rabu! ;) It's pretty cute how they only have eyes for each other after Fate saves Nanoha, lol.

That definitely looks like Teana and Subaru there. The 4Koma are a separate series from Innocent; they're based on the Gears of Destiny/Materials series.

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Nanoha Innocent looks good, promising even for a good dose of mage fights and Nanoha and Fate first meeting again, can't wait to read more from this series. the raw for second chapter looks even better, Nanoha saw Fate in a battle simulation and are speechless I hope to see they fight against each other again later and Nanoha winning again. ;)

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Here are some spoilers for chapter 3 of Innocent compiled into an archive: http://www.mediafire.com/?ajarfpj7berj8nw

Or you can view them online here: http://imgur.com/a/FkvcY

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Nanoha and Fate look so adorable in this manga ^^ thanks for sharing~

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Thanks so much, APN. Love how Nanoha & Fate are still all rabu rabu in this series. (The chemistry, the chemistry!) And Alicia is so cute! I really like how they portray her in this series.

I am seriously considering buying CompAce every month now, lol. :)

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So far this manga isn't looking any good. But at least will have something better going than ViVid I hope. It doesn't look so boring, I will give it that to Innocent. Then again I want to read more

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Here's a couple of spoilers for the newest chapter of Innocent that just came out in Japan:
http://www.mediafire.com/?sehrvd335654926

I like the contrast between Dearche's and Alicia's transformations.

http://i.imgur.com/MBG8J.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/obs22.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/cGdem.jpg <- nice one of Stern.
http://i.imgur.com/oSUie.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/o8sox.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/2oHPp.jpg

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Some new details about the Innocent Mobage game.


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Wow putting child Nanoha and Fate in their Force designs and armor... I actually disagree with that.

And Stern and Levi are getting Movie 1st designed Barrier Jackets although Levi doesn't have her skirt which kinds makes her look sexier, I wonder if that is to sorta make her somewhat different then Fate since the Materials are real humans here and they cannot really copy Nanoha, Fate, and Hayate as much as they did in the games.

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Anyone know where (good) raws for Innocent have been posted?
I only caught a link to a download of chapter 3.

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Chapter 02 released:
http://www.mediafire.com/?zfqoeign9saso6v

Man Fate looks gorgeous in this manga. Plus it feels like this manga came straight out of Fate's delusions, Lol.

Fate has happy family with Precia and Alicia? Check.
Nanoha has crush on Fate? Check.
Fate is ranked as one of the two strongest mages in the Innocent game. Check.

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Thank you so much for this. I can't wait to read it.

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Honestly, there's more NanoFate moments in this manga than there is in the series (if that's even possible) LOL

Examples from chapter 2,

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Look at dat blush.

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It's like they're calling to us 8D