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[Fanfic] My Guardian Angel

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don't worry, I'm sure I have way more embarrassing and awkward moments in my life...for one thing...sports and new languages can bring out many awkward moments

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Alavon!! :D

Thanks for the update! It's nice to read more of My Guardian Angel, I really love that fic, getting some backstory of Fate's past was appreciated ^^ Though I still want to see what happens with the plot in the present time.

Anyway, I hope you enjoy your vacations. One month and a half is a long time, we will miss you.

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Nice update, it's good to have a little bit of backstory of Fate, she seems to have live a sad life before meeting Chrono.

Oh, and I hope you'll have fun during your vacations !

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Thanks for the sort of Fate´s backstory ^^, and it´s a good new to know that the next chapter of "Animal Instics" is on the way :D

Pd: Enjoy your travel to Puerto Rico and have a nice holidays (mmm... I wonder if I will have holidays this year... the bad side of work with my father, I supose x_D).

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Nura wrote:
Thanks for the sort of Fate´s backstory ^^, and it´s a good new to know that the next chapter of "Animal Instics" is on the way :D

Pd: Enjoy your travel to Puerto Rico and have a nice holidays (mmm... I wonder if I will have holidays this year... the bad side of work with my father, I supose x_D).

Thanks! :D I really like this back story. Especially Caro's-

*gets zap by lightning*

langrisser wrote:
Nice update, it's good to have a little bit of backstory of Fate, she seems to have live a sad life before meeting Chrono.

Oh, and I hope you'll have fun during your vacations !

Yeah, this story is basically about how Fate became a Knight so it's not giving too much away. ;) And thank you. I will.

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Alavon!! :D

Thanks for the update! It's nice to read more of My Guardian Angel, I really love that fic, getting some backstory of Fate's past was appreciated ^^ Though I still want to see what happens with the plot in the present time.

Anyway, I hope you enjoy your vacations. One month and a half is a long time, we will miss you.

...

*pout*

Fine, I guess I'll stop writing "Fate's Descent" and just finish Animal Instincts because Chapter 4 of My Guardian Angel is not even close to being finished.

Hmph!

*cries in a corner*

Meanie!

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Alavon wrote:

Thanks! :D I really like this back story. Especially Caro's-

*gets zap by lightning*

That is not fair, Alavon, you put the honey on our lips (as we say in Spain xD, a literal translation :P).

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Nura wrote:

That is not fair, Alavon, you put the honey on our lips (as we say in Spain xD, a literal translation :P).

LOL XD

I really like how this "short" is going. Especially the character that will appear later on. That person will have a lasting impact on Fate's life.

*bow*

Please look forward to it. :3

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I'm a bad girl.

I made many promises and had broken them. I promised two updates and I failed to deliver them. I'm not gonna make any more excuses. But I will say this. There will be updates for Animal Instincts and the MGA: Fate's descent BEFORE the second week of September. I'll work my ass hard until it's done. The weather in Puerto Rico has been lousy and with the internet nearly non-existent, I've been unable to write in my notebook due to lack of motivation...until yesterday. I will do the best I can to continue both fics. They WILL be finished. I have read many fanfics that are epic and are never finish and I don't want to do that to my readers. So, please forgive me and wait just awhile longer for the updates. You will (or at least I hope) not be disappointed. Thank you.

~Alavon

P.S. It's my birthday today... :3

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I'm happy to see that you're back Alavon, we missed you here ;_;
Happy birthday bad girl, I hope you have a nice day and I'll be definitely looking forward to your next updates.

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Nice to see you back Alavon !

Don't worry, we'll patiently wait for your next updates.

And Happy Birthday ! I remember you're a Bastille Day child (although this year's celebration were a tad sad thanks to heavy rain...)

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Welcome back Alavon ^^, and, yeah, we´ll wait your updates with patient, cause I'm sure it will be worthwhile ;)

And Happy Birthday, I hope you had have a good day ^^

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It may be a bit late but Happy Birthday! :D
And I'm happy that you didn't give up Animal Instinct.

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It may be a bit late but Happy Birthday! :D
And I'm happy that you didn't give up Animal Instinct.

Same here.
I hope u have a great b-day.

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Glad to have you back, hope you are enjoying Puerto Rico, take you time and happy birthday to us Bastille Day babies!

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I may be late in saying this, but I just want to wish you a Happy Birthday Alavon, and welcome back as well.

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Thank you guys! :3

Here´s another teaser of MGA: Fate´s Descent.

Spoiler:
I knew very well that if I were to meet the Royal War Councilors of Neo Francaesia, it would be a death sentence. These six men were notoriously famous for giving out death penalties to all those who are enemies of the Kingdom and who do not follow Neo Francaesian law, big or small.

Stole a horse?

Death sentence.

Stole money?

Death sentence.

Stole a tulip?

Death sentence.

And to add to their reputation, women and children were not exempted from their cruel grasps.

So in other words, I am utterly screwed.

Upon entering the tent of the Royal Court, the first thing that caught my attention was that it looked much bigger than it appeared outside. Just to look up at the decorated ¨ceiling¨ I had to craned my neck to see it all. Gold and garnet tapestries draped the tent elegantly that glowed with burning tangerine hue due to the roaring fire lined around on limestone pillars. Ignoring the fact that inside was packed with whispering and staring people I could care less about, what I could not ignore were the six men seated on silver thrones with a single vacant golden throne seperating the men equally. For them to even get to their seats, they have to climb ten polished steps that led to a smooth rectangular marble surfcace, a symbolic message that was not hard to miss.

