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The Legend of the Sword of the Day and the Sword of the Night (Translated Novel)

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Yeah, I know. I translated chapter one too and it took me that ammount of pages. I was just asking because I want to test my english with the edited chapter 1, after all I'll have a big english exam near the end of the year.

So many fanfictions, so little time XD

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Hehe, yeah, I´m writing a long chapters in this story (much longer than the ones in my original novel indeed xD).

Pd: The 23 chapter in spanish is coming ;) (and the story is getting a little darker, I think).

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Even more? Now that is scaring me; kind of making me excited since it means even more epic things are going to happen, but still scary XD

Thanks for the news, Nura. I'll be eagerly waiting for it.

PD: I haven't written a reply about it, but I really love the sidestories, "fairytales" and the like that you use in your story.

So many fanfictions, so little time XD

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Thanks ^^, well, the use of the sidestories is something that "Tolkien taught" me xD, and I think that they are really important in epic fantasy stories, to make a credible and rich world. And, to say the truth, I like write this kind of stuff, miths and legends and old tales told by nannies and grandparents ^^

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Yes i can wait chapter 23 >:3 lol the story is really epic i couldn't stop reading XD

~what happen if nanoha and fate are real~

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Before sleep overtakes me (due to some pills I took) I thought I'd post this for all those who are waiting to see it in english, enjoy! ^,^

Spoiler: Chapter 1
Translation removed for request of the author, more info in this post

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Excellent chapter, so many questions to deepens the plot.

Thanks Nura for the the original work, as well as Captain and the other who work on the English translation !

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Thanks a lot for your work guys, I'll read this chapter later.

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wow,it is just so good,i can't wait to read the next chapter.many thanks for the translation and for Nura to write it. i just wish i could read spanish,i'm so curious how it continues.(sorry for the mistakes,i'm not very good at writing in english)

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Good job on the translations.

Now then... Off to plan my operation:love triangle!

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Thanks to the translation group ^^, you are doing a great work :) And, yeah, this is just the beginning, reading and seeing where the story goes now it surprises me and I am the author xDD

(And, sorry, I need to say it xD, Spain World Cup Champion ^_^)

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Thanks for the translations, your story is getting interesting nura xD

*And hauuuu ;3; I was actually rooting for the Netherlands but oh well Spain's a really good team xD*

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Just wanted to say THANK YOU for the translation! THANKS! ^_^

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also thanks to the editors! without them this wouldn't be posible! XD without them this will be a so literally translation that would be extremly hard to read! so thanks to the team XD!

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'Tis no pro'lem mate, I'm just glad to help out, and I'm sure the same goes for the other few people that work 'ere with us at Fire Team Zero.

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Oh my god, this was EXCELLENT! Very refreshing and I definitely will continue lurking :) Thank you to the author and all translators.

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Yup thanks to original author and of all translators for bringing another chapter of this :)

And a bit off-topic I'm so glad Spain won in the final, I bet on them from the start, and was a little worried after their first match with Switzerland, still that was one of the most ugly finals, match for 3rd place was much better ><

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Hi there,I just want to ask,that do you know about when will come the next chapter?I'm really looking forward to it. Thank you for the hard work and the excellent story.

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[img][/img]please continue :)

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One the readers on FanFiction.net made this fanart of Fate going to her first battle (on the prologue); the Fate on it is really similar to the one I have in mind when I write the story ^^. Here is the link:

http://galadan-arcticwolf.deviantart.com/#/d2xo5vv

The name of the author is Galadan.

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The image looks awesome, specially the armor. Though I would do something about the face... anyways, I would take the one made by Galadan over the one from your Dragon Age character any day xD

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You mean the armors? (I´m half slept at this hour xD), well Tyren´s armor is one of the best heavy armor in the game (the armor of the Comander of the Gray xD). But, yeah, the one made by Galadan is great, I really like the design :D

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No, I was talking about the character's face xD but I'm not saying that yours is ugly... I'm just saying that mine was cuter ^^

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Ah, xDD, ok; well I´m not good with the characters editor :P, so Tyren looks better on my mind than in the game reality xD

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It's a nice fanart, Nura.

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oh wow!!! i can't believe i've never read this story back in June. it was really awesome. there's 22 chapters?? hmm but someone commented on that a few months ago. how many chapters are done now?? and we've only got up to chapter 1 here.

ahh, i can't wait for the next chapter!!

Honulicious

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There are 27 chapters now (26 numbered and the prologue), and if you think this story is awesome with just two chapters, you will be totally amazed with what it follows!

This novel is really one of the best things that I have read, I only hope that it can get translated completely to English. Which make me wonder if the people working in this project is still active? I haven't heard any news about this in a while.

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And the chapter 27 is coming xD, I´ll try to update it before this week ends (no happens "nothing important" in the chapter, but it´s taking me a lot of time to write it :P, mmm... May be, Mass Effect 1 and 2 have the fault xD).

And thanks for your words, Haru ^^.

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*sigh* I really need tah get off me lazy arse and start editing these translated versions again. I'm real sorry team that I haven't been doing that, I'll get on them as soon as possible but I've been busy.

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It's good to know that the project is still going. Good luck with the new chapter, I'll be looking forward to it.