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[Fanfic] My Guardian Angel

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Animal Instincts Chapter 6: Her Romeo, His Juliet updated on ff.net!

Because I just uploaded it, 30 minutes have to pass before anyone can read it.

But....

I DO have the link....

*evil laughter*

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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5451815/7/Animal_Instincts

Animal Instincts Chapter 6: Her Romeo, His Juliet UPDATED!

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After reading it, I fully understand why it was a nightmare for you to write this chapter, and it was exactly the topic I thought. You need a lot of courage writing that. Like Fate, I was on the verge of throwing up due to the schock of learning what happened to Nanoha (the last time something I read schocked me enough to makes me want to throw up, I was reading an article on chinese dismemberment execution, and it was the accompanying pics that did the trick).
You're one hell of a writer Alavon ! ;3

Nanoha had it very bad, I truly feel sorry for her, and what Fate did to Nanoha at the end of the chapter, while it was very simple and modest, was very touching and powerful, and it's probably because it was such a simple and humble act that it was so powerful.

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*continues to cry uncontrollably*

The wait was worth it!!! :3

Alavon your so amazing!!! but I could use some more tissues if you plan to make the next chapter that emotionally intense!! poor Nanoha.....TwT

*kisses for your great work* it was sooooooooooo worth the wait XDD

~Miyuki

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Alavon, when can we expect a chapter 7??? Gosh..... I wish I was part of your beta-team....... but a girl can dream right? :3

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Heh...well, I don't want to get anyone's hope up but it will come out soon. And only two people know the date. You just have to wait and see. ^^ But expect a nice chapter...for the most part.

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YAY!!!!!!!!!!!! :3

..... why not three? hehe :3 you can always tell me the date...

*waits patiently like a good girl* :3

I lied....

I'm going to invent a time machine and go forward in time to read this

*attempts to design and build a time machine*

.... I guess I can't make a time machine to read your story.... so I'll have to wait and see like you said.... TwT

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I hope it's soon. You ended the last chapter in the best part ;_;

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more Animal Instincts!

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more Guardian angel !!! ><
LOVE IT VERY MUCH !! thanks for uploading :D

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Please update by the deadline or we will be very....... displeased.
lets just leave it at that ok?

Full power to weapons and engines! Lets bring it on!

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Please update on time i want to find out what happens to me.

I want to befriend you :D

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How's chapter 7 of Animal Instincts coming along Alavon?

*patiently waits*

I hope it comes out soon!! :3

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Spoiler:
Animal Instincts

By:
Alavon

Chapter 7:

x~X~x


I wasn't much of a church person, even during my childhood. When face with the reality that your own mother despises you at six years-old, God doesn't seem all that comforting. If you're own mother doesn't show you affection, what made God any special? Losing my father and older twin sister at a young age only deepened the strife between mother and I. So, in the end, I concluded there was no God....and life continued on.

Just as always.

But...there was something in the back of my mind that told me that there was a place called Hell. A place where suffering was imminent and misery was the only emotion allowed to ravish my soulless body. I believed that there was no God but the existence of hell was undeniable. After all, I've been living in hell since the first day I was born.

That was how I lived my life. I lived for the sake of living. After all, when you don't believe in a deity and yet embrace the notion of a place called Hell, what else can life throw at you?

Yes, life went on without a hitch, without a promise of a new beginning....

Until I met her.

Nanoha Takamachi.

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Tired....sneak peek...yeah...*groan*

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Thanks for the little preview Alavon! It's nice to see more of this story and from you here ^^
The chapter is looking promising, I hope we can read it soon~

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Thanks for the sneak peek Alavon !

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yay, finally we gonna know Fate's past! please write quickly!

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Wow! This is definitely one of the best out there.
Alavon Banzai!

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Animal Instincts Chapter 7: Flame of the West has been uploaded!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5451815/8/Animal_Instincts

Uh...sorry for the lateness...? Heh, heh...?

So...I have already asked this but I'll ask again.

Which story I should work on next?

Animal Instincts? (faster updates and is almost done)

My Guardian Angel? (slower updates and not even CLOSE to being done)

or (Side-Story) My Guardian Angel: Fate's Descent? (Equally long wait but can be written along with Animal Instincts)

So far...

Animal Instincts: 3

My Guardian Angel: 0

My Guardian Angel: Fate's Descent (Side-Story): 0

And thanks to all the readers who enjoy my stories! :D

Again, I'm so sorry for disappearing. :(

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Alavon!!! You haven't posted my drawing on your FF.net profile. >:T
And... what's with this chi thingy? XD
It suddenly drifted away from what I knew XD
Anyway, great chapter~

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About time? @_@; OTL personally I need to update my fics too orz

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There's a new batch of questions in this chapter.
Signum scares me quite a bit, wonder what Fate could have done to earn her hatred, I also wonder about who's the "lamb", and what's Hayate's plan.
On the other hand, the scene with Fate and Nanoha were sweet and touching, Fate seems to enjoy caring about the baby with Nanoha. :3

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@Titi: Uh...yeah...well...um...all shall be revealed... *flees*

And I DIDN'T?! I need to change that!

@langrisser: *evil laughter* And I enjoyed writing those Nanoha and Fate scenes. :3

@Sigurd: lol Yeah, I'm kinda late...and don't we all... -_- *sigh*

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You better be quick about it XD

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welcome back Alavon! Great to have you back

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Finished reading both your Guardian Angel and Animal Instincts story not too long ago and I enjoyed it immensely.

The last chapter was great, impending war, Signum training Fate (maybe?), the lovely interactions between Fate and Nanoha, and the introduction of Fate's love rival.

Keep up the great work Alavon.

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Hey, happy birthday and hope you can update your stories soon!

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Whoa! I'm surprised someone knows my birthday! Thanks! And I'm finishing up chapter 9 of Animal Instincts. Only three more to go before continuing with "My Guardian Angel". :3

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I'll be looking forward to Animal Instincts! :D
I've missed your fics, Avalon.

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I don't have finish reading The Fanfic yet but I see you're french is quite good ! Well If you need to write somethinks in French ask me, I'm french lol.
Other thinks I love your fanfic :o :D