Linith had taught me much about Neo Francaesian history, even its politics. There are three Royal Factions within the Neo Francaesian government. The Golden Faction is made up of the Royal family and have total control over the Kingdom. Next came the Silver Faction and is made up entirely of Nobles with blood connections to the Royal family. They have semi-control over military matters and depending on which family branchs, are Protectors of the Law. Of course, only six Nobles from this so-called ¨prestige¨can ever become a War Counciler. They earned that right by shedding and spilling blood. And finally, the Bronze Faction which administers Public Affairs and reports directky to the Golden Faction. This Faction is made up of lesser Nobles. Knowing all of this however, is not going to help me in the slightest. On the contrary, it only reinforces the idea that I really am screwed.

Thank you very much, Linith.

And finally, a teaser from Animal Instincts, Chapter 6: Her Romeo and His Juliet.

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There was no denying it.

How can I?

My heart had been taking that day and that was all there is to it. As soon as our eyes locked, I knew I had found the one. His smile made me be at ease. His voice was a welcoming melody that uplifted my soul from the depth of darkness. He was my prince Charming, ready to sweep me from my feet. His emerald eyes only saw me and for the first time in my life, I was willing to give up my family name, the very name my father had worked so hard to maintain in the corporate world.

I was in love.

I was in love with Yuuno Scrya.

I was in love with the son of the man who wishes to destroy my family.

He wasn´t just my prince Charming...he was also my Romeo.

And I...was his Juliet.

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Thanks for the teasers, Alavon !

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Thanks for the little previews Alavon, My Guardian Angel looks very promising (by the way, are you going to change the title of this fic?), I really love this fic.
And about Animal Instincts, I have a bad feeling about that preview, but I'll wait for the chapter.

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ooh i don't know about animal instincts...did nanoha get brainwashed or something?? is fate just going to let that happen? i can't believe nanoha thinks he is her romeo!! NOOOOO

anyway, the other story looks good too. i hope u update soon ;P

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Hi everyone!

Sorry for the lateness but Animal Instincts Chapter 6: Her Romeo, His Juliet is finished! XD

Right now, I am waiting for my beta to edit it before launching it on ff.net so please expect the latest update in a few days. Finishing this chapter took a lot of toll (this chapter I just finished is actually version 4!!!!! DX) and if it weren't for my sudden urge to see Triangle Heart: Sweet Songs Forever, I would never have finished it on time (I don't know about anyone else but I'm a huge Miyuki fan girl now... :/). This chapter was really hard to write since I just ventured into a zone of no return and the topic itself is something I don't like to write. In the end, I was able to clean it up real well much to my surprise.

Because of the content, I think I might have to move the rating up to "M" but I'm not so sure so please forgive me if anyone finds it offensive. I hope that the ending to the chapter would at least make up for it (I almost cried...). And no, it's not the ending...a few more chapters to go. :3

So...yeah...I'm back and I'm sorry for taking so **** long.

*nervous laughter*

P.S. I was listening to these three songs while writing chapter 6.

1. Trust your Truth ~ Sweet Songs Forever (by KOTOKO)
2. Take it Off ~ (by Ke$ha) = You can probably guess where I used this song at... :/ =
3. Harmony ~ Origins: Spirits of the Past (By Kokia)

Oh! One last thing. I will first finish Animal Instincts before moving on with My Guardian Angel. I don't want to keep you guys waiting so long again so I will finish one fic before going on to the other.

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I can't wait! I instinctively know that it will be good ^w^

NanoFate fans please don't send me hate mail... I promise to turn back into a ferret and leave Nanoha (and her waifu) alone XD

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Nice Alavon, I'll be looking forward to the next update then. Though I'll miss "My Guardian Angel" a lot, so far that fic was pretty awesome and epic, I really loved the characters and the setting.

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It seems chap.6 was a nighmare to write.
I have a few vague ideas of the topic that'll be in it, and I'm curious to see what'll happen.

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I'm looking forward to chapter 6 ^^
Animal Instinct is such a great fic

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Hi Alavon!! I'm so excited for this new chapter of Animal Instincts ^w^
I can't wait for it to come out, the suspense is already killing me. I loved all the previous chapters, but because of the wait I feel really giddy

*cries in corner from all the excitement*

:3

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*evil laughter*

@Yuuno: I guess you meant it with a pun? *wink*

@ A. Sorry "A." but I want to finish Animal Instincts before going to My Guardian Angel. It takes a lot of time and I don't want to leave so many readers hanging again for months. I will try to finish My Guardian Angel: Fate's Descent before Animal Instincts is finished. :)

@langisser: Your guesses are probably right. *nervous laughter* And it WAS a nightmare to write....

@Your Fan:Thank you so much! *bows*

@Miyuki: :3 *HUGS* You don't have to wait for long....

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finally! more Animal Instincts!

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@Alavon: Thanks!! *BIG RETURN HUG & little kiss on cheek* I hope you start writing more again, I've missed your works big time!! :3

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Animal Instincts: EDITED!

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Alavon wrote:
Animal Instincts: EDITED!

Yay! *happy dance*
I love A.I! <3